!!!..Jhuthi koshish..!!!

by nashwani on August 18, 2013, 07:17:49 AM
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Khayal aaya, jab raah takte takte shaam hui,,
Nirash tha din, shaam na kabhi apni aam hui..

Na hua unka deedar, na aye wo nazar to kya,,
Shakal-e-chand se hamari bate.N tamaam hui..

Na koi fariyad ki, na kuchh mang hi paya usse,,
Phir bhi jaise wo khuda ka hi dusra naam hui..

Mila karti hogi mohabbat aasani se kisi kisi ko,,
Iss gareeb ke liye, alishan makaan ke daam hui..

Socha unko zindagi ke beete har pal me hamne,,
Unko bhoolne ki har jhuthi koshish nakaam hui..!!! Ñ
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«Reply #1 on: August 18, 2013, 07:33:56 AM »
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बहुत खूबसूरती से लिखे गए हैं आपके अल्फाज.. हमें पसंद आये नास्वानी जी.. यु ही लिखते रहे.. Applause
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«Reply #2 on: August 18, 2013, 07:39:39 AM »
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बहुत खूबसूरती से लिखे गए हैं आपके अल्फाज.. हमें पसंद आये नास्वानी जी.. यु ही लिखते रहे.. Applause

Pasand karne ka shukriya rishi jee..happy9
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«Reply #3 on: August 18, 2013, 08:32:36 AM »
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wha wha wha bhut khub
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«Reply #4 on: August 18, 2013, 08:51:49 AM »
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wha wha wha bhut khub

Bahut shukriya rajan jee..happy9
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«Reply #5 on: August 18, 2013, 02:27:25 PM »
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bahut sunder
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«Reply #6 on: August 18, 2013, 04:29:27 PM »
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bahut khub bahut badhiya lajwab bhai
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«Reply #7 on: August 18, 2013, 06:07:03 PM »
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 Applause Applause Applause Applause
bahot hi zada badiya........sasdgi s bharpooor...
vry beautiful too...............
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«Reply #8 on: August 18, 2013, 06:21:16 PM »
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wah wah
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«Reply #9 on: August 18, 2013, 11:30:52 PM »
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«Reply #10 on: August 19, 2013, 03:46:01 AM »
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Thankyou ! all of u 4 ur valuable time n comments..happy9
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«Reply #11 on: August 19, 2013, 10:23:26 PM »
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kya baat hai .. bahut khoob ashwani ji.. Usual Smile

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«Reply #12 on: August 19, 2013, 10:39:59 PM »
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