<>*Kabhi inaam banker, kabhi iljaam banker<>*

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<>*Kabhi inaam banker, kabhi iljaam banker<>*


Meri chahat tujhe mili hai, kai naam badalkar
Kabhi inaam banker, kabhi iljaam banker

Mera chehra nazar me saja hai kai rang badalkar
Kabhi dard ki raat, kabhi gumsum shaam banker

Mera ishq tujhe mila hai, kai karwat badalkar
Pyaar ki barsaat, kabhi tanhai ka aalam banker

Mera pyaar tujhe mila hai kai surat badalkar
Baahon ka haar, kabhi maut ki maatam banker…!!!

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«Reply #1 on: January 11, 2011, 05:08:35 PM »
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«Reply #2 on: January 11, 2011, 05:12:57 PM »
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kyun no comment KB kya ho gaya..??

aur wo post pe maine txt add kar diya aap padh  sakte hain ab
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«Reply #3 on: January 11, 2011, 05:14:10 PM »
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wah wah kasakji...khub Applause Applause
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«Reply #4 on: January 11, 2011, 05:20:59 PM »
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<>*Kabhi inaam banker, kabhi iljaam banker<>*


Meri chahat tujhe mili hai, kai naam badalkar
Kabhi inaam banker, kabhi iljaam banker

Mera chehra nazar me saja hai kai rang badalkar
Kabhi dard ki raat, kabhi gumsum shaam banker

Mera ishq tujhe mila hai, kai karwat badalkar
Pyaar ki barsaat, kabhi tanhai ka aalam banker

Mera pyaar tujhe mila hai kai surat badalkar
Baahon ka haar, kabhi maut ki maatam banker…!!!

Maaf kijiyega kasak ji apki ye rachna padhke bahut dukh hua mujhe..aap bahut umda likhti hai per iss tarah k nirasha janak shabd apki kavita mein padhne ko mile mujhe kuch ajeeb se laga...waise likha apne khoob hai...
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«Reply #5 on: January 11, 2011, 05:52:07 PM »
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bht bht khoob di....
specially 1st one...
outstanding....
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«Reply #6 on: January 12, 2011, 12:19:54 AM »
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no comnt issliye ki---
iss behtareen kalaam  me kahne ko kuch hai hi nahi.
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no comnt issliye ki---
iss behtareen kalaam  me kahne ko kuch hai hi nahi.
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«Reply #8 on: January 12, 2011, 12:41:06 AM »
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Kasak Jee Aadaab!

Kia khub khayaal pesh kiye hai aapne daad..
Kafi nayaa andaaz raha aapka... aur aapne
bayaaN bhi behad khoob kiya hai...

Dil se daad hazir hai kabool kijiye....

Likhati rahiye.....
Khush O aabaad rahiye...
Khuda Hafez......         



Aik shaam tere naam kar jauNga
MaiN hi maiN har su nazar aauNga         


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«Reply #9 on: January 12, 2011, 01:37:46 PM »
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K mam kya baat hai ji wah.
mohabbat bhi aur Judai bhi wo bhi ek hi rachna me Good ji good.
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kabhi inaam bankar kabhi ilzaam ban kar
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badhiya hai par end kuch jada hi saddi ho gaya sad5.
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kabhi ilzaam bankar kabhi inaam bankar
   kabhi toofan bankar kabhi sahilon ka sailaab bankar
kabhi gul bankar kabhi gulzaar bankar
   paya hai maine tujhe
kabhi Raam bankar kabhi Shaam bankar
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Usual SmileUsual SmileUsual Smile
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sorry don mind haan.
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thanx
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«Reply #10 on: January 12, 2011, 06:27:55 PM »
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<>*Kabhi inaam banker, kabhi iljaam banker<>*


Meri chahat tujhe mili hai, kai naam badalkar
Kabhi inaam banker, kabhi iljaam banker

Mera chehra nazar me saja hai kai rang badalkar
Kabhi dard ki raat, kabhi gumsum shaam banker

Mera ishq tujhe mila hai, kai karwat badalkar
Pyaar ki barsaat, kabhi tanhai ka aalam banker

Mera pyaar tujhe mila hai kai surat badalkar
Baahon ka haar, kabhi maut ki maatam banker…!!!


acha hai KDK
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«Reply #11 on: January 13, 2011, 02:32:46 AM »
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kya baat hai kasak ji bahut khubsurat...

har chehra mein tujhe paaya ki tujhsa har chehra hai
koi aur soorat nazar nahi aati tera pyaar itna gehra hai... !

Intezar !
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«Reply #12 on: January 13, 2011, 02:46:07 PM »
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Kasak Ji Bahut Hi Sundar Aur Dukh Dard Bhara likha hai apne nice creation
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«Reply #13 on: January 14, 2011, 12:22:15 PM »
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wah wah kasakji...khub Applause Applause
bht bht khoob di....
specially 1st one...
outstanding....
acha hai KDK
Kasak Ji Bahut Hi Sundar Aur Dukh Dard Bhara likha hai apne nice creation
shukriya aap sabka k meri ek koshish ko itna saraha aur pasand kiya..
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«Reply #14 on: January 14, 2011, 12:46:14 PM »
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VERY NICE KASAK JI
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