~Kabhi main bacha tha jee~ by Rahim

by dead heart on August 09, 2010, 01:43:20 PM
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Main toh sirf 18 saal ka hoon aur apna bachpan yaad karke ro padta hoon toh najane unn tamam ko bachpan kitna yaad ata hoga jo mujse kayi zada umr main bade hai..Yeh kalam unn tamam kay naam jo umr main bahaut bade hai mager rehte aj bhi unn zindagi kay shuruwati saalon main hai..
Main wakei ro padta hoon aur sochta hoon kyun woh dinn laut nahin sakte.. tearyeyed
Itna acha nahin likh paya mager dil se likha hai..

Ek gana 'dil toh bacha hai jee' se inspired hoke 'kabhi main bacha tha jee'


Kabhi main bhi bacha tha jee,
Zindagi ko mast hoke jeeya karta tha jee..

Aj yehi soch satati hai kay kal kya karunga,
Kaise paise kamaunga; kaise ghar chalaunga,
Kaise apni santan ko agey badaunga,
Kabhi main bhi bacha tha jee,
Zindagi ko mast hoke jeeya karta tha jee..

Apni class ko dekh kehta hoon ‘main yahan baitha karta tha’,
Ground ko dekh kehta hoon ‘yahan main cricket khela karta tha’,
Students ko dekh kehta hoon ‘yehi uniform main bhi pehna karta tha’,
Kabhi main bhi bacha tha jee,
Zindagi ko mast hoke jeeya karta tha jee..

Dinn kab zamane bangaye pata hi nahin chala,
Hum kab bade hogaye pata hi nahin chala,
Ab toh bas unn dinon ki yaadein rehgayi jo rula deti hai,
Kabhi main bhi bacha tha jee,
Zindagi ko mast hoke jeeya karta tha jee..

Kash main woh waqt main dobara laut sakta,
Ek masoom nadan ki zindagi dobara jee sakta,
Mager ateet ka hona ek kadva wusul hai zindagi ka ‘Khamosh’,
Kabhi main bhi bacha tha jee,
Zindagi ko mast hoke jeeya karta tha jee..

Kabhi main bhi bacha tha jee,
Zindagi ko mast hoke jeeya karta tha jee..

~Rahim~
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«Reply #1 on: August 09, 2010, 02:11:17 PM »
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Sach kahaa mere bhai...


Kabhi main bhi bacha tha jee,
Zindagi ko mast hoke jeeya karta tha jee..


bahut hi pyaare shabdon mein, bahut hi saadgi ke saath aapne zindagi ke sachchai ko bayaan kiya hai... bahut sundar kavita likhi hai aapne dost... sach wo din hi kuch aur the... mann karta hai kabhi kabhi kash hum laut ke jaa paate un dino mein... waah dost waah... dil ko chhoo gayi aapki ye kavita... bahut bahut khoooooooob.... !!! Usual Smile
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«Reply #2 on: August 09, 2010, 02:16:27 PM »
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Shukriya Kapil Dost..teh dil se shukriya..Haan hum sab insaan alag hai aur humare jazbaat alag hai mager bachpan ka lautna aur yaadein aisa jazba hai, ehsaas hai jo shayad sab main hai..!
Shukriya!
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«Reply #3 on: August 09, 2010, 02:23:21 PM »
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its to good rahim ji... icon_thumleft

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«Reply #4 on: August 09, 2010, 02:25:09 PM »
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Rahim ji aapne to bachapan ki yaad dila di yaara.... very nice  Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #5 on: August 09, 2010, 03:42:49 PM »
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Shukriya Rancho jee aur Thinkhattk jee..!
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«Reply #6 on: August 09, 2010, 03:48:10 PM »
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Waah Waah waah!!!

Bhai rahim , dil ko chuu jaane wale jazbaat pesh kiye hai aapne..vaakai yehi zindagi ka sabse bada sach hai ke guzra Hua daur, Guzra Hua Bachpan kabhi lautkar Nahi Aata..Kuch yaadein,Kuch nishaaniyan Saath rehte Hai..

Lajawaab mere Bhai. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #7 on: August 09, 2010, 07:38:48 PM »
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Shukriya Khwaish Dost..Apka daad dena bahaut ehmiat rakhta hai..!
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«Reply #8 on: August 09, 2010, 11:46:04 PM »
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Kabhi main bhi bacha tha jee,
Zindagi ko mast hoke jeeya karta tha jee..

Aj yehi soch satati hai kay kal kya karunga,
Kaise paise kamaunga; kaise ghar chalaunga,
Kaise apni santan ko agey badaunga,
Kabhi main bhi bacha tha jee,
Zindagi ko mast hoke jeeya karta tha jee..

Apni class ko dekh kehta hoon ‘main yahan baitha karta tha’,
Ground ko dekh kehta hoon ‘yahan main cricket khela karta tha’,
Students ko dekh kehta hoon ‘yehi uniform main bhi pehna karta tha’,
Kabhi main bhi bacha tha jee,
Zindagi ko mast hoke jeeya karta tha jee..

Dinn kab zamane bangaye pata hi nahin chala,
Hum kab bade hogaye pata hi nahin chala,
Ab toh bas unn dinon ki yaadein rehgayi jo rula deti hai,
Kabhi main bhi bacha tha jee,
Zindagi ko mast hoke jeeya karta tha jee..

Kash main woh waqt main dobara laut sakta,
Ek masoom nadan ki zindagi dobara jee sakta,
Mager ateet ka hona ek kadva wusul hai zindagi ka ‘Khamosh’,
Kabhi main bhi bacha tha jee,
Zindagi ko mast hoke jeeya karta tha jee..

Kabhi main bhi bacha tha jee,
Zindagi ko mast hoke jeeya karta tha jee..

~Rahim~
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Very Very Impressive Creation...RAhim Ji ! Awesome !!!
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«Reply #9 on: August 10, 2010, 11:39:02 AM »
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Shukriya Naresh jee..teh dil se shukriya.!
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«Reply #10 on: August 27, 2011, 03:36:34 AM »
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wah wah Rahim sahab--bht achhi post--
bachpan ki yaad aa gai aaj.

lekin bhai bachpan ko yad krke roya nhi jata na--wo to khus hone ka naam hai-- Usual Smile

aur har umar ki apni ahmiyat hai-- hum aaj bhi chahe jitne bade ho jayen lekin apne saman wale age group me to bachche hi hain tongue3

at least mai to hoon-- Usual Smile

bht bht daad aapki iss kavita ko
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«Reply #11 on: August 30, 2011, 07:19:19 PM »
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Teh teh dil se shukriya Dost..
Haan kisi bhi umar kay ho, bache hi hai hum..
Shukriya..
Saath dete rahiyega..
Khush rahiye..!
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