.......kaeerb aayegi yeh zindagi

by kosar17 on June 13, 2012, 08:20:33 AM
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Un raasto ko na jaane kahan bhool aaye jahan kabhi mila karti thi zindagi,
Un manzilo ka pata na jaane kahan bhool aaye jahan kabhi muskarati thi zindagi,
Aaj jab piche mud kar dekhte hain tab bas yahi khayal aata hai,
Kya phir se kabhi itni kareeb aayegi yeh zindagi.
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«Reply #1 on: June 13, 2012, 09:23:11 AM »
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bahut khoob
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«Reply #2 on: June 13, 2012, 01:57:04 PM »
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Applause Applause Applause  WOW Kosar ji...!!! Beautiful composition. bahut bahut khoob likha hai aapne... and welcome to Yoindia...!!!
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«Reply #3 on: June 13, 2012, 04:42:12 PM »
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thanx a lot for appreciating my words.....it maeans a lot.... happy3
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«Reply #4 on: June 13, 2012, 04:56:30 PM »
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Applause Applause Applause bohot khoob kaha jnab
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«Reply #5 on: June 13, 2012, 05:26:50 PM »
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bahut b adhiya kosar ji......dhero daad aur ek rau bhi ..aise hi aate rahiye likhte rahiye........ Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #6 on: June 13, 2012, 06:28:29 PM »
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Un raasto ko na jaane kahan bhool aaye jahan kabhi mila karti thi zindagi,
Un manzilo ka pata na jaane kahan bhool aaye jahan kabhi muskarati thi zindagi,
Aaj jab piche mud kar dekhte hain tab bas yahi khayal aata hai,
Kya phir se kabhi itni kareeb aayegi yeh zindagi.

NAAAAAAAAAAAAAAICE
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«Reply #7 on: June 17, 2012, 10:11:22 AM »
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Un raasto ko na jaane kahan bhool aaye jahan kabhi mila karti thi zindagi,
Un manzilo ka pata na jaane kahan bhool aaye jahan kabhi muskarati thi zindagi,
Aaj jab piche mud kar dekhte hain tab bas yahi khayal aata hai,
Kya phir se kabhi itni kareeb aayegi yeh zindagi.

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«Reply #8 on: July 06, 2012, 11:47:48 AM »
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thanx a lot guys....@maqbool shayar,@khamosh_awaaz,@adil bechain, @saudagar,@roy. Usual Smile happy3 happy3 happy3 happy3 happy3
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«Reply #9 on: January 10, 2013, 04:55:36 PM »
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Wah wah very nice creation kosar ji. Congrat.
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«Reply #10 on: January 10, 2013, 05:17:33 PM »
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Wah wah very nice creation kosar ji. Congrat.
thanx a lot dear......Usual Smile
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