**Kaisi hogayi hai yeh zindagi meri tujh bin** by Rahim

by dead heart on April 07, 2010, 09:40:20 PM
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Bahaut koshish ki maine mager ab main muskurata nahin,
Tere bin ab mujse jeeya jata nahin,
Tadap kar rota rehta hoon har roz main,
Tujh bin mera yeh dil khushi se dhadakta bhi nahin,
Kaisi hogayi hai yeh zindagi meri tujh bin…

Kabhi teri baahon main khud ko dekha karte the,
Aj teri ek nazar ko taras gayi hai nigahein meri,
Kabhi teri zuban se ‘I love you’ suna karte the,
Aj kal toh tu mera haal tak puchna bhool jata hai,
Kaisi hogayi hai yeh zindagi meri tujh bin…

Ek waqt tha jab khushion ki barsaat thi,
Ab ashkon ki nadian behti hai,
Ek waqt tha jab dil mohobat ke geet gata tha,
Ab itna pathar ban chuka hai ke koi ehsaas nahin raha,
Kaisi hogayi hai yeh zindagi meri tujh bin…

Jo tha mere dil ka haqdaar,
Wohi dil ko marne(not to kill but to die) ki wajah degaya,
Jisne zindagi ko jeena seekhaya tha,
Wohi usse torrne ka kam kargaya,
Kaisi hogayi hai yeh zindagi meri tujh bin…
Bas bahaut ghum hai aj kal zindagi main meri,
‘Rahim’ uss ke bina bahaut adhura sa lagta hai,
Aj koi khwahish baki nahin mujh main,
Sivae iske ke who ta-umr khush rahe,
Main toh ek dinn haste haste laut jaunga Allah ke paas,
Mager wakei dukh hota hai,
Ke zindagi main uss jaisi pari ko na paa saka,
Bahaut dukh hota hai mujhe,
Kaisi thi zindagi uske saath ke saath,
Aj tassawur karne layak nahin hai uske bina,
Bas bahaut dukh hota hai mujhe,
Wakei,
Kaisi hogayi hai yeh zindagi meri tujh bin…



~Rahim~

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«Reply #1 on: April 08, 2010, 04:30:37 AM »
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Wah wah Rahim bhai bahut dard aur khoobsurti se likha aapne.mindblowing creation Hats off to you! Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause icon_thumleft
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«Reply #2 on: April 08, 2010, 09:24:13 AM »
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Bahut khoob Rahim Ji
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«Reply #3 on: April 08, 2010, 11:48:01 AM »
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Shukriya Madhu di aur Rajesh jee
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«Reply #4 on: April 08, 2010, 12:39:31 PM »
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Bahut Bahut Khoob Bhai Rahim  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #5 on: April 08, 2010, 12:50:27 PM »
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Shukriya Khwahish jee...Bahaut shukriya!
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«Reply #6 on: April 08, 2010, 12:59:22 PM »
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kya Baat Hai Rahim Bhai.. Bahut Hi Khubsoorat Rachna Pesh Ki hai aapne.. Bahut Hi Umda Peshkash.. Bahut Khooooob.. Applause Applause



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«Reply #7 on: April 08, 2010, 01:00:00 PM »
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Bahut hi khoobsurat kavita likhi hai aapne Rahim bhai... Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

ek ek shabd me dard bhara hua hai... aapke dard ko main mehsoos to nahi kar sakta par haan dard mujhe bhi ho raha hai isko padhke... main aapse bas kuch kehna chahunga... ye kavita aapke kavita ko padhte hi flow me ban gaya mujhse.. pata nahi aapko pasand bhi aayegi ya nahi...

kisi k yaadon ko yun yaad kiya nahi karte,
jo chhod gaye unke ghum me jiya nahi karte,
aaj raat andheri hai to kya hai savera dur nahi,
is tarah khud pe zulam kiya nahi karte,

pal bhar ki khsuhiyaan deke wo chala gaya humse dur,
jo kar gaya hamare khwaabon ko chaknachur,
ek roz unko bhi hamari yaad tadpayegi,
us din wo bhi khoob royegi,

kehte hain hum aapse ki bhool jao saare ghamon ko,
ye bhi kehte hain ki bhool jao un yaadon ko,
ro ro k q kar rahe ho apna haal behaal,
bhool jao un guzre zamano ko,

maloom hai mujhe kehna aasaan aur karna mushkil hota hai,
dil jiska tut ta hai wo har ghadi rota hai,
hum to bas keh sakte hain ki na ho udaas tum,
par hume kya pata ki tumhe dard kitna hota hai,

duwa karenge ki jald hi tumhaari muskaan laut aaye,
tumhaari zindagi me bhi sachchi mohabbat aaye,
yun bewafai me fir kisi ka dil na tute,
har koi jahaan me bas khushiyaan hi paaye....
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«Reply #8 on: April 08, 2010, 01:03:01 PM »
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Bahaut bahaut shukriya Vikas bhaijan, Shihab bhaijan aur Kapil dost..

Kapil dost aap kuch likho aur hume pasand na aye, aisa ho nahin sakta...Bahaut ache dost!!
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«Reply #9 on: April 08, 2010, 01:15:25 PM »
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Shukriya Rahim bhai...!!!

Bahaut bahaut shukriya Vikas bhaijan, Shihab bhaijan aur Kapil dost..

Kapil dost aap kuch likho aur hume pasand na aye, aisa ho nahin sakta...Bahaut ache dost!!
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«Reply #10 on: April 08, 2010, 11:01:34 PM »
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Very nyc creation..
But very painful 2...
Bhut dard hai ismain ... anybody can feel itna acha likha hai apne..

& kapil ji myndblowing ....
too Gud !!!!!!!!!!!!!

Thnx a lot..........
God Bless u !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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«Reply #11 on: April 09, 2010, 12:03:08 PM »
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Shukriya Neel jee.Bahaut bahaut shukriya!
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«Reply #12 on: April 09, 2010, 12:09:44 PM »
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Bahut bahut shukriya Neel...many many thanx...!!!

Very nyc creation..
But very painful 2...
Bhut dard hai ismain ... anybody can feel itna acha likha hai apne..

& kapil ji myndblowing ....
too Gud !!!!!!!!!!!!!

Thnx a lot..........
God Bless u !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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