~*~ Kaisi Zindagi Dekhi ~*~ by Rahim

by dead heart on August 30, 2011, 07:55:31 PM
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Ghum main jeeye hum sada,
Aisi bhi kaisi zindagi dekhi..

Bhooke rehkar dusron ka pet bhara,
Karte kisi ko humne, aisi bhi bandagi dekhi..

Jab dekha usne meri ankhon main nami ko,
Thorri uski ankhon main bhi, sharmindagi dekhi..

Ghar chamak kar mahel lag rahe the jinke yahan,
Dilon main unki humne behad gandagi dekhi..

Jism mano aj ek awami tamasha bangaya hai,
Shauk se dikhati hai aj kal ki larrki isse,
Khuda ki duniya main, haye yeh kaisi be-pardigi dekhi..

Askhon main rehkar bhi jee li ‘Khamosh’ ne zindagi,
Zindagi ne mager khud pucha, aisi bhi kaisi zindagi dekhi..

~..Rahim..~..A Silent Heart..~
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«Reply #1 on: August 30, 2011, 08:06:28 PM »
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Rahim Sahab,

Waah waah kya haqeeqat bayani
kee hai....

Dili daad kubool farmaaayen saath
hi Eid ki Mubarakbaad bhee.

Satish Shukla 'Raqeeb'

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«Reply #2 on: August 30, 2011, 08:11:32 PM »
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Rahim Sahaab Aadaab!

Janab kia khoob khayaal kaheN hai aapne... Usual Smile
Sabhi ashaar bhi behad khoob rahe.. Usual Smile

Kafi achche aur gehre ahsaas kahe hai aapne Usual Smile
Dili daad O mubarakbad kabul kijiye Usual Smile

Likhate rahiye... Aate rahiye.. Usual Smile
Khush O aabaad rahiye.. Usual Smile
Khuda Hafez Usual Smile         

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«Reply #3 on: August 31, 2011, 10:48:50 AM »
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Rahim Sahab,

Waah waah kya haqeeqat bayani
kee hai....

Dili daad kubool farmaaayen saath
hi Eid ki Mubarakbaad bhee.

Satish Shukla 'Raqeeb'


Teh teh dil se shukriya Satish jee..
Bas yunhi saath dete rahiyega..
Eid Mubarak apko bhi..
Khush rahiye..!
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«Reply #4 on: August 31, 2011, 10:58:02 AM »
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Rahim Sahaab Aadaab!

Janab kia khoob khayaal kaheN hai aapne... Usual Smile
Sabhi ashaar bhi behad khoob rahe.. Usual Smile

Kafi achche aur gehre ahsaas kahe hai aapne Usual Smile
Dili daad O mubarakbad kabul kijiye Usual Smile

Likhate rahiye... Aate rahiye.. Usual Smile
Khush O aabaad rahiye.. Usual Smile
Khuda Hafez Usual Smile         


Teh teh dil se shukriya Parwaaz jee..
Eid mubarak apko..
Khush rahiye..!
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«Reply #5 on: August 31, 2011, 11:30:56 AM »
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Rahim ji as usual aapki peshkash shaandaar aur jaandaar hai.
bahut khoob.
 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Tumhari kitni hi rachnayen humne pasandki dekhi.
lafzon mein gehrai saagar si nahin samandar si dekhi.
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«Reply #6 on: August 31, 2011, 11:36:58 AM »
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wah Rahim sahab --baht achi peshkash aapki--
baht gahre vichaaron ko alfaazon se nawaza hai aapne--
daad bahut bahut daad--
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«Reply #7 on: August 31, 2011, 02:24:57 PM »
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Rahim ji as usual aapki peshkash shaandaar aur jaandaar hai.
bahut khoob.
 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Tumhari kitni hi rachnayen humne pasandki dekhi.
lafzon mein gehrai saagar si nahin samandar si dekhi.

Suresh bhai,
Behad dil ki gehrayi se apka shukriya..
Apne do lines bhi kahi toh tariff main meri..
:D :D :D :D
Dil dil se shukriya..
Khush rahiye..!
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«Reply #8 on: August 31, 2011, 02:25:36 PM »
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wah Rahim sahab --baht achi peshkash aapki--
baht gahre vichaaron ko alfaazon se nawaza hai aapne--
daad bahut bahut daad--

Teh teh dil se shukriya dost..
Bas yunhi saath dete rahiyega..
Khush rahiye..!
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«Reply #9 on: August 31, 2011, 02:27:59 PM »
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Bahut Hi Umda,....... icon_flower icon_flower

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«Reply #10 on: August 31, 2011, 02:29:35 PM »
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Bahut Hi Umda,....... icon_flower icon_flower

 Applause Applause Applause Applause

 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Teh teh dil se shukriya Touhid jee..
Saath dete rahiyega..
Khush rahiye..!
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«Reply #11 on: September 06, 2011, 12:09:41 PM »
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Ghum main jeeye hum sada,
Aisi bhi kaisi zindagi dekhi..

Bhooke rehkar dusron ka pet bhara,
Karte kisi ko humne, aisi bhi bandagi dekhi..

Jab dekha usne meri ankhon main nami ko,
Thorri uski ankhon main bhi, sharmindagi dekhi..

Ghar chamak kar mahel lag rahe the jinke yahan,
Dilon main unki humne behad gandagi dekhi..

Jism mano aj ek awami tamasha bangaya hai,
Shauk se dikhati hai aj kal ki larrki isse,
Khuda ki duniya main, haye yeh kaisi be-pardigi dekhi..

Askhon main rehkar bhi jee li ‘Khamosh’ ne zindagi,
Zindagi ne mager khud pucha, aisi bhi kaisi zindagi dekhi..

~..Rahim..~..A Silent Heart..~

naaaaaaaaaaaaaice
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«Reply #12 on: September 06, 2011, 12:19:39 PM »
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aap ne bhut sahi likha hai ...likhane ka tarika hme acha lga ...thanx...esi trha likhte rahiye ...
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«Reply #13 on: September 07, 2011, 01:45:24 PM »
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naaaaaaaaaaaaaice
KA jee,
Apka teh teh dil se shukriya..
Bas yunhi saath dete rahiyega..
Khush rahiye..!
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«Reply #14 on: September 07, 2011, 01:47:05 PM »
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aap ne bhut sahi likha hai ...likhane ka tarika hme acha lga ...thanx...esi trha likhte rahiye ...
Teh teh dil se shukriya Gaytri jee..
Saath dete rahiye..
Khush rahiye..!
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