Kaisi lagti ho ge tum.. (NM)

by vb on May 11, 2010, 01:03:48 PM
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«Reply #1 on: May 11, 2010, 05:15:51 PM »
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Bahut khoob vb
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«Reply #2 on: May 11, 2010, 08:13:56 PM »
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Wah wah Vb ji,bahut hi khoob,mindblowing creation,bahut pasand aayi aapke poem.keep it up.itna acha likha hai toh tareef karna padta hai. Hats off to you! icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #3 on: May 12, 2010, 02:59:10 PM »
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Behatreen!!! Unbelievable bonding of words, beautifully composed...I could go on and on about it...but can't ...its one of a kind, keep it up!
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«Reply #4 on: May 12, 2010, 03:02:17 PM »
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...wish I could say more...but would only say this much that it was helpful that meanings were also provided...Thanks!
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«Reply #5 on: May 12, 2010, 03:16:19 PM »
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no daam or anything, I wish I could buy all those what are available for selling...but wishes are wishes....

may be u know what was there in this kavita years ago, but looks like it is still one of the beautiful compositions amongst  all the others posted by yourself...
keep up the good work...

some of the words feel so known and related to anyone who reads it...
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«Reply #6 on: May 14, 2010, 08:13:05 PM »
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bahut bahut khoob likha hai aapne. main aapki ye nazm padhke kuch pooraani yaadon me kho gaya. aaj kuch mausam hi aisa ho raha hai ki mud mud ke ateet me jaane ka mann kar raha hai. bahut pasand ayi humein aapki ye rachna. maafi chahunga main pehle nahi padh paya tha. kuch waqt aur kuch mizaaz ka asar tha. shukar hai maine isko padh liya warna mujhse ek bahut bahut khoobsurat nazm miss ho jaata. Bahut bahut khoob...!!!
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«Reply #7 on: May 15, 2010, 12:03:49 AM »
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kya tasvvur hai, kya bayanbazi hai !!!bahut umda.
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«Reply #8 on: May 18, 2010, 08:07:00 AM »
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Bahut Bahut Khoob vb ji.. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #9 on: May 18, 2010, 09:25:08 AM »
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bahoth qoob wah ,, VB sahab  kya kahene , dad hazir is beshqimti taqleeq per qubool karen ,, taweel magar haseen , gungunane ko ji karta hai , wah ,,allah apke kalamo ko miyari izath de .,....

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Toot toot kar saare baadal paau.N ke neechay aate honge
sard hawa mai sookhey patto.N, par jab chalti hogi tum

aapki is sher ne bhut muta'assir kia, bhut dilfareb ghazal rahi aapki saare hai ashaaro.N mai ehsaaso.N ki rawaani ko bakhoobi nibhaya hai aapne, apni is khoobsurt jazbe se labraiz takhleeq ke lyn daad hazir hai qubool keejiye 



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