Bataaun Anu-di Kaisi lagti hai

by KOYAL46 on September 01, 2010, 04:59:49 PM
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«Reply #1 on: September 01, 2010, 05:02:12 PM »
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Koyal ji...

bahut masoom sa ...
bahut pyaara sa ...
bahut khoobsurat sa ...
bahut apna sa....
likha hai aapne....

sach ab tak jitne logon ne aapki Di ke baare me likha hai... mujhe sabse pyaari aapki kavita lagi.. aur ye baat main strainght from the heart keh raha hoon... bahut bahut bahut bahut bahut bahut....(infinity times)... pyaari moorat banayi hai aapne apne di ki aur ek dum jaisi hai wo bilkul waisi banayi hai.... i have no words to appreciate this poem... i am speechless....

 Hats off to you! to you...!!!

and  Thankyou ! for such a nice poem... thanks a lot....!!!



Bataaun mujhe kaise lagti hai......


Mujhe tou patton pe thehri shabnam lagti hai
Usha ki lalima si roshan chirag lagti hai...

Sab k chehre pe muskaan bikherti
Mamta ki wo anokhi muurat lagti hai...

Bachcho key saath bachchi lagti hai
Ye saawli-saloni surat sachi lagti hai

Prem sudha ke ras ki ye samunder lagti hai
Har mausam mai pyaar barsaati  Yo ki jaan lagti hai

Bhaav aur shabdo ki ye tou khaan lagti hai
Yo kay ess manch ki mujhe shaan lagti hai

Kasak ban k dil ki kitne dewaano ki jaan lagti hai
Annu-Anaamikaa tu kavita kee pehchaan lagti hai



- KOYAL


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«Reply #2 on: September 01, 2010, 05:12:52 PM »
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Koyal ji...

bahut masoom sa ...
bahut pyaara sa ...
bahut khoobsurat sa ...
bahut apna sa....
likha hai aapne....

sach ab tak jitne logon ne aapki Di ke baare me likha hai... mujhe sabse pyaari aapki kavita lagi.. aur ye baat main strainght from the heart keh raha hoon... bahut bahut bahut bahut bahut bahut....(infinity times)... pyaari moorat banayi hai aapne apne di ki aur ek dum jaisi hai wo bilkul waisi banayi hai.... i have no words to appreciate this poem... i am speechless....

 Hats off to you! to you...!!!

and  Thankyou ! for such a nice poem... thanks a lot....!!!




AAP DONO MILKE MUJHE KAUNSE PED PE CHADHA RAHE HO BATAO ZARA.....

LEKIN SACH KAHA HAI AAPNE...KOYAL NE YE POEM BHT DIL SE LIKHI HAI..AND AAPNE BHI BHT DIL SE HI REPLY KIYA HAI..THNX KAPIL..FOR EVRYTHING.....

MUJHE NAHIN PATA MAINE AISA KYA KIYA HAI JO SAB ISS TARAH KEH RAHE HAIN...LEKIN AAP SAB KA SATH ACHCHA LAGTA HAI...ISLY MASTI CHALTI REHTI HAI...KYA SPL HUA HAI MUJHSE JO ITNA PYAAR MIL RAHA HAI NAHIN JANTI...

BUT I LOVE YOINDIA ...DIL SE.....AUR YAHAN K HAR MEMBER SE MUJHE PYAR HAI...AND THNXXXX K AAP SABNE BHI MUJHE YAHAN KA MEMBER AUR ISS PARIWAR KA HISSA BANAYA HAI...ISKE LIYE MAIN HAMESHA THNKFUL RAHUNGI....
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«Reply #3 on: September 01, 2010, 07:31:00 PM »
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kasak ji aapki behen ne yahaan pe humko dhoka diya .... sad5

baaki aapki is comment ka jawaab me dusre waale post pe dunga thoda free ho ke... abhi to kaam me bz hoon....!!!
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«Reply #4 on: September 01, 2010, 07:33:43 PM »
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OK JI JAB MARZI DEDENA ....HUM YAHAN HI HAIN ABHI TO
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«Reply #5 on: September 01, 2010, 08:52:27 PM »
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de diya ji... Usual Smile
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«Reply #6 on: September 01, 2010, 08:55:54 PM »
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dekh liya ji maine...ab khudko udne se rokne ki koshish kar rahi hun.....zameen pe laane ki koshish... angel11 angel11

hawa me hun aaj main......ohhh maaaaaa.......itna kuch likha hai tumne....... love4 love4
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«Reply #7 on: September 02, 2010, 12:56:33 AM »
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ajaao zameen pe jaldi... jyada mat udo... Usual Smile
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«Reply #8 on: September 02, 2010, 01:51:20 PM »
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Kyu jal rahe ho tum Kapil ...........Toast jaise kale ho jaaoge...... tongue3 NaNaNa NaNaNa NaNaNa NaNaNa NaNaNa

Agar mere saath kuchh dair Anu-di aakaash ki sair kar rahi hain tou.... angel11 angel11
Udne do khule aakaash mai......kitna sakun milta hai.....Oouchaiyen chhune ka aanand hi alag hota hai...... Thumbs UP icon_thumleft
Jeevan mai ye pal  jab bhi milen......enjoy them fully.....As we are doing right now........ wave wave hello hello
Pankh bheju....aaoge tum kya......ya office ka kaam hai.... icon_scratch...... icon_scratch..... icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower
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«Reply #9 on: September 02, 2010, 01:54:19 PM »
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3no sath chalte hain .unko bhi hum le chalenge koyal... angel11 angel11 angel11
maza aayega unhe aasman me le jake satane me......

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«Reply #10 on: September 02, 2010, 02:12:33 PM »
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Achha hai....tum he raji karo unhe....kaam chhod k aayenge kya....di.......?
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«Reply #11 on: September 02, 2010, 02:30:19 PM »
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nahin aayenge to kidnap karwa lenge koyal ..fikr not..bht hain yahan unke dushman
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