~*~ Kamal ka wada tha uska ~*~ by Rahim

by dead heart on January 24, 2011, 12:13:00 AM
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Tanhayi main kaise jeeya jaa sakta hai,
Zindagi kay lamhe mujhe bas yehi seekhate rahe..

Jiski judai ne andhera kar diya meri duniya ko,
Ussi kay liye hum khushion kay deep jhalate rahe..

Kamal ka waada tha uska ‘kay akhri sans tak saath dungi’,
Aj halat hai kay ajnabi hi meri qabr par phool chadate rahe..

Faraz ne khoob kaha hai kay aisa hadsay hojate hai zindagi main,
Kay insaan bach toh jata hai mager zinda nahin rehta,
Yeh humari kalakari hai kay khud ko zinda dikhate rahe..

Yeh kamal hai meri kalam aur lavzon ka yaaron,
Barson mujse bas mere jazbaat likhwate rahe..

Phir likhte hue bhatak gaya; kab seekhega ‘Khamosh’,
Arey yeh toh logon ka badap’pan hai,
Kay teri be-jaan nazmon pe wah wahi lootate rahe..

~..Rahim..~..A Silent Heart..~
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«Reply #1 on: January 24, 2011, 12:39:11 AM »
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aapki kalaam pata nahi kyun kuch sochne par majbur karti hai hamesha.
bahut dil ko chuuti hai
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waado ko jiske Patthar ki
   lakeer samajhta raha
nikla wo Reth ka gubaar hai
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«Reply #2 on: January 24, 2011, 12:46:54 AM »
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Bahut Khub Rahim Ji Bahut Sundar Likha Hai Aapne Padhkar Hume Accha Laga U hI Likhte Rahiye Aur Khush Rahiye


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«Reply #3 on: January 24, 2011, 01:21:22 AM »
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aapki kalaam pata nahi kyun kuch sochne par majbur karti hai hamesha.
bahut dil ko chuuti hai
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thanx
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waado ko jiske Patthar ki
   lakeer samajhta raha
nikla wo Reth ka gubaar hai
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Apka teh dil se shukriya dost..
Yeh jankar bahaut khushi hui kay meri nazmein
soch paida karti hai..
Khush rahiye..
aur bahaut sunder lines..
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«Reply #4 on: January 24, 2011, 01:22:56 AM »
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Bahut Khub Rahim Ji Bahut Sundar Likha Hai Aapne Padhkar Hume Accha Laga U hI Likhte Rahiye Aur Khush Rahiye


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Teh teh dil se shukriya mere bhai..
Khush rahiye..!
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«Reply #5 on: January 24, 2011, 03:02:25 AM »
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kya baat hai rahim bhai... bahut khoob...

kalam chalti rahengi afsaane bayaan hote rahenge
tu kaheen na thahar jaana ye karwaan to badalte rahenge... !

Intezar !
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«Reply #6 on: January 24, 2011, 03:11:32 AM »
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kya baat hai rahim bhai... bahut khoob...

kalam chalti rahengi afsaane bayaan hote rahenge
tu kaheen na thahar jaana ye karwaan to badalte rahenge... !

Intezar !
Teh dil se shukriya Intezar jee..
Aur khubsoorati se do lines main sach kehgaye ap..
Khush rahiye..!
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«Reply #7 on: January 24, 2011, 08:27:25 AM »
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Tanhayi main kaise jeeya jaa sakta hai,
Zindagi kay lamhe mujhe bas yehi seekhate rahe..

Jiski judai ne andhera kar diya meri duniya ko,
Ussi kay liye hum khushion kay deep jhalate rahe..

Kamal ka waada tha uska ‘kay akhri sans tak saath dungi’,
Aj halat hai kay ajnabi hi meri qabr par phool chadate rahe..

Faraz ne khoob kaha hai kay aisa hadsay hojate hai zindagi main,
Kay insaan bach toh jata hai mager zinda nahin rehta,
Yeh humari kalakari hai kay khud ko zinda dikhate rahe..

Yeh kamal hai meri kalam aur lavzon ka yaaron,
Barson mujse bas mere jazbaat likhwate rahe..

Phir likhte hue bhatak gaya; kab seekhega ‘Khamosh’,
Arey yeh toh logon ka badap’pan hai,
Kay teri be-jaan nazmon pe wah wahi lootate rahe..

~..Rahim..~..A Silent Heart..~

Very Impressive Creation ... Rahim Ji !

Good Expression ... dil se daad ... !

likhte rahen ... khush rahen ... !

duaaon ke saath ... !
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«Reply #8 on: January 24, 2011, 05:33:53 PM »
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Very Impressive Creation ... Rahim Ji !

Good Expression ... dil se daad ... !

likhte rahen ... khush rahen ... !

duaaon ke saath ... !
Teh teh dil se shukriya Naresh jee..
Khush rahiye..!
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«Reply #9 on: January 24, 2011, 05:45:18 PM »
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bahut sundar manbhavan rachna ..jai shree krishna
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«Reply #10 on: January 24, 2011, 05:56:07 PM »
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bahut sundar manbhavan rachna ..jai shree krishna
Bahaut bahaut shukriya jee.
Khush rahiye..!
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