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Badalon ki panahon mein bhatak raha hai paani Kishton mein rashan sa khatak raha hai paani Socha tha kisanon se nibhayenga wade ko Lekin daman farz se jatak raha hai paani..
Kahi pe aakaal, sooke ka kahi pe tandav baad ka Be-maut zindagani ko gatak raha hai paani Us "Bhai" ne shayad paani ki utayi ho "Supari" Isliye toh "Underworld" mein atak raha hai paani..
Mohtaz paani paani ko ho rahi hai dunia Aasmaan mein khajur sa latak raha hai paani Sawan aur bhadon ka nikal ke janaza Ser apne hi maiyaat pe patak raha hai paani..
Serkar isse rokhne ka upaiy karle jaldi se Varna sabhi ke aankhon se satak raha hai paani Kasam permanu Aids ke jangju ke manind, Taji jung ladne ko bhatak raha hai paani..
Bhooka ho toh dal du usko nivala jaan ka Lekin leel ne versha ko chatak raha hai paani Mausam ne aaj "Roja" ke dimak ko hila diya Bar-bar mizaj ko hatak raha hai paani....
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« Reply #1 on: January 13, 2009, 12:48:21 PM » |
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A really good one Roja Ji
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« Reply #4 on: January 14, 2009, 01:43:26 AM » |
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A really good one Roja Ji
Thanks for reading me Rajesh Harish ji
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« Reply #5 on: January 14, 2009, 01:57:10 AM » |
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Thanks for reading me Rajesh Harish ji
Kya Likha La Jawab !! Bahoth Bahoth Badiya Likha Hai roja Ji !! asmanoo ko barse howe eak muddath bit gayi Qadeer!! ab to sirf ankhoon se baras raha hai pani !! Qadeer Toopchi
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« Reply #8 on: January 14, 2009, 02:09:10 AM » |
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Badalon ki panahon mein bhatak raha hai paani Kishton mein rashan sa khatak raha hai paani Socha tha kisanon se nibhayenga wade ko Lekin daman farz se jatak raha hai paani..
Kahi pe aakaal, sooke ka kahi pe tandav baad ka Be-maut zindagani ko gatak raha hai paani Us "Bhai" ne shayad paani ki utayi ho "Supari" Isliye toh "Underworld" mein atak raha hai paani..
Mohtaz paani paani ko ho rahi hai dunia Aasmaan mein khajur sa latak raha hai paani Sawan aur bhadon ka nikal ke janaza Ser apne hi maiyaat pe patak raha hai paani..
Serkar isse rokhne ka upaiy karle jaldi se Varna sabhi ke aankhon se satak raha hai paani Kasam permanu Aids ke jangju ke manind, Taji jung ladne ko bhatak raha hai paani..
Bhooka ho toh dal du usko nivala jaan ka Lekin leel ne versha ko chatak raha hai paani Mausam ne aaj "Roja" ke dimak ko hila diya Bar-bar mizaj ko hatak raha hai paani....
Wah Wah Bahoth Badiya Likha Hai Roja Ji !! Dil KHuesh hogaya is shikayath Se kya kahene is shikwe ke janab !! Sorry Pahele maine galti se galath jaga reply de diya maafi chahonga !! Muddath howi asmanoo ko barse howe Qadeer !! Ab to sirf ankhoon se baras raha hai Paani !! Qadeer Toopchi
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« Reply #9 on: January 14, 2009, 02:53:47 AM » |
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Wah Wah Bahoth Badiya Likha Hai Roja Ji !! Dil KHuesh hogaya is shikayath Se kya kahene is shikwe ke janab !! Sorry Pahele maine galti se galath jaga reply de diya maafi chahonga !!
Muddath howi asmanoo ko barse howe Qadeer !! Ab to sirf ankhoon se baras raha hai Paani !!
Qadeer Toopchi
Koyi baat nahi Toopchiji.. Shukriya ji aapne hamara likha pada aur pasand kiya. and nice line... 
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« Reply #10 on: January 14, 2009, 06:40:19 AM » |
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Wow... That's too Lovely.. Very Innovative Thinking.. Wonderful Work Roja Ji..And Equally Good Reply Qadeer Ji.. 
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« Reply #11 on: January 14, 2009, 06:45:59 AM » |
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Wow... That's too Lovely.. Very Innovative Thinking.. Wonderful Work Roja Ji..And Equally Good Reply Qadeer Ji..  Mahi mai soch hi rahi thi k aapne pada nahi kyu mera likha... aur aapka comment aagaya.. Thanks dear... (How r u?)
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« Reply #12 on: January 14, 2009, 06:49:26 AM » |
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I am fine ji.. Waise main savere se 5-6 baar padh chuki hoon aapka kalaam... sach mein bahut pyaara likha hai aapne.. Keep It Up.. 
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« Reply #13 on: January 14, 2009, 07:25:32 AM » |
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Bahut khoob Roja ji.. very nice.
Kya kya na apne jalwe dhika rha paani Kisi ko hsa to kisi ko rula rha paani
Ho gyi mud'dat ke na dekha hai humne Ped ke nazuk patton pe girta hua paani
Ik bacche ne ungli utha kar kudha se pucha Haye! kyun insaan ko aaj tarsa rha paani
Shayad qayamat ke din kareb aa gaye "HumTum" Tabhi Badal bhi na ab to barsa rha paani !! HumTum 
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« Reply #14 on: January 14, 2009, 07:48:12 AM » |
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Bahut khoob Roja ji.. very nice.
Kya kya na apne jalwe dhika rha paani Kisi ko hsa to kisi ko rula rha paani
Ho gyi mud'dat ke na dekha hai humne Ped ke nazuk patton pe girta hua paani
Ik bacche ne ungli utha kar kudha se pucha Haye! kyun insaan ko aaj tarsa rha paani
Shayad qayamat ke din kareb aa gaye "HumTum" Tabhi Badal bhi na ab to barsa rha paani !! HumTum  Waah Waah..  Bahut Bahut Khoob kaha aapne bhi HumTum Ji..
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