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Author Topic: *Katak Raha Hai Paani*  (Read 267 times)
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« on: January 13, 2009, 12:41:00 PM »
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Badalon ki panahon mein bhatak raha hai paani
Kishton mein rashan sa khatak raha hai paani
Socha tha kisanon  se nibhayenga wade ko
Lekin daman farz se jatak raha hai paani..

Kahi pe aakaal, sooke ka kahi pe tandav baad ka
Be-maut zindagani ko gatak raha hai paani
Us "Bhai" ne shayad paani ki utayi ho "Supari"
Isliye toh "Underworld" mein atak raha hai paani..

Mohtaz paani paani ko ho rahi hai dunia
Aasmaan mein khajur sa latak raha hai paani
Sawan aur bhadon ka nikal ke janaza
Ser apne hi maiyaat pe patak raha hai paani..

Serkar isse rokhne ka upaiy karle jaldi se
Varna sabhi ke aankhon se satak raha hai paani
Kasam permanu Aids ke jangju ke manind,
Taji jung ladne ko bhatak raha hai paani..

Bhooka ho toh dal du usko nivala jaan ka
Lekin leel ne versha ko chatak raha hai paani
Mausam ne aaj "Roja" ke dimak ko hila diya
Bar-bar mizaj ko hatak raha hai paani....


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« Reply #1 on: January 13, 2009, 12:48:21 PM »
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A really good one Roja Ji
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« Reply #2 on: January 13, 2009, 12:50:07 PM »
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Bahut Bahut Khoob Roja..Ek Chubta Topic Par aapne Bahut Kamaal Ka Likha hai...Too Good!! Applause Applause Applause
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« Reply #3 on: January 13, 2009, 05:11:01 PM »
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 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
Wah Wah Wah kaya baat hai Roja, Bahoot khoob!! Bahoot he sunder rachna rachi hai... wah bahoot khoob!!
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« Reply #4 on: January 14, 2009, 01:43:26 AM »
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A really good one Roja Ji

Thanks for reading me Rajesh Harish ji
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« Reply #5 on: January 14, 2009, 01:57:10 AM »
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Thanks for reading me Rajesh Harish ji

Kya Likha La Jawab !! Bahoth Bahoth Badiya Likha Hai roja Ji !!

asmanoo ko barse howe eak muddath bit gayi Qadeer!!
ab to sirf ankhoon se baras raha hai pani !!

Qadeer Toopchi

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« Reply #6 on: January 14, 2009, 01:59:51 AM »
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Bahut Bahut Khoob Roja..Ek Chubta Topic Par aapne Bahut Kamaal Ka Likha hai...Too Good!! Applause Applause Applause

Thanks Khwaish ji..I am honored
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« Reply #7 on: January 14, 2009, 02:03:30 AM »
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Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
Wah Wah Wah kaya baat hai Roja, Bahoot khoob!! Bahoot he sunder rachna rachi hai... wah bahoot khoob!!

Thanks didi.... Aate rehna...
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« Reply #8 on: January 14, 2009, 02:09:10 AM »
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Badalon ki panahon mein bhatak raha hai paani
Kishton mein rashan sa khatak raha hai paani
Socha tha kisanon  se nibhayenga wade ko
Lekin daman farz se jatak raha hai paani..

Kahi pe aakaal, sooke ka kahi pe tandav baad ka
Be-maut zindagani ko gatak raha hai paani
Us "Bhai" ne shayad paani ki utayi ho "Supari"
Isliye toh "Underworld" mein atak raha hai paani..

Mohtaz paani paani ko ho rahi hai dunia
Aasmaan mein khajur sa latak raha hai paani
Sawan aur bhadon ka nikal ke janaza
Ser apne hi maiyaat pe patak raha hai paani..

Serkar isse rokhne ka upaiy karle jaldi se
Varna sabhi ke aankhon se satak raha hai paani
Kasam permanu Aids ke jangju ke manind,
Taji jung ladne ko bhatak raha hai paani..

Bhooka ho toh dal du usko nivala jaan ka
Lekin leel ne versha ko chatak raha hai paani
Mausam ne aaj "Roja" ke dimak ko hila diya
Bar-bar mizaj ko hatak raha hai paani....




Wah Wah Bahoth Badiya Likha Hai Roja Ji !! Dil KHuesh hogaya is shikayath Se kya kahene is shikwe ke janab !! Sorry Pahele maine galti se galath jaga reply de diya maafi chahonga !!

Muddath howi asmanoo ko barse howe Qadeer !!
Ab to sirf ankhoon se baras raha hai Paani !!

Qadeer Toopchi

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« Reply #9 on: January 14, 2009, 02:53:47 AM »
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Wah Wah Bahoth Badiya Likha Hai Roja Ji !! Dil KHuesh hogaya is shikayath Se kya kahene is shikwe ke janab !! Sorry Pahele maine galti se galath jaga reply de diya maafi chahonga !!

Muddath howi asmanoo ko barse howe Qadeer !!
Ab to sirf ankhoon se baras raha hai Paani !!

Qadeer Toopchi



Koyi baat nahi Toopchiji.. Shukriya ji aapne hamara likha pada aur pasand kiya. and nice line...  Usual Smile

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« Reply #10 on: January 14, 2009, 06:40:19 AM »
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Wow... That's too Lovely.. Applause Applause
Very Innovative Thinking..
Wonderful Work Roja Ji..

And

Equally Good Reply Qadeer Ji.. Thumbs UP
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« Reply #11 on: January 14, 2009, 06:45:59 AM »
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Wow... That's too Lovely.. Applause Applause
Very Innovative Thinking..
Wonderful Work Roja Ji..

And

Equally Good Reply Qadeer Ji.. Thumbs UP

Mahi mai soch hi rahi thi k aapne pada nahi kyu mera likha... aur aapka comment aagaya.. Thanks dear...  love4(How  r u?)
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« Reply #12 on: January 14, 2009, 06:49:26 AM »
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I am fine ji.. Usual Smile

Waise main savere se 5-6 baar padh chuki hoon aapka kalaam... sach mein bahut pyaara likha hai aapne..
Keep It Up.. Thumbs UP
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« Reply #13 on: January 14, 2009, 07:25:32 AM »
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Bahut khoob Roja ji.. very nice.


Kya kya na apne jalwe dhika rha paani
Kisi ko hsa to kisi ko rula rha paani

Ho gyi mud'dat ke na dekha hai humne
Ped ke nazuk patton pe girta hua paani

Ik bacche ne ungli utha kar kudha se pucha
Haye! kyun insaan ko aaj tarsa rha paani

Shayad qayamat ke din kareb aa gaye "HumTum"
Tabhi Badal bhi na ab to barsa rha paani !! 



HumTum  hello
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« Reply #14 on: January 14, 2009, 07:48:12 AM »
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Bahut khoob Roja ji.. very nice.


Kya kya na apne jalwe dhika rha paani
Kisi ko hsa to kisi ko rula rha paani

Ho gyi mud'dat ke na dekha hai humne
Ped ke nazuk patton pe girta hua paani

Ik bacche ne ungli utha kar kudha se pucha
Haye! kyun insaan ko aaj tarsa rha paani

Shayad qayamat ke din kareb aa gaye "HumTum"
Tabhi Badal bhi na ab to barsa rha paani !! 



HumTum  hello

Waah Waah.. Applause
Bahut Bahut Khoob kaha aapne bhi HumTum Ji..
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