*Khaa Rahe Hai Jootiyan*

by Roja on January 23, 2009, 02:57:12 AM
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Jab tarakki payee toh saati hamara jal gaya,
Humne uska kya bigada tha ki itna dilse wo jal gaya..

Dil-Jala-Aashiq ka kya vaid ji se ho elaaj,
Nabs dekhi thi zara aur haat unka jal gaya..

Actress shooting ko pahunchi ret ke deelon pe jab,
Husn ki garmi se unki sara registan jal gaya..

Dekkar Biwi ko chipke T.V. se, Bole Miya,
"Sunthi Ho..!!, Dekho... Rasoyi mein parata jal gaya..

Hazrate-aashiq police ki kaa rahe hai jootiyan,
Dil mein aisi aag badki Ishq sara jal gaya..

Aashiq ke pyar ke chakkar mein fasse they hum bhi
Is tarah chaupat huye sab kaam-dhanda jal gaya..

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«Reply #1 on: January 23, 2009, 05:05:24 AM »
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bhut hi khoob ..roja ji....thoda hum bhi mood mae aagaye...padhyegaa.......

jab tarakki payee,toh saathi hamaara jal gaya,
meri bulandi dekh,wo aur neeche gir gaya.

dil-jala aashiq ka,kya vaid ji se ho elaaj,
nabs meri dekh kar,khud aashiqi- rog mein fas gaya.

actress shooting ko pahunchi,ret ke deelon pe jab,
sare oonth (camel)sochne lage,hamari oonthni aesi hogi kab.

dekh kar biwi ko chipke t.v se,bole miya,
kya mere se jee bhar gaya,jab dekho baheti ho jaakar wahan.

hazrate-aashiq police ki kha rahe hai jootiyan,
dil ka chor bankar,chura jo rahe hai, pairon ki jootiyaan.

aashiq ke pyaar ke chakkar mein, fasse the hum bhi,
aaj tak nikal nahin paaye hai,us chakkar se hum bhi.




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«Reply #2 on: January 23, 2009, 05:15:09 AM »
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Jab tarakki payee toh saati hamara jal gaya,
Humne uska kya bigada tha ki itna dilse wo jal gaya..

Dil-Jala-Aashiq ka kya vaid ji se ho elaaj,
Nabs dekhi thi zara aur haat unka jal gaya..

Actress shooting ko pahunchi ret ke deelon pe jab,
Husn ki garmi se unki sara registan jal gaya..

Dekkar Biwi ko chipke T.V. se, Bole Miya,
"Sunthi Ho..!!, Dekho... Rasoyi mein parata jal gaya..

Hazrate-aashiq police ki kaa rahe hai jootiyan,
Dil mein aisi aag badki Ishq sara jal gaya..

Aashiq ke pyar ke chakkar mein fasse they hum bhi
Is tarah chaupat huye sab kaam-dhanda jal gaya..

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wah ROJA, kya khoob sab koh jala dia ....


Jasbir Singh
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«Reply #3 on: January 23, 2009, 05:15:47 AM »
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bhut hi khoob ..roja ji....thoda hum bhi mood mae aagaye...padhyegaa.......

jab tarakki payee,toh saathi hamaara jal gaya,
meri bulandi dekh,wo aur neeche gir gaya.

dil-jala aashiq ka,kya vaid ji se ho elaaj,
nabs meri dekh kar,khud aashiqi- rog mein fas gaya.

actress shooting ko pahunchi,ret ke deelon pe jab,
sare oonth (camel)sochne lage,hamari oonthni aesi hogi kab.

dekh kar biwi ko chipke t.v se,bole miya,
kya mere se jee bhar gaya,jab dekho baheti ho jaakar wahan.

hazrate-aashiq police ki kha rahe hai jootiyan,
dil ka chor bankar,chura jo rahe hai, pairon ki jootiyaan.

aashiq ke pyaar ke chakkar mein, fasse the hum bhi,
aaj tak nikal nahin paaye hai,us chakkar se hum bhi.







wah CARA, bahut khoob ji

jasbir singh
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«Reply #4 on: January 23, 2009, 06:07:06 AM »
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Nice one Roja Ji
N Equally good response Cara Ji
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«Reply #5 on: January 25, 2009, 09:38:33 AM »
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bhut hi khoob ..roja ji....thoda hum bhi mood mae aagaye...padhyegaa.......

jab tarakki payee,toh saathi hamaara jal gaya,
meri bulandi dekh,wo aur neeche gir gaya.

dil-jala aashiq ka,kya vaid ji se ho elaaj,
nabs meri dekh kar,khud aashiqi- rog mein fas gaya.

actress shooting ko pahunchi,ret ke deelon pe jab,
sare oonth (camel)sochne lage,hamari oonthni aesi hogi kab.

dekh kar biwi ko chipke t.v se,bole miya,
kya mere se jee bhar gaya,jab dekho baheti ho jaakar wahan.

hazrate-aashiq police ki kha rahe hai jootiyan,
dil ka chor bankar,chura jo rahe hai, pairon ki jootiyaan.

aashiq ke pyaar ke chakkar mein, fasse the hum bhi,
aaj tak nikal nahin paaye hai,us chakkar se hum bhi.


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«Reply #6 on: January 25, 2009, 09:40:33 AM »
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wah ROJA, kya khoob sab koh jala dia ....


Jasbir Singh


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«Reply #7 on: January 25, 2009, 09:40:41 AM »
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bahoot khoob Roja and cara
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«Reply #8 on: January 25, 2009, 09:43:31 AM »
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Nice one Roja Ji
N Equally good response Cara Ji


Thanks Rajesh Harish ji
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«Reply #9 on: January 26, 2009, 01:38:19 PM »
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lovely poetry keep it up.asghr Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #10 on: January 31, 2013, 01:22:07 PM »
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Jab tarakki payee toh saati hamara jal gaya,
Humne uska kya bigada tha ki itna dilse wo jal gaya..

Dil-Jala-Aashiq ka kya vaid ji se ho elaaj,
Nabs dekhi thi zara aur haat unka jal gaya..

Actress shooting ko pahunchi ret ke deelon pe jab,
Husn ki garmi se unki sara registan jal gaya..

Dekkar Biwi ko chipke T.V. se, Bole Miya,
"Sunthi Ho..!!, Dekho... Rasoyi mein parata jal gaya..

Hazrate-aashiq police ki kaa rahe hai jootiyan,
Dil mein aisi aag badki Ishq sara jal gaya..

Aashiq ke pyar ke chakkar mein fasse they hum bhi
Is tarah chaupat huye sab kaam-dhanda jal gaya..

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