Khuaf hai ya mhbt zyada hai...

by brokenbyluv on October 12, 2010, 07:54:05 AM
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Terri baato mein kyun har lamha judai hai,
kahin milane ki aas tou kabhi bite kal ki ruswai hai,

kabhi tu kehta hai ki terre dil mein merri mhbt ka nishan hai,
kabhi kehta hai ki hamara milna bhi kahan asaan hai,

main pehle hi dard k sheher mein rehti hu,
har baar terri baato se kayi aur dard  main seheti hu,

merri uljhane pal pal badhati jaa rahi hai,
jane kyun ye doori hamein door karti ja rahi hai,

tu hi faisla kar le ki terra kya irada hai,
terre dil mein awam ka khauf hai ya merri mhbt zyada hai.........
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«Reply #1 on: October 12, 2010, 08:01:57 AM »
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Bahut bahut Khoob Geetji..Lajawaab
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«Reply #2 on: October 12, 2010, 08:04:58 AM »
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Shukriya khwaish ji,per apke kalamo k aage merri har peshkash kam hai ji............
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«Reply #3 on: October 12, 2010, 08:51:13 AM »
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bahut bahut khoob likha hai aapne Geet ji...!!!
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«Reply #4 on: October 12, 2010, 08:52:40 AM »
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Shukriya kapil ji...
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«Reply #5 on: October 12, 2010, 08:58:01 AM »
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dil me jaise teer chubhta hai na waise chubh gai tumhari ye gazal geet.......har lafz jaise keh raha hai ab kya abkya.....
sply last line ne sochne pe majbur kar diya mujhe bhi....
thnx ek nai soch dene k liye........
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«Reply #6 on: October 13, 2010, 12:35:45 PM »
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Itne pyare comment k liye bahut bahut shukriya kasak ji....
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«Reply #7 on: October 13, 2010, 01:37:18 PM »
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dil ki bhawnao ko bakhubi lafjon mein dhaala hai aapne geet ji.....
Kasak ji ne bilkul sahi kha...aankhiri line ne sach mein sochne par majbur kar diya hai...aur issi soch mein ek line yaad aa gayi....pta nahi sahi hai ya sach hai.....lekin likh rahi hu

Hum ab talak ye sochkar uss se nafrat karte rahe
K khauf hai uske dil mein mohabbat se zyada
Haqeeqat se ru-b-ru hue toh ye jaana
Wo khauf nahi,apno k maan-sam_aan ki baat thi

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«Reply #8 on: October 13, 2010, 01:55:22 PM »
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Bahut bahut shukriya nikhaar ji...apki line bahut sach hai ji..
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«Reply #9 on: October 23, 2010, 08:59:24 AM »
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2nd para and the last one are really hearttouching Crying Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #10 on: October 23, 2010, 09:03:37 AM »
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2nd para and the last one are really hearttouching Crying Applause Applause Applause Applause

Thnx alot rukhsar...
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