Mhbt ka gawah...

by brokenbyluv on September 03, 2010, 11:24:14 AM
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Ek din aesa hoga jab hamara jahan hoga,
na koi bandhish hogi bus pyar wahan hoga,

har su bus mhbt hi mhbt nazar ayegi,
hamari nigaho k siwa aesa nazara aur kahan hoga,

jab dekhenge hum neel gagan mein mahtab ko,
tou deparba hamari har hasrat hogi,

na koi darr hoga judai ka dilo mein,
khuda ki rehmat mein hamari qurbat hogi,

ban jayenge hum bhi ek duje k sada k liye,
hamare khwaisho ka nagar na phir viraan hoga,

ek din aesa zarur ayega merre ajnabi..
jab hamari mhbt ka gawah ye asmaan hoga.........

 
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«Reply #1 on: September 03, 2010, 11:32:30 AM »
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wah kya likha he geet di....Awesome.......
aesa din bahot bahot hi jald aayega aapki life me, i wish.....



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«Reply #2 on: September 03, 2010, 11:33:43 AM »
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bahut bahut shukriya dev i wish all the happiness for u too...take care...
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«Reply #3 on: September 03, 2010, 11:37:15 AM »
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thanku geet di.....
u also t'c
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«Reply #4 on: September 03, 2010, 11:37:47 AM »
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«Reply #5 on: September 03, 2010, 11:47:36 AM »
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WAH KYA BAAT HAI      BROKENBYLUV JI.....

JAB TU MERI HOGI AUR ME TERA HOGA
JAB YE ZALIM ZAMANA HAMSE JUDA HOGA
TAB HAMARI "MHBT KA GAWAH" KHUDA HOGA....
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«Reply #6 on: September 03, 2010, 11:51:01 AM »
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bahut bahut shurkiya cara ji..n nice lines ji...
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«Reply #7 on: September 03, 2010, 01:23:11 PM »
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bahut bahut khoob likha hai aapne Geet ji... bahut pyaari kavita hai... !!!

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«Reply #8 on: September 03, 2010, 03:28:23 PM »
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Neel ke naam paighaam,



Yeh thread aapke liye banaye ja rahe hai kya, baat kya hai...............

Waise ek baat bata du zati tajruba hai kuch nahi hota yeh sab karne se......sage maa baap mar jate hai auladein bhool jati hai. Koi kisi ko yaad nahi rakhta aaj phir thode bohat logh pooch rahe hai kal woh bhi nahi poochege.

Zyda seriously na le kisi baat ko aaye apne kalam share kare auro ke kalam padhe, bas waqt katne ka ek bahana hai koi zindagi nahi hai yeh net ki duniya.

Khayaal rakhe apna.

Ghayel
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«Reply #9 on: September 07, 2010, 03:05:49 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriya kapil ji...
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«Reply #10 on: September 07, 2010, 03:09:41 PM »
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Neel ke naam paighaam,



Yeh thread aapke liye banaye ja rahe hai kya, baat kya hai...............

Waise ek baat bata du zati tajruba hai kuch nahi hota yeh sab karne se......sage maa baap mar jate hai auladein bhool jati hai. Koi kisi ko yaad nahi rakhta aaj phir thode bohat logh pooch rahe hai kal woh bhi nahi poochege.

Zyda seriously na le kisi baat ko aaye apne kalam share kare auro ke kalam padhe, bas waqt katne ka ek bahana hai koi zindagi nahi hai yeh net ki duniya.

Khayaal rakhe apna.

Ghayel

Apki nasihat k liye shukriya..per mujhe uski zarurat nhi lagti aap apne tajrube se jo sikhe hai vo apke liye behtar hai aur jo baat apke mann ko khushi de vo aap kare apko kalaam padh k comments kar k khushi hoti hai aur mujhe likh ke...main umeed karungi aap merri baat ko galat nhi lenge..shukriya...
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