khubsurat morr de kar chorr dena acha

by Pooja on September 18, 2009, 07:50:38 PM
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Mere ek dost ne kuch din pahle mujhe sms kiya in lines ke sath

"Jise anzaam tak laana na ho mumkin
Use ek khubsurat morr de kar chorr dena acha"


aor kaha ki main is per kuch bhi likhu...
waqat ki tangi ki wajah se maine dhayan nahi diya.. magar ajj abhi najar parri to kuch lines man mai aa gai.. Likhne ja rahi hu:

Jise anzaam tak laana na ho mumkin
Use ek khubsurat morr de kar chorr dena acha!..!!

Chorna kabhi khubsurat ho nahi sakta
Bichadna kabhi khubsurat ho nahi sakta
Jis morr ke baad, aye ansoo ki barsaat
Wo barsaat ka mosam acha ho nahi sakta

Dard rahta hai dil main, morr kitne he paar ho jaaye
Sathi ke bichudne ka dard, kabhi khatam ho nahi sakta
Shabdo ka jaadu hai, jadugari se behka do
Koi bhi behak jaana, umarbhar chal nahi sakta

Saalo baad bhi tees uthati hai aor ankhein ro deti hai
Ankhon ka dard main rona, kabhi acha ho nahi sakta
Judai ka zakham, her khushi main bhi Rulata hai
Khushio ka dukh main badal jaana, khubsurat ho nahi sakta

Bichardna kabhi khubsurat ho nahi sakata…
Bichardna kabhi khubsurat ho nahi sakata…

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«Reply #1 on: September 18, 2009, 07:56:11 PM »
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Wow Pooja ji bahut khoob,hamesha ki tarah wonderful creation.excellent Thumbs UP Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #2 on: September 18, 2009, 09:17:52 PM »
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Sunil Dutt, Ashok Kumar aur Mala Sinha ki movie thi, GUMRAAH jis main song tha:

"Chalo Ek Baar Phir Se Ajnabi Ban Jaayen Hum Dono"

Uska last para tha ye..

"Taarruf Rog Ho Jaaye, To Usko Bhoolna Behtar
Talluq Bojh Ban Jaaye To Usko Todna Achcha
Wo Afsaana Jise Anjaam Tak Laana Na Ho Mumkin
Use Ek Khoobsurat Mod De Ke Chorhna Achcha"



Pooja,
Aaap ka to jawab hi nahin.......Aapne bohot hi khoobsurat likha hai, ek nayi soch ke saath  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #3 on: September 18, 2009, 10:02:34 PM »
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Mere ek dost ne kuch din pahle mujhe sms kiya in lines ke sath

"Jise anzaam tak laana na ho mumkin
Use ek khubsurat morr de kar chorr dena acha"


aor kaha ki main is per kuch bhi likhu...
waqat ki tangi ki wajah se maine dhayan nahi diya.. magar ajj abhi najar parri to kuch lines man mai aa gai.. Likhne ja rahi hu:

Jise anzaam tak laana na ho mumkin
Use ek khubsurat morr de kar chorr dena acha!..!!

Chorna kabhi khubsurat ho nahi sakta
Bichadna kabhi khubsurat ho nahi sakta
Jis morr ke baad, aye ansoo ki barsaat
Wo barsaat ka mosam acha ho nahi sakta

Dard rahta hai dil main, morr kitne he paar ho jaaye
Sathi ke bichudne ka dard, kabhi khatam ho nahi sakta
Shabdo ka jaadu hai, jadugari se behka do
Koi bhi behak jaana, umarbhar chal nahi sakta

Saalo baad bhi tees uthati hai aor ankhein ro deti hai
Ankhon ka dard main rona, kabhi acha ho nahi sakta
Judai ka zakham, her khushi main bhi Rulata hai
Khushio ka dukh main badal jaana, khubsurat ho nahi sakta

Bichardna kabhi khubsurat ho nahi sakata…
Bichardna kabhi khubsurat ho nahi sakata…



Bohat acha likha aap ne DEE its really touchyyyyy bilkul sahi kaha aap ne bichadna kabhi khubsoorat ho nahi sakta....bohat khooooob.... Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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Pooja
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«Reply #4 on: September 19, 2009, 03:46:04 AM »
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Wow Pooja ji bahut khoob,hamesha ki tarah wonderful creation.excellent Thumbs UP Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

thanks dear!!
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«Reply #5 on: September 19, 2009, 03:47:13 AM »
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Sunil Dutt, Ashok Kumar aur Mala Sinha ki movie thi, GUMRAAH jis main song tha:

"Chalo Ek Baar Phir Se Ajnabi Ban Jaayen Hum Dono"

Uska last para tha ye..

"Taarruf Rog Ho Jaaye, To Usko Bhoolna Behtar
Talluq Bojh Ban Jaaye To Usko Todna Achcha
Wo Afsaana Jise Anjaam Tak Laana Na Ho Mumkin
Use Ek Khoobsurat Mod De Ke Chorhna Achcha"



Pooja,
Aaap ka to jawab hi nahin.......Aapne bohot hi khoobsurat likha hai, ek nayi soch ke saath  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

bahoot dino app se koi comments mile... dil ko bahoot acha laga.. hamesha ki tarah bas wo he likha jo dil ne kaha.. tahe dil se shukaria ki apko yah pasand ayya.
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«Reply #6 on: September 19, 2009, 03:48:16 AM »
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Bohat acha likha aap ne DEE its really touchyyyyy bilkul sahi kaha aap ne bichadna kabhi khubsoorat ho nahi sakta....bohat khooooob.... Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

koi bhi bichurna kabhi bhi khubsurat ho nahi sakta.. kiatni he najakat barto.. kitna he pyar dikhao.. judai hamesha dil dukhati hai...
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«Reply #7 on: September 19, 2009, 03:57:50 AM »
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Khwaabon Se Juda Hona, Asaan Nahin Hota,
Judaai Ka Ghum Seh Jaana Asaan Nahin Hota,
Koi Kaise Muskura Ke Kahe Alwida Bolo,
Kaanch Sa Dil Pathhar Kabhi Ho Nahin Sakta
Bichadna Kabhi Khoobsurat Ho Nahin Sakta !

Jin Raahon Pe Chale The Door Tak, Humraah,
Tanha Nazar Aaate Hain Wahi Raaste Sahra,
Pal Pal Ki Yaadain Satati Hain, Rulati Hain,
Yaadon Se Khaali Ye Daaman Ho Nahin Sakta
Bichadna Kabhi Khoobsurat Ho Nahin Sakta !

Anjaam Mohabbat Ka Judaai Hai Bhala Kyun,
Aankhon Main Ashkon Ki Lagti Hai Jhadi Kyun
Kyun Talwaar Si Hoti Hai Rasm-e-Zamaana,
Bhool Jaayen Use Muskura Ke, Ho Nahin Sakta
Bichadna Kabhi Khoobsurat Ho Nahin Sakta !

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deepika_divya
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«Reply #8 on: September 19, 2009, 03:58:42 AM »
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Mere ek dost ne kuch din pahle mujhe sms kiya in lines ke sath

"Jise anzaam tak laana na ho mumkin
Use ek khubsurat morr de kar chorr dena acha"


aor kaha ki main is per kuch bhi likhu...
waqat ki tangi ki wajah se maine dhayan nahi diya.. magar ajj abhi najar parri to kuch lines man mai aa gai.. Likhne ja rahi hu:

Jise anzaam tak laana na ho mumkin
Use ek khubsurat morr de kar chorr dena acha!..!!

Chorna kabhi khubsurat ho nahi sakta
Bichadna kabhi khubsurat ho nahi sakta
Jis morr ke baad, aye ansoo ki barsaat
Wo barsaat ka mosam acha ho nahi sakta

Dard rahta hai dil main, morr kitne he paar ho jaaye
Sathi ke bichudne ka dard, kabhi khatam ho nahi sakta
Shabdo ka jaadu hai, jadugari se behka do
Koi bhi behak jaana, umarbhar chal nahi sakta

Saalo baad bhi tees uthati hai aor ankhein ro deti hai
Ankhon ka dard main rona, kabhi acha ho nahi sakta
Judai ka zakham, her khushi main bhi Rulata hai
Khushio ka dukh main badal jaana, khubsurat ho nahi sakta

Bichardna kabhi khubsurat ho nahi sakata…
Bichardna kabhi khubsurat ho nahi sakata…




Simply Fantastic.. Full of emotions... Sach mea Di.. Dard Bare ehsaaso ko bakoobi lafzo ka roop diya hai... Hamesha ki tarah Bahoot Hi laajawaab !

Mohabaat k raste hamesa Muskil hote hai
Bichne ka ehsaas kabhi ,Kabi aasaan nahi hota
Dil Rota hai aaj bhi Usko raat kar raato mea
Yaado mea raat Guzarna , Yun aasaan nahi hota

Mehfil mea jab Koi leta apni Mohabbat ka naam
Apne Dard ko , Lafzo mea daalna itna aasan nahi hota
Bhul jaaye koi apni Mohabbat ko kisi k liye yun
Magar Tanhai mea Unn Yaado lo Bulana aasan nahi hota

!Divya!
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«Reply #9 on: September 19, 2009, 04:00:19 AM »
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Khwaabon Ke Juda Hona, Asaan Nahin Hota,
Judaai Ka Ghum Seh Jaana Asaan Nahin Hota,
Koi Kaise Muskura Ke Kahe Alwida Bolo,
Kaanch Sa Dil Pathhar Kabhi Ho Nahin Sakta
Bichadna Kabhi Khoobsurat Ho Nahin Sakta !

Jin Raahon Pe Chale The Door Tak, Humraah,
Tanha Nazar Aaate Hain Wahi Raaste Sahra,
Pal Pal Ki Yaadain Satati Hain, Rulati Hain,
Yaadon Se Khaali Ye Daaman Ho Nahin Sakta
Bichadna Kabhi Khoobsurat Ho Nahin Sakta !


Bahoot bahoot Khoob Talat di.. bahoot Khoob !  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #10 on: September 19, 2009, 04:03:32 AM »
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Bahoot bahoot Khoob Talat di.. bahoot Khoob !  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Thanks Sophi, I added one more para !
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«Reply #11 on: September 19, 2009, 04:04:17 AM »
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Simply Fantastic.. Full of emotions... Sach mea Di.. Dard Bare ehsaaso ko bakoobi lafzo ka roop diya hai... Hamesha ki tarah Bahoot Hi laajawaab !

Mohabaat k raste hamesa Muskil hote hai
Bichne ka ehsaas kabhi ,Kabi aasaan nahi hota
Dil Rota hai aaj bhi Usko raat kar raato mea
Yaado mea raat Guzarna , Yun aasaan nahi hota

Mehfil mea jab Koi leta apni Mohabbat ka naam
Apne Dard ko , Lafzo mea daalna itna aasan nahi hota
Bhul jaaye koi apni Mohabbat ko kisi k liye yun
Magar Tanhai mea Unn Yaado lo Bulana aasan nahi hota

!Divya!

Bohot Khoob Divs
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«Reply #12 on: September 19, 2009, 04:05:58 AM »
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Anjaam Mohabbat Ka Judaai Hai Bhala Kyun,
Aankhon Main Ashkon Ki Lagti Hai Jhadi Kyun
Kyun Talwaar Si Hoti Hai Rasm-e-Zamaana,
Bhool Jaayen Use Muskura Ke, Ho Nahin Sakta
Bichadna Kabhi Khoobsurat Ho Nahin Sakta !


Kya baat hai Talat di bahoot Khoob!.. Waah waah waah,. Daad Kabool ho!
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«Reply #13 on: September 19, 2009, 04:06:26 AM »
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Bohot Khoob Divs

Thank you So much Di
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«Reply #14 on: September 19, 2009, 04:09:12 AM »
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bahut achche didi
magar aapne sach main bicchhadne ko khoobsurat bana diya hai
bahut bahut khoob


humein intzaar raha uska jo ghar nahin aaya
jiski yaad main har raat palkon ne maatam manaya
uska kehna tha kii kii woh lautega,main intzaar karoon
uski oos baat ka jaado ab tak hai mere jehan par chhaya
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