**Chorr ke kyun gaya** by Rahim

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Aj dil ne tamana ki likhne ki toh kuch lavz samet paya hoon..Kabhi kabhi kuch log chorr jate hai mager waqt ke saath laut kar bhi aa jate hai..ager apki zindagi main koi aisa shaks hai jo kabhi chorr gaya tha aur aaj apke saath hai, toh iss nazm ko samaj payenge aap...haalat badal jate hai pehle main aur abhi main...woh ehsaason ko bayan toh nahin kar paya mager jo dil ne likhwaya, woh likhgaya...

Faraz Saheb ka ek shaer yaad ata hai mujhe;

Mohobat ke baad mohobat mumkin hai Faraz,
Mager toot kar chahna sirf ek baar hota hai...

Kash woh log jo chorr jate hai woh yeh shaer ko parre aur samajle..toh shayad duniya main koi bhi kisi ko kabhi chorrega nahin...

Chupa lia hai dard ko dil-e-kabrastan main askhon ki tarha,
Muskurahat saja rakhi hai labon par nakli sajawat ki tarha…

Masoom sa dil mera najane gunaah-e-mohobat kar baitha,
Ab tanha rehta hai raat main nikle chand ki tarha…

Aj bhale woh laut aya ho mere pas ikrar-e-mohobat karte hue,
Shikayat hai mujhe gaya tha kyun chorrke ‘Khamosh’ ko bewaffa ki tarha…

Chupa lia hai dard ko dil-e-kabrastan main askhon ki tarha,
Muskurahat saja rakhi hai labon par nakli sajawat ki tarha…


~Rahim~
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«Reply #1 on: June 08, 2010, 05:19:59 AM »
Wah wah Rahim bhai bahut khoobsurat aur dard se bhari nazm pesh kiya aapne.marvelous creation.excellent Hats off to you! Hats off to you! icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #2 on: June 08, 2010, 06:47:10 PM »
Shukriya Madhu di!
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«Reply #3 on: June 08, 2010, 07:36:53 PM »
WAh!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

True feelings !!! Jst KAMAL>>>>>>>>>>>
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«Reply #4 on: June 08, 2010, 08:38:52 PM »
Bahut Bahut Khoob Bhai Rahim!!!

Bahut Mushkil hota hai apne dil ki baaton ko Lafzon mein utaarna Par Bahut Asaani se aap Apne Dil ki Haar Baat Ko lafzon mein Utaar dete ho..
Bahut Hi khoobsurat Peshkash.. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #5 on: June 08, 2010, 08:44:37 PM »
Rahim Bhaiiiiiiii... Bahut hi Khubsoorati se dard ko Apne Lafzon Me utaara Hai.. Ek ek Lafz apne aap me apni Kahaani si Kahata Nazar aaya.. Bahut Lajawab Peshkash hai Bhai..!!! Applause Applause Applause


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«Reply #6 on: June 09, 2010, 12:55:38 AM »
Shukriya Neel jee, Khwahish Dost aur Vikas bhaijan..

Neel jee great to see u back...
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«Reply #7 on: June 15, 2010, 05:46:32 AM »
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Bahut bahut khoob likha hai aapne Rahim bhai... bahut khoob...!!!
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«Reply #8 on: June 15, 2010, 11:15:25 PM »
Shukriya Kapil Dost...
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