Kuchh to haiN qaabil e faham hum bhee...............Mamta Bajpai

by mamta bajpai on May 13, 2011, 09:43:23 AM
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zahar kitane piyaa kare koi
zakhm kitane siyaa kare koi

feeke feeke haiN raNg duniyaa ke
kis tarah se jiyaa kare koi

kaisee khaamoshee kaisaa soonaapan
baat mujhse kaiyaa kare koi

aazmaanaa agar hai ulfat me
qoul mujhse liyaa kare koi

kuchh to haiN qaabil e faham hum bhee
nazr e saanee kiyaa kare koi

Mamta Bajpai
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«Reply #1 on: May 13, 2011, 10:31:21 AM »
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amazingly good...
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«Reply #2 on: May 13, 2011, 02:08:24 PM »
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Shukriyaa VB jee!
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«Reply #3 on: May 13, 2011, 02:18:51 PM »
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«Reply #4 on: May 13, 2011, 02:41:18 PM »
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feeke feeke haiN raNg duniyaa ke
kis tarah se jiyaa kare koi

kaisee khaamoshee kaisaa soonaapan
baat mujhse kaiyaa kare koi
Mamta Bajpai

Kya baat hai Mamta jee..
 Applause Applause Applause Applause
Dil choo liya kalam ne apka..
Khush rahiye..!
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«Reply #5 on: May 13, 2011, 03:48:33 PM »
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kamaal hai ji……

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«Reply #6 on: May 13, 2011, 04:44:28 PM »
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Shukriyaa Rahim jee! gazal aap ko pasand aayee.......hume khushee hui ...apnaa qeematee waqt dene kaa behad shukriyaa......
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«Reply #7 on: May 13, 2011, 04:45:29 PM »
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shukriyaa jee!
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«Reply #8 on: May 13, 2011, 06:43:15 PM »
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Bahut khoob Mamta Ji
Ghazal achchhee hai..

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«Reply #9 on: May 14, 2011, 04:14:36 AM »
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Bahut bahut dhanyawaad Shukla jee!
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«Reply #10 on: May 14, 2011, 04:39:09 AM »
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maate pranaam……

bht din bad apke post par cmnt dene ki himat kar ska…aapki beskimti nagmo par kuch reply krne ke kabil nai smjhta khud ko……

apki ye post……
uff bemishaal hai…
kya khoob sher kahe hain aapne…
itni umda ghazal ko laakhon daad…

apki sabi nagmo ko padha h mene…

han ab aasirwaad se nawajiye hame…
aapke aasirwad ka effect h ki mai aaj apni service join karne aaya hu Usual Smile
thoda kaam aur h…apke aasirwad se wo b ho jayega Usual SmileUsual Smile

aapko sada khus rahne ki dil se dua h meri……
god bless u Usual Smile
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«Reply #11 on: May 14, 2011, 04:52:03 AM »
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Shukriyaa Subhash!jaan kar behad khushee hui keh tum aaj apnee service join kar rahe ho...Eeshwar tumhe safaltaa kee nayee oonchaaiyoN tak pahunchaaye...tumhaare jaise nek bande se badee door rahe aisee shubh-kaamnaaoN ke saath.....mamta
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«Reply #12 on: June 10, 2011, 12:53:46 PM »
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Bahut bahut shukriyaa Niraalaa jee!
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«Reply #13 on: June 10, 2011, 01:01:13 PM »
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very nice mamta di...
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«Reply #14 on: June 10, 2011, 04:11:06 PM »
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Thanks a lot Priya!
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