kuchh toot gaya hay vb jee (NM)

by vb on April 13, 2011, 10:12:28 PM
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Monitors r requested to plz delete...

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«Reply #1 on: April 13, 2011, 10:34:22 PM »
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good vb g but if it is not ur's then why it has ur name in it? some one wrote it for u?
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«Reply #2 on: April 13, 2011, 10:42:06 PM »
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hmmmmmmm........good 1 VB ji
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«Reply #3 on: April 13, 2011, 10:59:39 PM »
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very good poem....thanks for sharing.....VB ji
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«Reply #4 on: April 13, 2011, 11:10:57 PM »
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un k saray lafzon say jo bhee bherm ta toot gaya
wo apna app dikha baithay or to koi bat nahee
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«Reply #5 on: April 14, 2011, 12:25:05 AM »
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tootay ger kuch dahgay to umeedain phir bundh jain gee
rishtoon ka anokha bundhen hay akhir us ko jurna hay

armano ko rait na samjhoo toot k na wo bikhrain gay
bus kuch lamhon ki dairi hay khuab to poora hona hay
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«Reply #6 on: April 14, 2011, 12:29:12 AM »
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chahay kuch bhee kerlo jana jo apnay hain wo laotain gay
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«Reply #7 on: April 14, 2011, 12:50:53 AM »
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toote riste kab judte hain
jud jaaye to gatth padte hain

jo sachche riste hote
na yun fir toota karte
aankho ki kirchan se fir
dil ke lahoo na risaa karte

sach hi kaha kuch toot gaya hai vb jee
koi khaab adhoora chhoot gaya hai vb jee

seeney ka bhi toota hai
aankho ka bhi toota hai

maan bhi jao uzma ji
kuch toot gaya hai uzma ji
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«Reply #8 on: April 14, 2011, 01:19:00 AM »
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jo choot chuka wo kub apna
jo toot chuka wo kub apna

jo apna hay na chootay ga
bus thora so wo rothay ga

kuch thora sa  rolay  ga
or thora wo  satay    ga

akhir ko phir muskay ga
laot k tum tak  aay  ga

k apna akhir apna hay
apna akhir apna hay
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«Reply #9 on: April 14, 2011, 02:08:05 AM »
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jo bikhra raha barson pehlay
uski dharkan bhi maddham hay
usay aadat hay khamoshi kee
chahay harsu shorr ke sargam hay

jinki umeedein toot chukeen
ab unka phir say jurna kya
yeh jeevan ajab paheli hay
kati patang ne urhana kya

sach kehtay hain, jahaan ke mele main
itena asaan nahin jeena marna,
mil jaaye bina jo sajday ke
uska mil ke bhi milna kya

mushkil hoti hay bayan-e-uljhan
asaan hay aanso.on ka beh jaana
jo dhundlahat mein chhup baitha ho
chhoro us khwaab mein beh jaana




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«Reply #10 on: April 14, 2011, 07:56:09 PM »
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ankho se bahte jatey hain
zazbaato se khel wo jatey hain

dil ko bahot tarpatey hain
ghaw kuch aisa lagaatey hain

khurach khurach kar fir ghawon ko
ruh ko bhi jalatey hain

kya maa baap kya bhai bahan kya yar dost
waqt pare sab chor jatey hain

kisse umeed lagaye hum
kaun apna kahlatey hain

jag ki shayd reet yahi
pyar ke do bole nahi sirf dhokhe hi nibhatey hain

wo aaj gaya mai jaunga
fir bhi zism se hi dil behlatey hain

ye murkho ki duniya hai
nasamajh yaha sb buddhimaan kahlaatey hain
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«Reply #11 on: April 14, 2011, 10:48:21 PM »
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yan koi kisi ka meet nahee duniya ka yahee  dastoor  hoa
phir dill keon rog laga baitha is karan keon ranjoor hoa

na moat tairi na zeest tairi na har tairi na jeet tairi
mati k putlay bol zara kis bat  pay too  majboor   hoa

kis kis  ka soog   manay ga kis kis ka roog lagay ga
is jag ka yahee hay reet sanam yae pass aya wo door hoa

jalnay ko dono jaltay hain taqdeer ka chuker dikho to
perwanay jaly to khak hoy or shama jali to noor hoa
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«Reply #12 on: April 14, 2011, 11:05:11 PM »
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dekh na tu khuwab koi
chingari jal kar raakh hui

aansu palak se gire kabi
smjhe sab khusiyo ki barsaat hui

wo tera ye mera karte
dard bhi apna gairo ki khiraat hui

chitt se chamcham ye chitwan
agni ki saugaat hui

koi kahe to jaan bhi de dein
sunn ke badi hairat hui
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vb jee ye thread bahot jada khubsurat aur real hai…
thanx for dis post bhai
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