----- /// Kya ye mohabbat hai /// -----

by ~Hriday~ on October 05, 2010, 12:56:51 AM
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tumhaare hone se hi jeene ki ek aas jagi hai,
fir se mujhe zindagi khoobsurat lagne lagi hai,

doob chuki thi zindagi meri ghum ke samundar me,
fir mujhe khushiyon ki kashti nazar aane lagi hai,

tumhaare saath guzaare ye kuch din zindagi ke,
fir se khud ko chaahne ki aadat padne lagi hai,

aaine me khud ko dekh muskuraata rehta hoon akele,
jaane kyun fir se dil me ek ummeed jagne lagi hai,

kaise mumkin hai ki chot khaake bhi na badle koi,
kyun fir se mohabbat karne ki aarzoo jagne lagi hai,

jaane kya jaadu hai tumhaari aawaaz me, baaton me,
ki sunte hi tumhe dhadkano me tezi aane lagi hai,

socho kitne duur hain hum tumse fir bhi kitne paas hain,
ye kaisa ehsaas hai jo humein itne kareeb laane lagi hai,

kya ye sach me mohabbat hai, ya doobti kashti ka sahaara,
jo humein sahaara de ke toofaan se bachaane lagi hai...


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«Reply #1 on: October 05, 2010, 01:08:19 AM »
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Kapil ........... really Gud 1........

Very very gud..............

DOing good work ..................

Keep smiling ...............
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«Reply #2 on: October 05, 2010, 10:27:42 AM »
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Thank you so so so so much Neel ji.... bahut achcha lagta hai aapka comment dekh ke... bahut miss kar raha tha main aapke comments kuch mahino se... ab achcha lag raha hai main kuch likhte hi aapke sweet sweet se comments mil jaate hain... thank you so much.....!!!
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«Reply #3 on: October 05, 2010, 10:29:14 AM »
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ahaaa ji bahut badhiya likha he aapne dheeer saari daaad .....or wo bhi kam he~
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«Reply #4 on: October 05, 2010, 10:32:13 AM »
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main aapka tahe dil se shukriya adaa karta hoon Abhi ji... bahut bahut shukriya....!!!
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«Reply #5 on: October 05, 2010, 10:36:15 AM »
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bahut bahut Khoob!!! Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #6 on: October 05, 2010, 10:37:20 AM »
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bahut bahut shukriya Khwaish ji...!!!
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«Reply #7 on: October 05, 2010, 10:38:02 AM »
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Kapil ji... main andhere mein doobta raha, aur aap is andhere se ek roshni dikhaate rahe... aapne doobne waalon ko sahaara  dene ki koshish ki uske liye bahut bahut shukriya...

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tumhaare hone se hi jeene ki ek aas jagi hai,
fir se mujhe zindagi khoobsurat lagne lagi hai,

doob chuki thi zindagi meri ghum ke samundar me,
fir mujhe khushiyon ki kashti nazar aane lagi hai,

tumhaare saath guzaare ye kuch din zindagi ke,
fir se khud ko chaahne ki aadat padne lagi hai,

aaine me khud ko dekh muskuraata rehta hoon akele,
jaane kyun fir se dil me ek ummeed jagne lagi hai,

kaise mumkin hai ki chot khaake bhi na badle koi,
kyun fir se mohabbat karne ki aarzoo jagne lagi hai,

jaane kya jaadu hai tumhaari aawaaz me, baaton me,
ki sunte hi tumhe dhadkano me tezi aane lagi hai,

socho kitne duur hain hum tumse fir bhi kitne paas hain,
ye kaisa ehsaas hai jo humein itne kareeb laane lagi hai,

kya ye sach me mohabbat hai, ya doobti kashti ka sahaara,
jo humein sahaara de ke toofaan se bachaane lagi hai...


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«Reply #8 on: October 05, 2010, 10:39:43 AM »
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bhai kuch samajh nahi aayaa....!!! kahaan doob rahe ho?

Kapil ji... main andhere mein doobta raha, aur aap is andhere se ek roshni dikhaate rahe... aapne doobne waalon ko sahaara  dene ki koshish ki uske liye bahut bahut shukriya...

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«Reply #9 on: October 05, 2010, 10:44:26 AM »
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bhai main apni hi nahin un logo ki bhi baat kar raha hun jo log mohabbat mein niraash ho jaate hain aur kisi andhere mein kho jaaate hain... aap ne apni poem ke jariye ek roshni laane ki koshish ki hai bas wahi kehna chah raha tha uske liye shukriya...

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«Reply #10 on: October 05, 2010, 10:47:33 AM »
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oh tab thik hai...
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«Reply #11 on: October 06, 2010, 07:38:17 AM »
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Waah ji waah kapil ji bahut khoob ehsas likhe hai..agar waqai mein apko ye ehsas hone lage hai tou yakinan ye mhbt hi hai ji....take care......
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«Reply #12 on: October 06, 2010, 08:28:13 AM »
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na ji na Geet ji.. kahaan hamaare saath aise khoobsurat haadse hote hain... ye to bas yunhi keyboard pe ungliyaan chala di thi humne... aur kuch ajeeb si cheez ban gayi...aapne pasand kiya iske liye main aapka tahe dil se shukriyaa adaa karta hoon... thank you so much...

you too take care of yourself...
keep smiling...
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