@kyaa baat-kyaa baat# sheba

by Sheba on October 18, 2013, 02:32:01 AM
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                      nisf-e-shab  mere  didaar  ki uski   adaa    kya   kahein!
                       naseem-e-sahar ko hans kar iqraar ki uski ada kya   kahein!!


                        aur mokhtaleef   andaaz  mein  uska  fiza ko  haule haule se.
                        hai  mujh  se pyaar ke  izhaar  ki  uski kya   kahein!



                        naqsh-e-pa  pe  mere  chalna   bharsak qabool nahin use lekin.
                        rakhna qadmo.n ko mere  paayedaar  ki uski  adaa kya kahein!



                        qadr-e-sukhan to  kai  majood  hain  shahr  mein mere jaaniye.
                        per  bazm-e-sukhan  mein mere intezaar ki uski adaa kya kahein!


                        laayaq-e-tahseen  kuch  bhi  to  nahin aitraaf mein mere sheba!
                        rakhna aashiyaane ko gul-e-gulzaar ki uski adaa kya kahein!!
                        
                        





            nisf-e-shab = mid night

            naseem-e-sahar= morning breeze

            naqsh-e-pa= foot print

            mokhtaleef=  different

            paayedaar= making strong

            qadr-e-shukhan= pay respect to the poem
            
            laayaq -e-tahseen= praise worthy, taarif ke laayaq
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«Reply #1 on: October 18, 2013, 02:38:31 AM »
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nice . Applause aakhri 2 ashaar bahut khubsurat.
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«Reply #2 on: October 18, 2013, 02:52:54 AM »
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Waah Waah Waah....

Bahut Bahut Khooooob Sheba Ji...

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«Reply #3 on: October 18, 2013, 03:02:51 AM »
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Bahut Khoob, Kyaa Kehne.
Aapne har Lafaz Ghazal mein Sochkar aur Taraazu mein tol kar likhaa hai.

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«Reply #4 on: October 18, 2013, 03:57:11 AM »
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waah waah bahut khoob Sheba jee.
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«Reply #5 on: October 18, 2013, 04:20:36 AM »
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                       nisf-e-shab  mere  didaar  ki    adaa   uski,   kya   kahein!
                       naseem-e-sahar ko hans kar iqraar ki  adaa uski, kya   kahein!!


                        aur  nastaleeq   andaaz  mein  uska  fiza ko  haule haule se.
                        hai  mujh  se pyaar, ka  izhaar  ki adaa  uski, kya   kahein!



                        naqsh-e-pa  pe  mere  chalna   bharsak qabool nahin use lekin.
                        karna qadmo.n ko hargiz  paayedaar  ki  adaa  uski,kya kahein!



                        qadr-e-sukhan to  kai  majood  hain  shahr  mein mere jaaniye.
                        per  bazm-e-sukhan  mein mere intezaar ki adaa uski,kya kahein!


                        laayaq-e-tahseen  kuch  bhi  to  nahin aitraaf mein mere sheba!
                        per rakhna aashiyaane ko gul-e-gulzaar ki adaa uski,kya kahein!!
                       
                       

Wahhhhhhhhhhhhhhh,Bahut Umda.!!
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«Reply #6 on: October 18, 2013, 08:57:52 AM »
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bahut khoob
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«Reply #7 on: October 18, 2013, 09:19:17 AM »
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ab ek rau n doon to aur kyaa karoon
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«Reply #8 on: October 18, 2013, 10:30:29 AM »
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bahut bahut khubsurat kalaam hai apka....lajawaab Usual Smile
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«Reply #9 on: October 18, 2013, 11:53:08 AM »
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                       nisf-e-shab  mere  didaar  ki    adaa   uski,   kya   kahein!
                       naseem-e-sahar ko hans kar iqraar ki  adaa uski, kya   kahein!!


                        aur mokhtaleef   andaaz  mein  uska  fiza ko  haule haule se.
                        hai  mujh  se pyaar, ka  izhaar  ki adaa  uski, kya   kahein!



                        naqsh-e-pa  pe  mere  chalna   bharsak qabool nahin use lekin.
                        rakhna qadmo.n ko wo  paayedaar  ki  adaa  uski,kya kahein!



                        qadr-e-sukhan to  kai  majood  hain  shahr  mein mere jaaniye.
                        per  bazm-e-sukhan  mein mere intezaar ki adaa uski,kya kahein!


                        laayaq-e-tahseen  kuch  bhi  to  nahin aitraaf mein mere sheba!
                        per rakhna aashiyaane ko gul-e-gulzaar ki adaa uski,kya kahein!!
                       
                       





            nisf-e-shab = mid night

            naseem-e-sahar= morning breeze

            naqsh-e-pa= foot print

            mokhtaleef=  different

            paayedaar= making strong

            qadr-e-shukhan= pay respect to the poem
           
            laayaq -e-tahseen= praise worthy, taarif ke laayaq
Wha wha wha bhut khub
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«Reply #10 on: October 18, 2013, 06:06:42 PM »
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 Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #11 on: October 18, 2013, 09:22:36 PM »
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Shebaa Sahibaa Aadaab...!

Hmmmm kia kaheN ... kalaam ke ahsaas O khayaal toH behad khoobsurat hai jee par jaane kyuN andaaz e bayaaN kuch asardaar nahi raha... Shayad aapki kavish ka radiff aur kafiye meiN aapsi takraao aa raha hai lafzoN meiN isliye... icon_scratch

Waise in khoob ahsaas O khayaal par humari hazaaroN dili daad o mubbarakbad kabul kijiye...

Likhate rahiye... bazm ko roshan karte rahiye...
Shaad O aabaad rahiye...

Khuda Hafez...
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«Reply #12 on: October 18, 2013, 09:57:28 PM »
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Shebaa Sahibaa Aadaab...!

Hmmmm kia kaheN ... kalaam ke ahsaas O khayaal toH behad khoobsurat hai jee par jaane kyuN andaaz e bayaaN kuch asardaar nahi raha... Shayad aapki kavish ka radiff aur kafiye meiN aapsi takraao aa raha hai lafzoN meiN isliye... icon_scratch

Waise in khoob ahsaas O khayaal par humari hazaaroN dili daad o mubbarakbad kabul kijiye...

Likhate rahiye... bazm ko roshan karte rahiye...
Shaad O aabaad rahiye...

Khuda Hafez...


abi subah subah net dekh rahi hoon,

bahut khushi hui tumhaara comments dekh kar ,haan mujhe bhi khushi nahin ho rahi hai ki aisa waahiyaat main ne kyon likha. ek experiment kar rahi thi per punctuation mein mushkil aa rahi thi phir se kuch tabdili ki hai. per kyaa karoon kalaam hi itna kharaab likha hai maine ke kuch nahin kar sakti. kal mera bhi mood off tha ke kyon kiya aisa experiment. jaane do faliure se hi insaan seekhta hai

thank you veru much for the nice comments icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower!
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«Reply #13 on: October 18, 2013, 10:08:35 PM »
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Shebaa Sahibaa Aadaab... !

Good morning jee... Lagta hai humne subha subhaa aapka mood kharaab kar diyaa... tongue3

Chaliye jee mazarrat chahte haiN par kuch observation karne ke bad hume laga ke aapke har ashaar meiN yeH " KII " lafz ne kuch gadbad kar ke rakh dii hai...  read2

Khair phir se mazarrat chahte haiN... ke humare reply se aapka mood phir se kharaab ho gaya...

Shaad O aabaad rahiye...
Khuda Hafez...



                       nisf-e-shab  mere  didaar  ki uski   adaa   uski  kya   kahein!
                       naseem-e-sahar ko hans kar iqraar ki uski ada kya   kahein!!


                        aur mokhtaleef   andaaz  mein  uska  fiza ko  haule haule se.
                        hai  mujh  se pyaar ke  izhaar  ki  uski kya   kahein!



                        naqsh-e-pa  pe  mere  chalna   bharsak qabool nahin use lekin.
                        rakhna qadmo.n ko mere  paayedaar  ki uski  adaa kya kahein!



                        qadr-e-sukhan to  kai  majood  hain  shahr  mein mere jaaniye.
                        per  bazm-e-sukhan  mein mere intezaar ki uski adaa kya kahein!


                        laayaq-e-tahseen  kuch  bhi  to  nahin aitraaf mein mere sheba!
                        rakhna aashiyaane ko gul-e-gulzaar ki uski adaa kya kahein!!
                       
                       





            nisf-e-shab = mid night

            naseem-e-sahar= morning breeze

            naqsh-e-pa= foot print

            mokhtaleef=  different

            paayedaar= making strong

            qadr-e-shukhan= pay respect to the poem
           
            laayaq -e-tahseen= praise worthy, taarif ke laayaq
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«Reply #14 on: October 18, 2013, 10:31:22 PM »
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Shebaa Sahibaa Aadaab... !

Good morning jee... Lagta hai humne subha subhaa aapka mood kharaab kar diyaa... tongue3

Chaliye jee mazarrat chahte haiN par kuch observation karne ke bad hume laga ke aapke har ashaar meiN yeH " KII " lafz ne kuch gadbad kar ke rakh dii hai...  read2

Khair phir se mazarrat chahte haiN... ke humare reply se aapka mood phir se kharaab ho gaya...

Shaad O aabaad rahiye...
Khuda Hafez...





tumhaari khuloos bhari mohabbat hai paas mere yehi kaafi hai parwaaz, kalaam to insaan apni soach se likhta rahta hai kabhi ghalat kabhi sahi. ye likhna zindagi ka aakhir nahin hai bus sachhe dil ki mohabbat salaamat rahe to kalaam aate jaate rahein ge. icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower!
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