Lafzon Mein Gehraai Naa De "Khwaish"

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Main Awaaz Doon Aur Tujhe Sunaai Naa De
Woh Aaene Hi kya Jisme Apna Chehra Dikhai Naa De

Tu Saath  Hai  Bhi Aur Saath Nahi Bhi!!!
Wafaa Ke Naam Par Yuh Be-Wafaai Naa De

Jo Baat Dil Mein Hai Lafzon mein Keh Bhi De
Itna Nadaan Nahi Hoon Ke Mujhe kuch Dikhaai Naa De

Raah mein Chalte-Chalte Rishton ke Maayne Badal Gaye
Aur Kuch Nahi Naa Sahi par Yuhi Jag-Hasaai Naa De..

Main Zakhm-Zakhm Hoon Aur Tujhe Koi Khabar Bhi Nahi!!!
Eh Khuda Itni Bhi sanam Mein Laa-Parwaahi Naa De..

"Khwaish" Haal-E-Dil Sunaata hai Yuhi Iss Mehfil Mein!!!
Kisi Ki Aankh Bhar Aaye,Itni Lafzon Mein Gehraai Naa De

                ~~~~~Khwaish~~~~~
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«Reply #1 on: March 13, 2011, 12:30:57 PM »
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khwaishji as usual behad umda aur khoobsurat peshkash,
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aankh to bhar hi aai hai humari.
bolna tha e khuda kisi ki aankh mein itna paani na de,
Main Awaaz Doon Aur Tujhe Sunaai Naa De
Woh Aaene Hi kya Jisme Apna Chehra Dikhai Naa De

Tu Saath  Hai  Bhi Aur Saath Nahi Bhi!!!
Wafaa Ke Naam Par Yuh Be-Wafaai Naa De

Jo Baat Dil Mein Hai Lafzon mein Keh Bhi De
Itna Nadaan Nahi Hoon Ke Mujhe kuch Dikhaai Naa De

Raah mein Chalte-Chalte Rishton ke Maayne Badal Gaye
Aur Kuch Nahi Naa Sahi par Yuhi Jag-Hasaai Naa De..

Main Zakhm-Zakhm Hoon Aur Tujhe Koi Khabar Bhi Nahi!!!
Eh Khuda Itni Bhi sanam Mein Laa-Parwaahi Naa De..

"Khwaish" Haal-E-Dil Sunaata hai Yuhi Iss Mehfil Mein!!!
Kisi Ki Aankh Bhar Aaye,Itni Lafzon Mein Gehraai Naa De

                ~~~~~Khwaish~~~~~

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«Reply #2 on: March 13, 2011, 12:46:12 PM »
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Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

Rangon me chhupakar apna benuur chehra
K kisiko mere chehre pe udaasi dikhai na de

Wafa ka dusra naam hi dard hai mere dost
Fir bhi koshish karma tu kisiko bewafai na de

Dil ki har baat keh na paoge gairon ki mehfil me
Tu zakhmon ko apne ab yun jag hansaai na de

Har ilzaam she le chup chap na ka ruff zabaan se
Tu is tarah apne begunaahi ki yahan safaai na de

Dekh kar bhi jo mere ehsason ko andekha kare
Mujhe aise sanam se bhi tu ik pal ki judaai na de

“KASAK” uthti hai dil me dard ki bht tez ae KHUDA
Tu fir bhi mujhe unki yaadon ki giraft se rihaai na de…!!!


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«Reply #3 on: March 13, 2011, 12:55:01 PM »
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khwaish ji...........esa likhne ka kya matlab he ?....

hud karte ho yaar.........rulane ke mood me ho kya ?

is poetry ki tarif nahi kar sakta me .........sach kahu to pahli baar kuch esa pada he jise khudke liye likha kah saku ....feel ho raha  he ki ye apne meri life per hi likh diya.......yakin maniye me is post per fit character hu......

well aaj halat alag he aur pahle se kafi behtar bhi ...

har ek para meri life ke bht se dino ko baya kar raha he
kisi ek ke liye kuch kahna mumkin nahi.........

it is one of ur best creation.........bahot hi umda........behtareen

lajawab.........mindblowing.........aur sach se labalab........

dil le gayi apki ye post........
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«Reply #4 on: March 13, 2011, 01:00:02 PM »
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Main Awaaz Doon Aur Tujhe Sunaai Naa De
Woh Aaene Hi kya Jisme Apna Chehra Dikhai Naa De

Tu Saath  Hai  Bhi Aur Saath Nahi Bhi!!!
Wafaa Ke Naam Par Yuh Be-Wafaai Naa De

Jo Baat Dil Mein Hai Lafzon mein Keh Bhi De
Itna Nadaan Nahi Hoon Ke Mujhe kuch Dikhaai Naa De

Raah mein Chalte-Chalte Rishton ke Maayne Badal Gaye
Aur Kuch Nahi Naa Sahi par Yuhi Jag-Hasaai Naa De..

Main Zakhm-Zakhm Hoon Aur Tujhe Koi Khabar Bhi Nahi!!!
Eh Khuda Itni Bhi sanam Mein Laa-Parwaahi Naa De..

"Khwaish" Haal-E-Dil Sunaata hai Yuhi Iss Mehfil Mein!!!
Kisi Ki Aankh Bhar Aaye,Itni Lafzon Mein Gehraai Naa De

                ~~~~~Khwaish~~~~~


waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah janab khawahish sahab kya koob kahaa
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«Reply #5 on: March 13, 2011, 01:00:42 PM »
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anamika ji.........

khwaish ji ki post aur us par apka reply...........bas jannat hi jannat.........

kamal ka jawab he apka........aaj dil ko sambhalna behad mushkil he.........

gujra hua kal ankho ke samne ek film ki tarah gum raha he......iccha thi ki reply du but nahi de paunga ........kyuki rone lagunga aur rona abhi mere liye bahot bada nuksan wala soda he..........anamika ji apke reply me ek ek lafj ne dil me ghar bana liya he.........amajing one.........

well now wat to say......


lovely reply anamika ji......it proves that u r best replier..keep it up dear........
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«Reply #6 on: March 13, 2011, 02:02:21 PM »
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khwaishji as usual behad umda aur khoobsurat peshkash,
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aankh to bhar hi aai hai humari.
bolna tha e khuda kisi ki aankh mein itna paani na de,

Sureshji..Aapka Tehhhh Dillll Se Shukriya...Aap Yuhi Humesha Saath Dete Rahiyega..Bahut bahut Shukriya Aapka..

Aur Muaafi Maangta Hoon Meri Be-tuki Baaton se Agar Aapki Aankhein bhar Aayi To.. icon_flower


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«Reply #7 on: March 13, 2011, 03:10:23 PM »
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Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

Rangon me chhupakar apna benuur chehra
K kisiko mere chehre pe udaasi dikhai na de

Wafa ka dusra naam hi dard hai mere dost
Fir bhi koshish karma tu kisiko bewafai na de

Dil ki har baat keh na paoge gairon ki mehfil me
Tu zakhmon ko apne ab yun jag hansaai na de

Har ilzaam she le chup chap na ka ruff zabaan se
Tu is tarah apne begunaahi ki yahan safaai na de

Dekh kar bhi jo mere ehsason ko andekha kare
Mujhe aise sanam se bhi tu ik pal ki judaai na de

“KASAK” uthti hai dil me dard ki bht tez ae KHUDA
Tu fir bhi mujhe unki yaadon ki giraft se rihaai na de…!!!




Aapka Yeh Jawab Sach mein Lajawaab Hai!!!!

Naa Jaane kitne baar aapka yeh jawaab Padh Chuka Hoon..Bahut Hi Khoobsurat, Dilnasheen jaawaab!!! Bahut Bahut Khoob Anuji..

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Jaanta Hoon, Aapko Mujhse Reply Ki umeed Hogi..Kuch pal Aur!!! Bhaut Jald yahan Par likhunga.. icon_flower


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waiting khwaish ji for kuch aur pal......tongue3
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anamika ji.........

khwaish ji ki post aur us par apka reply...........bas jannat hi jannat.........

kamal ka jawab he apka........aaj dil ko sambhalna behad mushkil he.........

gujra hua kal ankho ke samne ek film ki tarah gum raha he......iccha thi ki reply du but nahi de paunga ........kyuki rone lagunga aur rona abhi mere liye bahot bada nuksan wala soda he..........anamika ji apke reply me ek ek lafj ne dil me ghar bana liya he.........amajing one.........

well now wat to say......


lovely reply anamika ji......it proves that u r best replier..keep it up dear........

rajaji......kya kahun aapne itna sab keh diya k.....ab thnx bhi nahin keh sakti......
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«Reply #10 on: March 13, 2011, 04:51:45 PM »
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Khawahish Jee Aadaab!


Kia khoob kalaam kahi hai janab.. behad gehre ashaar
kahe hai... aur bayaani bhi behad umdaa ki hai... Usual Smile

Dil se daad hazir hai janab

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Main Awaaz Doon Aur Tujhe Sunaai Naa De
Woh Aaene Hi kya Jisme Apna Chehra Dikhai Naa De

Bahut khoob janab Behad sahiN farmayaa , Usual Smile         

Tu Saath  Hai  Bhi Aur Saath Nahi Bhi!!!
Wafaa Ke Naam Par Yuh Be-Wafaai Naa De

Waah janab bahut khoob Usual Smile         

Jo Baat Dil Mein Hai Lafzon mein Keh Bhi De
Itna Nadaan Nahi Hoon Ke Mujhe kuch Dikhaai Naa De

Waah waah janab kia kahne waqai dilfareb sher kaha hai daad Usual Smile         

Raah mein Chalte-Chalte Rishton ke Maayne Badal Gaye
Aur Kuch Nahi Naa Sahi par Yuhi Jag-Hasaai Naa De..

Kia kahne janab behad umdaa khayaal aur kafi gehri baat kahi hai aapne daad Usual Smile         

Main Zakhm-Zakhm Hoon Aur use Koi Khabar Bhi Nahi!!!
Eh Khuda Itni Bhi sanam Mein Laa-Parwaahi Naa De..

Bahut khoob janab daad....
Sanam La parwaahi hote hai .... KyuN ke sanam pathar ki murat ko hi kaha jata hai Usual Smile         


"Khwaish" Haal-E-Dil Sunaata hai Yuhi Iss Mehfil Mein!!!
Kisi Ki Aankh Bhar Aaye,Itni Lafzon Mein Gehraai Naa De

Waah bahut khoob daad ... achcha maqta raha Usual Smile         

                ~~~~~Khwaish~~~~~


Is khoob kalaam par dheroN daad kabool kijiye.. Khawahish jee....

Likhate rahiye.....
Khush O aabaad rahiye,
Khuda Hafez Usual Smile         


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«Reply #11 on: March 13, 2011, 05:34:40 PM »
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Bahut khoob khwaish ji..
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«Reply #12 on: March 13, 2011, 07:05:24 PM »
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Main Awaaz Doon Aur Tujhe Sunaai Naa De
Woh Aaene Hi kya Jisme Apna Chehra Dikhai Naa De

Tu Saath  Hai  Bhi Aur Saath Nahi Bhi!!!
Wafaa Ke Naam Par Yuh Be-Wafaai Naa De

Jo Baat Dil Mein Hai Lafzon mein Keh Bhi De
Itna Nadaan Nahi Hoon Ke Mujhe kuch Dikhaai Naa De

Raah mein Chalte-Chalte Rishton ke Maayne Badal Gaye
Aur Kuch Nahi Naa Sahi par Yuhi Jag-Hasaai Naa De..

Main Zakhm-Zakhm Hoon Aur Tujhe Koi Khabar Bhi Nahi!!!
Eh Khuda Itni Bhi sanam Mein Laa-Parwaahi Naa De..

"Khwaish" Haal-E-Dil Sunaata hai Yuhi Iss Mehfil Mein!!!
Kisi Ki Aankh Bhar Aaye,Itni Lafzon Mein Gehraai Naa De

                ~~~~~Khwaish~~~~~


Kya baat hai ..... bahut khoooooooob .... khwaish ji !

bahut umdaa peshkash rahi ...... !

dil se daad ...... ! Applause Applause Applause

aise hi likhte rahen ... khush rahen ... !

duaaoN ke saath ... !
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Wah wah Khwaish ji,maza aa gayi aapke pyari si kavita ko padke,kya adaaz hai ufffffff,aur Kasak ji aapne bhi bahut dard bhari khoobsurat lines likhi,great creation,hats off icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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wah wah khwaishji...,. kya kahen hamm...... bas kurban ho gaye aapki is rachna par... mar gaye.... kya likha hai.... ese lagta hai jaise dil khol kar rakh diya ho..... bahut khub....\

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