Lanat Teri Bewafai per

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Kar ke mujhse bewafai, aoro main mujhe dhoonda kiye
lanat teri bewafai per, kaya soch kar aise insaan dunia main jiya kare

Phir se wahi natak, phir se wo hi dhoka giri
kis tarah wehashi insaan, insaaniyat ka khoon piya kare

Na umar ki sharm, na zindagi ka takaza
kis besharmi se wo, apne he khoon (kids)ka khoon kiya kare

her dhoke ko samjhe vijay, her loot ko haq apna
kaise bacho ke munh se chin roti, ayaashi yah insaan kiya kare

Kar ke mujhse bewafai, aoro main mujhe dhoonda kiye
lanat teri bewafai per, kaya soch kar aise insaan dunia main jiya kare
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«Reply #1 on: April 10, 2009, 12:33:17 AM »
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NICE CREATION POOJA JEE..
SAMAAJ KO AAINA DIKHAYA HAI AAPNE....

GUD ONE..
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«Reply #2 on: April 10, 2009, 12:35:47 AM »
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Shukaria Pandit ji!!! Bas kaam karte karte, pata nahi man mai kaya ayya aor kalam likhati chali gai !!!
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«Reply #3 on: April 10, 2009, 12:37:46 AM »
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Shukaria Pandit ji!!! Bas kaam karte karte, pata nahi man mai kaya ayya aor kalam likhati chali gai !!!

TRUE..
I WAS ALSO AMAZED..
KI ABHI TO WORKING TIME HAI AND POOJA JE NE ITNI GEHRAI SE BHARI LINES LIKH RAHII HAIN...

NEVER MIND..THAT WAS GREAT........... Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #4 on: April 10, 2009, 02:41:20 AM »
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Kar ke mujhse bewafai, aoro main mujhe dhoonda kiye
lanat teri bewafai per, kaya soch kar aise insaan dunia main jiya kare

Phir se wahi natak, phir se wo hi dhoka giri
kis tarah wehashi insaan, insaaniyat ka khoon piya kare

Na umar ki sharm, na zindagi ka takaza
kis besharmi se wo, apne he khoon (kids)ka khoon kiya kare

her dhoke ko samjhe vijay, her loot ko haq apna
kaise bacho ke munh se chin roti, ayaashi yah insaan kiya kare

Kar ke mujhse bewafai, aoro main mujhe dhoonda kiye
lanat teri bewafai per, kaya soch kar aise insaan dunia main jiya kare


Waah...Pooja, Samaj ke ghinaune sach ko aapne badi khoobsurti se shabodon main baandha hai....Bohot Khoob !
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«Reply #5 on: April 10, 2009, 08:04:37 AM »
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Kar ke mujhse bewafai, aoro main mujhe dhoonda kiye
lanat teri bewafai per, kaya soch kar aise insaan dunia main jiya kare

Phir se wahi natak, phir se wo hi dhoka giri
kis tarah wehashi insaan, insaaniyat ka khoon piya kare

Na umar ki sharm, na zindagi ka takaza
kis besharmi se wo, apne he khoon (kids)ka khoon kiya kare

her dhoke ko samjhe vijay, her loot ko haq apna
kaise bacho ke munh se chin roti, ayaashi yah insaan kiya kare

Kar ke mujhse bewafai, aoro main mujhe dhoonda kiye
lanat teri bewafai per, kaya soch kar aise insaan dunia main jiya kare

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Wah wah wah.... Last four lines bahut accha laga padkar. Too good di..


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«Reply #6 on: April 10, 2009, 08:18:13 AM »
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Bahut hi khoob Pooja di..

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«Reply #7 on: April 10, 2009, 09:24:59 AM »
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bohat bohat khoob bohat umda pooja ji...
bohat khoobsoorati se naraazgi jataai aapne.....
bohat khoob khayal likha aapne..... Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #8 on: April 10, 2009, 10:04:21 AM »
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Nice work Pooja... very well said..
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«Reply #9 on: April 10, 2009, 10:37:52 AM »
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Very Very Nice Pooja. Di.. Bahoot hi acha aur sacha likha hai aapne.. Winking
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«Reply #10 on: April 10, 2009, 03:52:31 PM »
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bohot achhe pooja di!
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«Reply #11 on: April 11, 2009, 01:49:33 AM »
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Bahoot acha laga yah dekh kar, jis arth main yah kavita likhi gai... bahoot yo-members ne use samjha aor saraha hai!! Ajj Insaaniyat ka bahoot bada durbhagye hai yah ki insaan apne sawarth main... apno ko kitna dard deta ja raha hai!!

Waah...Pooja, Samaj ke ghinaune sach ko aapne badi khoobsurti se shabodon main baandha hai....Bohot Khoob !

Thanks Celmira!!!

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Wah wah wah.... Last four lines bahut accha laga padkar. Too good di..





Thanks Roja!!

Bahut hi khoob Pooja di..

Applause

bahoot bahoot shukaria Angel!!

bohat bohat khoob bohat umda pooja ji...
bohat khoobsoorati se naraazgi jataai aapne.....
bohat khoob khayal likha aapne..... Applause Applause Applause

Thanks Saurabh ji!!

Nice work Pooja... very well said..

Thanks Sajid!!

Very Very Nice Pooja. Di.. Bahoot hi acha aur sacha likha hai aapne.. Winking

Shukaria Sophi!!


bohot achhe pooja di!

Thanks Sanya!!!
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«Reply #12 on: April 20, 2009, 11:21:17 PM »
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Bahoot khoob Pooja ji, waha, waha!!
tum jinta sunder likhti ho , shayad tum itni sunder bhee ho.
well, humne bhee irshad kiya hai- par ye likha kishne hai ye pata nahi

Agar rakh sakho to 1 nishani hu main,
Aur kho do to sirf 1 kahani hu main,
Rok paye na jisko ye saari duniya,
Vo 1 boondh ankh ka paani hu main.............!!!!


Sabko pyar dene ki aadat hai hume,
Apni alag pehchan banane ki aadat hai hume,
Kitna bhi gehra jakhm de koi,
Utna hi jyada muskurane ki aadat hai hume.....!!!!

fir farmaya hai
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Is anjnabi duniya mein,Akela ek khawaab hu,
Sawaalo se khafa,Chhota sa jawaab hu,


Jo na samjh sake,Unke liye "KOUN",
Jo samajh chuke,Unke liye kitaab hu,


Duniya ki nazar mein,Jaane kyu chubha sa,
Sabse nashila aur badnaam sharaab hu,


Sar uthakar dekho,Wo dekh raha hai tumko,
Jisko na dekha usne,Wo chamakta aaftab hu,


Aankh se dekhoge,To khush paoge,
Dil se poochoge,To dard ka sailaab hu.........!!!!

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fir farmaya hai
do muhan achhe hai rakeeb main kishi mashoom ko das jaane ko
kaisa swad hota hai jara tum bataona .
alif koi to muhan kholo , main betab hoon hakikat khuda ki mahafil main laane ko

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«Reply #13 on: April 21, 2009, 07:48:29 AM »
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Nice sharing Forgot ji  Thumbs UP
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«Reply #14 on: April 21, 2009, 07:57:36 AM »
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Bahoot khoob Pooja ji, waha, waha!!
tum jinta sunder likhti ho , shayad tum itni sunder bhee ho.
well, humne bhee irshad kiya hai- par ye likha kishne hai ye pata nahi

Agar rakh sakho to 1 nishani hu main,
Aur kho do to sirf 1 kahani hu main,
Rok paye na jisko ye saari duniya,
Vo 1 boondh ankh ka paani hu main.............!!!!


Sabko pyar dene ki aadat hai hume,
Apni alag pehchan banane ki aadat hai hume,
Kitna bhi gehra jakhm de koi,
Utna hi jyada muskurane ki aadat hai hume.....!!!!

fir farmaya hai
---------------------------
Is anjnabi duniya mein,Akela ek khawaab hu,
Sawaalo se khafa,Chhota sa jawaab hu,


Jo na samjh sake,Unke liye "KOUN",
Jo samajh chuke,Unke liye kitaab hu,


Duniya ki nazar mein,Jaane kyu chubha sa,
Sabse nashila aur badnaam sharaab hu,


Sar uthakar dekho,Wo dekh raha hai tumko,
Jisko na dekha usne,Wo chamakta aaftab hu,


Aankh se dekhoge,To khush paoge,
Dil se poochoge,To dard ka sailaab hu.........!!!!

-----------------------------------------------
fir farmaya hai
do muhan achhe hai rakeeb main kishi mashoom ko das jaane ko
kaisa swad hota hai jara tum bataona .
alif koi to muhan kholo , main betab hoon hakikat khuda ki mahafil main laane ko




nice work Forgot..
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