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jisne har mehfil ko sajaaya tha,
aaj usi ki mehfil me tanhaayi hai,
jisne kabhi sabko hasna sikhaya tha,
aaj usi ke dil me dard-e-judaai hai,

kya rishtey aise nibhaaye jaate hain,
koi rota hai to use aur rulaate hain,
koshish nahi karte koi samjhaane ki,
zakhmo pe har koi namak lagaate hain,

kisi ke bhi khushi me shaamil ho jaate hain,
kyun nahi koi ghum me saath nibhaate hain,
kya itna mushkil hai dosti nibhana, ki log
jarurat ke samay saath chhod jaate hain,

main ye nahi kehta ki aake saahnubhuti den,
par jo rota hai usko kyun nahi hasaate hain,
apne khushiyon me log aise doobe rehte hain,
ki apno ke dard ko bhi we bhool jaate hain,

hasne ke liye bas hothon ki jarurt hoti hai,
bas un hothon ko failaana bhool jaate hain,
kehne ke liye hazaaron dost hote hain magar,
wo waqt pe dosti nibhaana bhool jaate hain...


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«Reply #1 on: August 31, 2010, 10:13:24 AM »
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mind blowing post kapil.........
dil chhu gai re....
very true,,,,,jo sabke sath hota hai uska end akele hi hota hai...
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«Reply #2 on: August 31, 2010, 10:21:08 AM »
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awesome creation klaskar ji......

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«Reply #3 on: August 31, 2010, 10:21:29 AM »
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Sach kaha aapne log bhul jaate hain.... Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
Hum saath nibhate hain unka milon tak....
Wo manzil pe aake naam tak hamaara bhul jaate hain....
Ehsaan kya maanenge wo hamaara..
kandho pe hamaare chadh k Uchhal jaatein hain...


jisne har mehfil ko sajaaya tha,
aaj usi ki mehfil me tanhaayi hai,
jisne kabhi sabko hasna sikhaya tha,
aaj usi ke dil me dard-e-judaai hai,

kya rishtey aise nibhaaye jaate hain,
koi rota hai to use aur rulaate hain,
koshish nahi karte koi samjhaane ki,
zakhmo pe har koi namak lagaate hain,

kisi ke bhi khushi me shaamil ho jaate hain,
kyun nahi koi ghum me saath nibhaate hain,
kya itna mushkil hai dosti nibhana, ki log
jarurat ke samay saath chhod jaate hain,

main ye nahi kehta ki aake saahnubhuti den,
par jo rota hai usko kyun nahi hasaate hain,
apne khushiyon me log aise doobe rehte hain,
ki apno ke dard ko bhi we bhool jaate hain,

hasne ke liye bas hothon ki jarurt hoti hai,
bas un hothon ko failaana bhool jaate hain,
kehne ke liye hazaaron dost hote hain magar,
wo waqt pe dosti nibhaana bhool jaate hain...


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«Reply #4 on: August 31, 2010, 10:28:34 AM »
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jisne har mehfil ko sajaaya tha,
aaj usi ki mehfil me tanhaayi hai,
jisne kabhi sabko hasna sikhaya tha,
aaj usi ke dil me dard-e-judaai hai,

kya rishtey aise nibhaaye jaate hain,
koi rota hai to use aur rulaate hain,
koshish nahi karte koi samjhaane ki,
zakhmo pe har koi namak lagaate hain,

kisi ke bhi khushi me shaamil ho jaate hain,
kyun nahi koi ghum me saath nibhaate hain,
kya itna mushkil hai dosti nibhana, ki log
jarurat ke samay saath chhod jaate hain,

main ye nahi kehta ki aake saahnubhuti den,
par jo rota hai usko kyun nahi hasaate hain,
apne khushiyon me log aise doobe rehte hain,
ki apno ke dard ko bhi we bhool jaate hain,

hasne ke liye bas hothon ki jarurt hoti hai,
bas un hothon ko failaana bhool jaate hain,
kehne ke liye hazaaron dost hote hain magar,
wo waqt pe dosti nibhaana bhool jaate hain...


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Duniya Ke Iss Bheed Mein Woh Aksar Tanha Rehta Hai"
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«Reply #5 on: August 31, 2010, 10:48:23 AM »
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Khwaishji sahi salaah de rahe hain aap Kapil ko....kuchh hasne ka mood hai... Giggle
"Ek ke Dil Mein Jo Apni Jagah Bana Leta Hai
Duniya Ki Iss Bheed Mein Woh Aksar Tanha Reh jata Hai"...... Winking

Bahut bahut Khoob Kapil Ji.. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Kuch Haqeeqat Se rubaroo Karati Hui yeh Peshkash bahut Kuch keh Gayi..

Ek sher Kehna chaahunga..Jo Ki Aaj Ke daur Ki Haqeeqat Hai..

"Har Ek ke Dil Mein Jo Apni Jagah Bana Leta Hai
Duniya Ke Iss Bheed Mein Woh Aksar Tanha Rehta Hai"

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«Reply #6 on: August 31, 2010, 01:17:31 PM »
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ACHCHEE KOSHISH HAI KAPIL JEE...DARD KEE ZAMEEN SE HEE KAVITA KA SROT  PHOOT-TA HAI.......
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«Reply #7 on: August 31, 2010, 06:31:34 PM »
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jisne har mehfil ko sajaaya tha,
aaj usi ki mehfil me tanhaayi hai,
jisne kabhi sabko hasna sikhaya tha,
aaj usi ke dil me dard-e-judaai hai,

kya rishtey aise nibhaaye jaate hain,
koi rota hai to use aur rulaate hain,
koshish nahi karte koi samjhaane ki,
zakhmo pe har koi namak lagaate hain,

kisi ke bhi khushi me shaamil ho jaate hain,
kyun nahi koi ghum me saath nibhaate hain,
kya itna mushkil hai dosti nibhana, ki log
jarurat ke samay saath chhod jaate hain,

main ye nahi kehta ki aake saahnubhuti den,
par jo rota hai usko kyun nahi hasaate hain,
apne khushiyon me log aise doobe rehte hain,
ki apno ke dard ko bhi we bhool jaate hain,

hasne ke liye bas hothon ki jarurt hoti hai,
bas un hothon ko failaana bhool jaate hain,
kehne ke liye hazaaron dost hote hain magar,
wo waqt pe dosti nibhaana bhool jaate hain...


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BAHUT KHOOB KALASKAR SAHAB EK BEHTREEN PESHKASH JO AAJ KE SAMAAJ SE WABASTA HAI....VERY NICE
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«Reply #8 on: August 31, 2010, 10:10:58 PM »
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jisne har mehfil ko sajaaya tha,
aaj usi ki mehfil me tanhaayi hai,
jisne kabhi sabko hasna sikhaya tha,
aaj usi ke dil me dard-e-judaai hai,

kya rishtey aise nibhaaye jaate hain,
koi rota hai to use aur rulaate hain,
koshish nahi karte koi samjhaane ki,
zakhmo pe har koi namak lagaate hain,

kisi ke bhi khushi me shaamil ho jaate hain,
kyun nahi koi ghum me saath nibhaate hain,
kya itna mushkil hai dosti nibhana, ki log
jarurat ke samay saath chhod jaate hain,

main ye nahi kehta ki aake saahnubhuti den,
par jo rota hai usko kyun nahi hasaate hain,
apne khushiyon me log aise doobe rehte hain,
ki apno ke dard ko bhi we bhool jaate hain,

hasne ke liye bas hothon ki jarurt hoti hai,
bas un hothon ko failaana bhool jaate hain,
kehne ke liye hazaaron dost hote hain magar,
wo waqt pe dosti nibhaana bhool jaate hain...


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«Reply #9 on: September 01, 2010, 08:39:28 AM »
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jisne har mehfil ko sajaaya tha,
aaj usi ki mehfil me tanhaayi hai,
jisne kabhi sabko hasna sikhaya tha,
aaj usi ke dil me dard-e-judaai hai,

kya rishtey aise nibhaaye jaate hain,
koi rota hai to use aur rulaate hain,
koshish nahi karte koi samjhaane ki,
zakhmo pe har koi namak lagaate hain,

kisi ke bhi khushi me shaamil ho jaate hain,
kyun nahi koi ghum me saath nibhaate hain,
kya itna mushkil hai dosti nibhana, ki log
jarurat ke samay saath chhod jaate hain,

main ye nahi kehta ki aake saahnubhuti den,
par jo rota hai usko kyun nahi hasaate hain,
apne khushiyon me log aise doobe rehte hain,
ki apno ke dard ko bhi we bhool jaate hain,

hasne ke liye bas hothon ki jarurt hoti hai,
bas un hothon ko failaana bhool jaate hain,
kehne ke liye hazaaron dost hote hain magar,
wo waqt pe dosti nibhaana bhool jaate hain...


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GUD ONE KLASKAR JI
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«Reply #10 on: September 01, 2010, 07:34:02 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriya Kasak ji....!!!

mind blowing post kapil.........
dil chhu gai re....
very true,,,,,jo sabke sath hota hai uska end akele hi hota hai...
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«Reply #11 on: September 02, 2010, 02:41:11 AM »
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  Bahut haqeeqat se bhare khayalaat pesh kare hai Kapil ji aapne,bahut badhiya. Thumbs UP
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«Reply #12 on: September 02, 2010, 06:06:03 PM »
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Thank you so much Devangi ji...!!!

awesome creation klaskar ji......

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«Reply #13 on: September 02, 2010, 06:49:49 PM »
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shukriya Koyal ji aapki taaliyon ke liye... aur aapne bahut pyaara jawaab likha hai... Usual Smile

Sach kaha aapne log bhul jaate hain.... Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
Hum saath nibhate hain unka milon tak....
Wo manzil pe aake naam tak hamaara bhul jaate hain....
Ehsaan kya maanenge wo hamaara..
kandho pe hamaare chadh k Uchhal jaatein hain...

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Kapil ........ aap jaise dost bi duniya main hai ....... jo doston ke liye kuch bi kar jate hai ....... u guys r bigest xample ..... THNX>>>>>>>>>>> a lot

Maine nahi socha tha muze aise yaha bulaya jayga ...... App ne muze apna karzdaar bana liya ....... Tumne bhut bhut khoob likha hai Jst "KAMAL"..............

Hum bi un doston main hai JO dosti nibhana jante hai
Unke ansoon apni ankon main le ke , Unko hasana jante hai
Rah pe chalte hue agar tokar lage to ,unko thamna hum jante hai
Is duniya main har tarh ke insaan hai paar eh mere dost
agar chot unne lage kabhi to unka drad khud pe lena hum jante hai
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