~*~ Maikhaane reh gaye ~*~ by Rahym

by dead heart on January 28, 2013, 04:23:14 PM
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Iss duniya main shamil kaise zalim zamane reh gaye,
Wafa nibhane wala bas wafa se hi baigane reh gaye..

Itni shiddat se chaha usse kay dobara mohobat kar na sake,
Jazbaat toh rahe na, dil pe bas zakhm purane reh gaye..

Duniya kehti thi us’se wafadar koi dusra nahin aj kay daur main,
Hairan hoon kay sabhi uski shaksiyat se anjaane reh gaye..

Bhale sabhi ko, mager dil khol kay raahat toh milti hai yahan,
Tujse zada saath dene wale toh yeh bezuban maikhane reh gaye..

Uss raaste ka pata dafna diya jisne tujse mujhe milwaya tha mujhe,
Mager aj bhi uss raah par ‘Khamosh’ kay kadaam kay nishane reh gaye..

~..Rahym..~..A Silent Heart..~
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«Reply #6 on: January 29, 2013, 06:00:51 AM »
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Quote from: -Rahim- on January 28, 2013, 04:23:14 PM
Iss duniya main shamil kaise zalim zamane reh gaye,
Wafa nibhane wala bas wafa se hi baigane reh gaye..

Itni shiddat se chaha usse kay dobara mohobat kar na sake,
Jazbaat toh rahe na, dil pe bas zakhm purane reh gaye..

Duniya kehti thi us’se wafadar koi dusra nahin aj kay daur main,
Hairan hoon kay sabhi uski shaksiyat se anjaane reh gaye..

Bhale sabhi ko, mager dil khol kay raahat toh milti hai yahan,
Tujse zada saath dene wale toh yeh bezuban maikhane reh gaye..

Uss raaste ka pata dafna diya jisne tujse mujhe milwaya tha mujhe,
Mager aj bhi uss raah par ‘Khamosh’ kay kadaam kay nishane reh gaye..

~..Rahym..~..A Silent Heart..~
ZABARDAST RAHIM SAHAB ,,,LAJAWAABB
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«Reply #8 on: January 29, 2013, 08:33:35 AM »
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Quote from: -Rahim- on January 28, 2013, 04:23:14 PM
Iss duniya main shamil kaise zalim zamane reh gaye,
Wafa nibhane wala bas wafa se hi baigane reh gaye..

Itni shiddat se chaha usse kay dobara mohobat kar na sake,
Jazbaat toh rahe na, dil pe bas zakhm purane reh gaye..

Duniya kehti thi us’se wafadar koi dusra nahin aj kay daur main,
Hairan hoon kay sabhi uski shaksiyat se anjaane reh gaye..

Bhale sabhi ko, mager dil khol kay raahat toh milti hai yahan,
Tujse zada saath dene wale toh yeh bezuban maikhane reh gaye..

Uss raaste ka pata dafna diya jisne tujse mujhe milwaya tha mujhe,
Mager aj bhi uss raah par ‘Khamosh’ kay kadaam kay nishane reh gaye..

~..Rahym..~..A Silent Heart..~


Bahut Bahut Khooooob Dost Rahim..

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«Reply #9 on: January 29, 2013, 08:55:29 AM »
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Rahim Sahaab Aadaab!


Bahut khoob janab, bade hi khoob aur umdaa khayaalat ko
khoob lafz diye haiN aapne... Usual Smile

Sabhi ashaar qabil e daad hai... is khoob kalaam par humari
dheroN dili daad O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye... Usual Smile


Likhate rahiye... bazm meiN aate rahiye...
Shaad O aabaad rahiye...

Khuda Hafez... Usual Smile
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waah dost--
dil khus ho jata h aapko parhkr--kaafi dino baad aapki post parha--yade taazi ho gai meri.

daad aur mubarakbaad kubul karen.
khus rahen.

!
Chahat thi aapsa likhne ki Rahim Bhai magar, ho na ska
Hum khud ko laakh aazmate reh gaye

tha Sarfira kbhi jhlkta tha jo baaton se
on public demand aaj bhi sarfire k Sarfire reh gaye
!
be happy dost Usual Smile
gd bless
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«Reply #11 on: January 29, 2013, 02:36:16 PM »
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Quote from: RAJAN KONDAL on January 28, 2013, 05:57:10 PM
wha ji wha
Bahaut shukriya Rajan jee..
Khush rahiye..!

Quote from: Aarish on January 29, 2013, 02:02:33 AM
bohut umda khayalaat haiN aapke....
Bahaut shukriya Aarish jee..
Khush rahiye..!

Quote from: sksaini4 on January 29, 2013, 04:05:36 AM
bahut khoobsoorat
Bahaut shukriya Saini jee..
Khush rahiye..!

Quote from: nandbahu on January 29, 2013, 05:23:37 AM
wah wah
Bahaut shukriya Nandbahu jee..
Khush rahiye..!

Quote from: prashad on January 29, 2013, 05:49:44 AM
bahut khoobsoorat
Bahaut shukriya Prashad jee..
Khush rahiye..!

Quote from: sahal on January 29, 2013, 06:00:51 AM
ZABARDAST RAHIM SAHAB ,,,LAJAWAABB
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Bahaut shukriya Sahal jee..
Khush rahiye..!

Quote from: suman59 on January 29, 2013, 06:07:15 AM
bahut acha likha hai aapne rahim jee
Bahaut shukriya Suman jee..
Khush rahiye..!

Quote from: khwaish on January 29, 2013, 08:33:35 AM

Bahut Bahut Khooooob Dost Rahim..

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Bahaut shukriya Khwaish dost..
Khush rahiye..!

Quote from: ParwaaZ on January 29, 2013, 08:55:29 AM
Rahim Sahaab Aadaab!


Bahut khoob janab, bade hi khoob aur umdaa khayaalat ko
khoob lafz diye haiN aapne... Usual Smile

Sabhi ashaar qabil e daad hai... is khoob kalaam par humari
dheroN dili daad O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye... Usual Smile


Likhate rahiye... bazm meiN aate rahiye...
Shaad O aabaad rahiye...

Khuda Hafez... Usual Smile


Bahaut shukriya Parwaaz Sahab..
Khush rahiye..!

Quote from: sarfira on January 29, 2013, 09:17:16 AM
waah dost--
dil khus ho jata h aapko parhkr--kaafi dino baad aapki post parha--yade taazi ho gai meri.

daad aur mubarakbaad kubul karen.
khus rahen.

!
Chahat thi aapsa likhne ki Rahim Bhai magar, ho na ska
Hum khud ko laakh aazmate reh gaye

tha Sarfira kbhi jhlkta tha jo baaton se
on public demand aaj bhi sarfire k Sarfire reh gaye
!
be happy dost Usual Smile
gd bless
Apka tahe tahe dil se shukriya dost..
bade dino baad apne humari kisi kalam par comment kiya,
bahaut khushi hui..
Khush rahiye..!

Quote from: ~Hriday~ on January 29, 2013, 02:36:16 PM
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Bahaut shukriya Kapil dost..
Khush rahiye..!
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bahut gahre ehsaas... bahut khooob..
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Quote from: vimmi singh on January 30, 2013, 02:28:31 PM
bahut gahre ehsaas... bahut khooob..
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Bahaut bahaut shukriya Vimmi jee..
Khush rahiye..!
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