~*~ Dhoor nahin jaunga ~*~ by Rahym

by dead heart on January 22, 2013, 04:19:43 PM
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Jab tak hai umeed is dil main mere, koshish main karta jaunga,
Bulava ayega uss Rabb ka, akhri uss sans tak mohobat karta jaunga..

Ik arse baad mila hai koi apna iss ajnabi si zalim duniya main mujhe,
Bichda jo tu mujse mere humdum, sach kehta hoon, bikhar jaunga..

Kareeb hai tere dil se jitni tere dil ki dhadkanein mere yaar,
Tujhe ehsaas bhi nahin hoga aur tujhme uss gehrayi tak bas jaunga..

Tere kareeb aa kar ehsaas hua hai, tujhe bharose par bharosa na raha,
Kitabi baatein nahin karta main kay tere bin jee nahin paunga..

 Ek baar tu mera haath thamle, vaada karta hoon khush rakhunga,
Jaise pee jati hai sharab sharafat ko, tere ghum main pee jaunga..

Be buniyaad aur bin jazbaat kay lavzon pe kayam nahin hai ‘Khamosh’,
Jo kaha hai, wohi mehsoos kiya hai, bharosa rakh, har vaada nibhaunga,
Tu jab tak khud nahin kehti, main dhoor nahin jaunga…dhoor nahin jaunga..

~..Rahym..~..A Silent Heart..~
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Bohat Khub!!!

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«Reply #2 on: January 22, 2013, 06:12:20 PM »
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Bahut Bahut Khoob Mere Dost

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«Reply #3 on: January 22, 2013, 06:30:07 PM »
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Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
waah bhaai waah... bahut der der se aate ho aur jab bhi aate ho koi dhamaakaa le ke aate ho... maan gaye ustaad kyaa khoob likhaa hai... bahut bahut khoob Rahim bhaai.....!!!
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«Reply #4 on: January 23, 2013, 02:37:57 AM »
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wqah wah wah  Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #5 on: January 23, 2013, 04:37:53 AM »
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excellent
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«Reply #6 on: January 23, 2013, 10:11:47 AM »
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 mind blowing rahim jee
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«Reply #7 on: January 23, 2013, 12:03:07 PM »
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Rahim Sahaab Aadaab!


Kia baat hai janab badi achchi kalaam kahi hai, ahsaas O khayaal
behad khoob rahe... Usual Smile

aur aakhri do ashaar behad khoob rahe janab... Usual Smile
Is khoob kalaam par humari dheroN dili daad O mubbarakbad kabul
kijiye... Usual Smile


Likhate rahiye... aate rahiye..
Shaad O aabaad rahiye...

Khuda hafez... Usual Smile
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«Reply #8 on: January 23, 2013, 12:04:45 PM »
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bohut khub rahim ji bohut umda peshkash hai apki
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«Reply #9 on: January 23, 2013, 02:05:32 PM »
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Bohat Khub!!!

 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
Bahaut bahaut shukriya Shireen jee..
Khush rahiye..!

Bahut Bahut Khoob Mere Dost

 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Bahaut bahaut shukriya Khwaish dost..
Khush rahiye..!

Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
waah bhaai waah... bahut der der se aate ho aur jab bhi aate ho koi dhamaakaa le ke aate ho... maan gaye ustaad kyaa khoob likhaa hai... bahut bahut khoob Rahim bhaai.....!!!

Kapil dost,
Apne hamesha saath diya hai iss baat ka tahe tahe dil se shukriya..
Ustaad bahaut bada lavz kaha hai apne aur main dil se shukriya kehta hoon..
Khush rahiye..!

wqah wah wah  Applause Applause Applause
Bahaut shukriya Aarish jee..
Khush rahiye..!

excellent
Bahaut shukriya Saini jee..
Khush rahiye..!

Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
 mind blowing rahim jee
Bahaut shukriya Aqsh jee..
Khush rahiye..!

Rahim Sahaab Aadaab!


Kia baat hai janab badi achchi kalaam kahi hai, ahsaas O khayaal
behad khoob rahe... Usual Smile

aur aakhri do ashaar behad khoob rahe janab... Usual Smile
Is khoob kalaam par humari dheroN dili daad O mubbarakbad kabul
kijiye... Usual Smile


Likhate rahiye... aate rahiye..
Shaad O aabaad rahiye...

Khuda hafez... Usual Smile

Parwaaz Sahab,
Apka comment hamesha bahaut mayne rakhta hai,
Bahaut bahaut shukriya..
Khush rahiye..!

bohut khub rahim ji bohut umda peshkash hai apki
Shukriya shukriya Saahill jee..
Khush rahiye..!
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