Main jesaa hoon, jesaa hoon

by Seattlite on August 08, 2005, 08:37:35 AM
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Seattlite
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I
....am a bookworm
....sleep all day
....talk during movies
....eat crackers in bed
....dance out of rhythm
....sing out of tune


etc, ect

main jessa hoon, jessa hoon

(let me know if I spelled that totally wrong...)
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Tosha
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«Reply #1 on: August 08, 2005, 08:54:42 AM »
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This a topic More related to Chit Chat to is being moved from the miscelleneous shayari section to chit chat section...

may be it is a repeated thread so other mods may take further action.

Moved by : Tosha
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«Reply #2 on: August 08, 2005, 09:00:45 AM »
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No, that was poetry that I wanted some feedback on.


You should really be more careful, you know? I know it sucks, but if it was chit chat I would have put it there.
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Seattlite
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«Reply #3 on: August 08, 2005, 09:01:57 AM »
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And it's not repeated either.

I think you are abusing your power a little, na?

think about it more carefully.
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Tosha
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«Reply #4 on: August 08, 2005, 09:14:24 AM »
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OMG .. !! i never knew u'd be so agressive .. !!!
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Please forgive me .. !!!
couldn't just make it out if it was a poem..!!!
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I'm terribely sorry..!!!
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Here it comes back !!
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Seattlite
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«Reply #5 on: August 08, 2005, 09:48:47 AM »
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well, that's me.

main jesaa hoon.


matlab " I am who I am" right?
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Tosha
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«Reply #6 on: August 08, 2005, 10:20:37 AM »
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Sorry to be a bit critical Amanda..!!
I hope you dont mind my words and take them for the better.
feel what you write and think carefully for words you use.
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It was a beautiful atempt and i understand what you mean to say...but what you've written needs better and clearer expression and needs an emotional touch to it.
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Wish you a pleasurble poetry writting..!!!
Yoindia is always there for you and i'm there if tou ever consider me worth any help.
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All the best!!
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«Reply #7 on: August 08, 2005, 05:34:05 PM »
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seatlite, im nt sure if ur a male or a female
if ur a male, the correct words would be, main jaisa hoon, waisa hoon
and if female- main jaisi hoon, waisi hoon.
 Usual Smile good day, n keep writing!
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Seattlite
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«Reply #8 on: August 08, 2005, 08:41:31 PM »
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no, I'm a girl.
thanks.
I am atill in the process of learning harder. It's even harder for me to write hindi with roman letters, I think it's easier using devanagari.

shukriyaa
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«Reply #9 on: September 01, 2005, 04:40:16 AM »
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Quote from: "Seattlite"
I
....am a bookworm
....sleep all day
....talk during movies
....eat crackers in bed
....dance out of rhythm
....sing out of tune


etc, ect

main jessa hoon, jessa hoon

(let me know if I spelled that totally wrong...)


Hi!  :wink:

What's the meaning of these dots? ....
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Nazif
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«Reply #10 on: January 30, 2009, 06:25:04 AM »
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Usual Smile
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SURESH SANGWAN
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«Reply #11 on: March 18, 2010, 02:29:09 PM »
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very good
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