MAIN MUSAFIR HUN

by drpandey on April 24, 2010, 07:55:45 PM
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                  GHAZAL
Main musafir hun sadaa sunke thahar Jaunga !
Raah roko na meri ruk ke bikhar Jaunga !
Kaun manzil hai kidhar kaisa thikana apna,
Waqt lejaye jahan bas main udhar Jaunga !
Hausley mere bhi toofaN se kisi kam to nahiN,
Aatishe-dariya mein bhi hanske utar Jaunga !
Tum bhi Aajao agar saath nibhana chaaho,
Hai akele ka safar jaaney kidhar Jaunga !
Kisko dikhlaun 'Adab' paanv ke chhaley apne,
Khud hi sahla ke sare-raah gujar Jaunga !

Dr HP Pandey
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«Reply #1 on: April 24, 2010, 08:00:19 PM »
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Very Very very Gud PAndey Ji ..........

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«Reply #2 on: April 24, 2010, 08:25:38 PM »
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bahut khoobsurat ghazal likhi hai aapne Pandey ji.... bahut hi khoob.... bahut pasand aayi humko aapki ye ghazal...!!!

tanha chalta hoon main tanha chalta jaunga,
kal is jahan se bhi tanha chala jaunga,

kuch khushiyaan hain to kuch ghum hain yahaan,
unko saath liye main chalta chala jaunga,


kise mila hai kisika saath is duniya mein,
apne tanhayiyon me muskurata chala jaunga...
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«Reply #3 on: April 24, 2010, 08:51:18 PM »
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Wah wah Pandey ji and Kapil ji bahut hi pyari gazal pesh kiya.bahut badhiya likha aap dono ne.excellent.bahut pasand aayi,aise hi likhte rahiyega. Hats off to you! icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #4 on: April 24, 2010, 09:09:15 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriya Madhu ji...!!!

Quote from: madhuwesh on April 24, 2010, 08:51:18 PM
Wah wah Pandey ji and Kapil ji bahut hi pyari gazal pesh kiya.bahut badhiya likha aap dono ne.excellent.bahut pasand aayi,aise hi likhte rahiyega. Hats off to you! icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #5 on: April 24, 2010, 09:24:06 PM »
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Quote from: drpandey on April 24, 2010, 07:55:45 PM
                 GHAZAL

Kisko dikhlaun 'Adab' paanv ke chhaley apne,
Khud hi sahla ke sare-raah gujar Jaunga !

Dr HP Pandey





Nice work Pandey Jee.......
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«Reply #6 on: April 24, 2010, 09:33:36 PM »
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Quote from: drpandey on April 24, 2010, 07:55:45 PM
                  GHAZAL
Main musafir hun sadaa sunke thahar Jaunga !
Raah roko na meri ruk ke bikhar Jaunga !
Kaun manzil hai kidhar kaisa thikana apna,
Waqt lejaye jahan bas main udhar Jaunga !
Hausley mere bhi toofaN se kisi kam to nahiN,
Aatishe-dariya mein bhi hanske utar Jaunga !
Tum bhi Aajao agar saath nibhana chaaho,
Hai akele ka safar jaaney kidhar Jaunga !
Kisko dikhlaun 'Adab' paanv ke chhaley apne,
Khud hi sahla ke sare-raah gujar Jaunga !

Dr HP Pandey



Very good one Dr. Pandey Ji
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«Reply #7 on: April 25, 2010, 02:10:45 AM »
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Quote from: neelgold on April 24, 2010, 08:00:19 PM
Very Very very Gud PAndey Ji ..........

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Ghazal padsand farmaney aur himmat afzai ka bahut bahut Shukriya Neelgold Ji...
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«Reply #8 on: April 25, 2010, 02:17:26 AM »
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Quote from: klaskar on April 24, 2010, 08:25:38 PM
bahut khoobsurat ghazal likhi hai aapne Pandey ji.... bahut hi khoob.... bahut pasand aayi humko aapki ye ghazal...!!!

tanha chalta hoon main tanha chalta jaunga,
kal is jahan se bhi tanha chala jaunga,

kuch khushiyaan hain to kuch ghum hain yahaan,
unko saath liye main chalta chala jaunga,


kise mila hai kisika saath is duniya mein,
apne tanhayiyon me muskurata chala jaunga...

Bahut achchha likha Kapil Ji, himmat afzai ka behad shukriya..

Safar hai haadson ka kaun dikhai dega?
Raah ki Thokron se khud hi nikhar Jaunga.
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«Reply #9 on: April 25, 2010, 02:19:32 AM »
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Quote from: madhuwesh on April 24, 2010, 08:51:18 PM
Wah wah Pandey ji and Kapil ji bahut hi pyari gazal pesh kiya.bahut badhiya likha aap dono ne.excellent.bahut pasand aayi,aise hi likhte rahiyega. Hats off to you! icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause
Inayat ka bahut bahut shukriya Madhu Ji....Jahnaseeb...
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«Reply #10 on: April 25, 2010, 02:22:27 AM »
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Quote from: Sajid_Ghayel on April 24, 2010, 09:24:06 PM
Nice work Pandey Jee.......
Sajid ji hausla afzai ka behad shukriya...
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«Reply #11 on: April 25, 2010, 02:24:32 AM »
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Quote from: Rajesh Harish on April 24, 2010, 09:33:36 PM
Very good one Dr. Pandey Ji
Bhai Rajesh Harsh ji aapka bahut bahut dhanybaad...
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«Reply #12 on: April 25, 2010, 05:45:05 AM »
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Wah kya baat hai      DR Pandey ji......


Musafir hun main
chalte rahena hai mera kaam
saath miley na miley kisika
apne maksad ko khud dena hai anjaam..
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«Reply #13 on: April 25, 2010, 09:04:55 AM »
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Quote from: cara on April 25, 2010, 05:45:05 AM
Wah kya baat hai      DR Pandey ji......


Musafir hun main
chalte rahena hai mera kaam
saath miley na miley kisika
apne maksad ko khud dena hai anjaam..
Bahut khoob likha aapne bhi Cara Ji, Inayat aur hausla afzai ka behad shukriya...

Hunar manzil ko paane ka sikha deti hai raah aksar,
Kabhi kuchh thokaren dekar kabhi khud rahnuma hokar.
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«Reply #14 on: April 25, 2010, 09:41:15 AM »
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Shukriya Pandey ji... aapne bhi bahut khoobsurat lines add kiye hain....!!!!

Quote from: drpandey on April 25, 2010, 02:17:26 AM
Bahut achchha likha Kapil Ji, himmat afzai ka behad shukriya..

Safar hai haadson ka kaun dikhai dega?
Raah ki Thokron se khud hi nikhar Jaunga.
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