Main sada tumhari rahungi...Geetrukh...

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Naa merre bas mein hai ye judai hamari,
dard deti hai mujhe ye ruswai tumhari,

na lagao yu mujhe per bewafai ka ilzam,
ghum rehta hai dil sath rehti hai tanhai ki shaam,

main door ho kar tumse bahut bure haal mein hu,
hasrato mein qaid hu tumhare har lamhe tumhare khayal mein hu,

sach mano tou ye pal judai ka tadpa tadpa kar guzar raha hai,
merri ankho ka samunder tumhari yad mein bikhar raha hai,

main aaungi ek din tumhari har khushi ko liye,
khuabo se bhi khubsurat si zindgi ko liye,

abhi jo faasle hai unhe zara badhne do,
main sada tumhari hu zamane ko chahe jitne sitam karne do.........
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«Reply #1 on: January 11, 2011, 06:56:32 PM »
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mast hai yaar  Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #2 on: January 11, 2011, 08:07:22 PM »
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«Reply #3 on: January 11, 2011, 08:15:30 PM »
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wah Geeta ji.
kya kahne aapke.
har nagma aapka bas wahi ek apnapan ka ehsaas dilata hai.
judai , dard aur mohabbat ki tadap ko alfaazon ke saath--
kahani numa style me pesh karna aapko kya khub aata hai.
khubsurat ehsaas aapka.
khus rahiye
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Shukriya killbill ji hamesha apke dilo tak merri rachnaye pahuch jati hai tou merri mehnat safal ho jati hai..shukriya tahe dil se...
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«Reply #5 on: January 11, 2011, 09:18:06 PM »
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Bahaut bahaut khoob Geet di..
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Khush rahiye..!
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«Reply #6 on: January 11, 2011, 09:40:07 PM »
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Shukriya rahim...
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«Reply #7 on: January 12, 2011, 02:32:18 PM »
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bht khoob geet ji....
i lyk lst one alot...
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«Reply #8 on: January 12, 2011, 06:26:05 PM »
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Naa merre bas mein hai ye judai hamari,
dard deti hai mujhe ye ruswai tumhari,

na lagao yu mujhe per bewafai ka ilzam,
ghum rehta hai dil sath rehti hai tanhai ki shaam,

main door ho kar tumse bahut bure haal mein hu,
hasrato mein qaid hu tumhare har lamhe tumhare khayal mein hu,

sach mano tou ye pal judai ka tadpa tadpa kar guzar raha hai,
merri ankho ka samunder tumhari yad mein bikhar raha hai,

main aaungi ek din tumhari har khushi ko liye,
khuabo se bhi khubsurat si zindgi ko liye,

abhi jo faasle hai unhe zara badhne do,
main sada tumhari hu zamane ko chahe jitne sitam karne do.........


gud one bbl
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«Reply #9 on: January 12, 2011, 10:13:12 PM »
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Bahut bahut shukriya priya ji,shihab ji n khamosh ji.
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«Reply #10 on: January 13, 2011, 03:31:44 PM »
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Nice Geet JI
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«Reply #11 on: January 13, 2011, 04:16:30 PM »
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bahut khub...

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«Reply #12 on: January 14, 2011, 03:06:41 PM »
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Shukriya rishi ji n manju mann ji...
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Geet Ji Dil Ki Har ek Baat Kaha di Ho Jaise Aapne.. Mohabbat Aur dard ke ehasaason se Saji aapki Yeh Rachna Beintehaan Khubsoorat Hai... Bahut bahut Bahut Khooooooooob.. Applause Applause

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Bahut bahut shukriya mann ji...Daad kubul hai ji..
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