Main usko bhula dun nahi ji nahi (Riyaz)

by riyaz106 on April 10, 2010, 01:07:11 PM
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«Reply #15 on: April 11, 2010, 07:45:28 PM »
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Wah Ji Wah kya baat hai Riyaz shaib....
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«Reply #16 on: April 11, 2010, 07:49:37 PM »
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wah Riyaz ji wah. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
wo door chala gaya koi baat nahin .
main intezaar chhod dun nahin ji nahin.
wo maskhara tha mujhe pataa na chalaa.
main yakeen  chhod dun nahin ji nahin.
..GHAZAL..

Main usko bhula dun, nahi ji nahi
Main khud ko mita dun, nahi ji nahi
Andheron mein hi raaz rahta hai raaz
Diya main jalaa dun, nahi ji nahi
Mujhe apna qaatil hai ab bhi azeez
Usey bad-duaa dun, nahi ji nahi
Ye dil kisne toda, hai naam uska kya
Main sabko bata dun, nahi ji nahi
Usey dil se chaaha, to phir uska naam
Main dil se mita dun, nahi ji nahi
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«Reply #17 on: April 12, 2010, 09:07:29 AM »
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Rajesh ji aapka bahot bahot shukriya ke aapne meri ghazal pasand farmaai.
Bahut hi umda Ghazal likhi hai aap ne Riyaz Ji
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«Reply #18 on: April 12, 2010, 09:50:31 AM »
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              ..GHAZAL..
Main usko bhula dun, nahi ji nahi
Main khud ko mita dun, nahi ji nahi
Andheron mein hi raaz rahta hai raaz
Diya main jalaa dun, nahi ji nahi
Mujhe apna qaatil hai ab bhi azeez
Usey bad-duaa dun, nahi ji nahi
Ye dil kisne toda, hai naam uska kya
Main sabko bata dun, nahi ji nahi
Usey dil se chaaha, to phir uska naam
Main dil se mita dun, nahi ji nahi


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Wah Riyaz Saheb .. Wah .. Kya kahene Khubsurath Ghazal Kahiye hai .. Bahoth Acha Radeef hai .. Har Ashar Mukkammal , 2nd Ashar me Kya qoob Hausla Dikahaya Hai bhaijaan .. Dad Qubool Kijiyega ..Khush rahe Hamesha ..

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«Reply #19 on: April 12, 2010, 10:34:41 AM »
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Dil se shukriya Khamosh ji ke aapne hausla afzaai ki aur ghazal ko pasand farmaya.

RIYAZ SB BAHUT KHOOB JANAAB Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #20 on: April 12, 2010, 12:56:34 PM »
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Bahut dher saara shukriya Koyal bahan, ghazal ko pasand karne ke liye. Aapki taliyan bahot achhi lagin. Bahan ko bahut dino baad yaad aai bhai ki, khair aai to. Hamesha kush raho, kaamyaab raho.  Phir se shukriya.
Wah wah achha kalaam hai aapka Riyaz-bhai....

Main tali bajaun haan ji haan.... Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

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«Reply #21 on: April 12, 2010, 02:20:46 PM »
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Bahut Bahut Khoob Riyazji.. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #22 on: April 12, 2010, 03:43:13 PM »
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BBL ji aapka bahot bahot shukriya. Aapne ghaur ke saath ghazal ko padha aur pasand farmaya, zahe-naseeb. Aainda bhi aapse aise hi ummeed rakhunga.
bahut khoob likha hai riyaz ji...

Mujhe apna qaatil hai ab bhi azeez
Usey bad-duaa dun, nahi ji nahi..

Ye do lines bahut hi badhiya lagi..
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«Reply #23 on: April 12, 2010, 04:20:09 PM »
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Wah wah Riyaz bhai,bahut khoobsurat gazal pesh kiya aapne.marvelous creation.great thoughts.excellent Hats off to you! Applause Applause Applause Applause icon_thumleft
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«Reply #24 on: April 12, 2010, 04:58:18 PM »
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Bahut bahut shukriya S.Hashmi ji meri ghazal pasand karne ke liye. Aainda bhi aapse hausla afzaai ki ummeed rahegi.
Wah wah kya baat hai!!!! bahot hi umda likha hai apne Riyaz ji hamesha ki tarah....
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«Reply #25 on: April 13, 2010, 07:10:38 AM »
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Bahot bahot shukriya Cara ji. Aapne bhi achha likha hai.
Wah kya baat hai         Riyaz106 ji.....(pyar ho toh aesa ho)


bahut hi yaar khaas hai aapka
kya aap ussey door jaa payonge---nahi ji nahi
bahut hi meeta ehsaas hai aapka
kya aaap usey bhool payonge----nahi ji nahi..
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«Reply #26 on: April 13, 2010, 10:48:16 AM »
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Pandey Sb. aapka tahe dil se shukriya. Hamesha ki tarah aapane bahot khuloos ke saath hausla afazaai ki. Bahut shukrguzar hun aapka.
Behad khubsoorat, umda andaz, purkaif rawani aur behtareen alfaaz!!! Sukhan ke hunar ka nayaab tohfa ghazal mein ayaan hua hai.. Lakhoon daad qubool farnayen Riyaz Sahab..... 
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«Reply #27 on: April 13, 2010, 12:19:51 PM »
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Neel ji aapka behad shukriya ke aapko meri ghazal pasand aai.
Wah Ji Wah kya baat hai Riyaz shaib....
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«Reply #28 on: April 13, 2010, 02:58:29 PM »
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Suresh ji aapka tahe dil se shukriya ke aapne meri hausla afazaai ki aur ghazal ko pasand farmaya. Aainda bhi aapse se aisi hi ummeed rakhunga.
wah Riyaz ji wah. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
wo door chala gaya koi baat nahin .
main intezaar chhod dun nahin ji nahin.
wo maskhara tha mujhe pataa na chalaa.
main yakeen  chhod dun nahin ji nahin.
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«Reply #29 on: April 13, 2010, 04:05:41 PM »
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Qadeer Sahab jis andaaz mein aapne ghazal ki tareef ki, main aapka tahe dil se shukrguzaar hun. Hausla afazaai ka bhi behad shukriya.
Wah Riyaz Saheb .. Wah .. Kya kahene Khubsurath Ghazal Kahiye hai .. Bahoth Acha Radeef hai .. Har Ashar Mukkammal , 2nd Ashar me Kya qoob Hausla Dikahaya Hai bhaijaan .. Dad Qubool Kijiyega ..Khush rahe Hamesha ..

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