Main usko bhula dun nahi ji nahi (Riyaz)

by riyaz106 on April 10, 2010, 01:07:11 PM
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              ..GHAZAL..
Main usko bhula dun, nahi ji nahi
Main khud ko mita dun, nahi ji nahi
Andheron mein hi raaz rahta hai raaz
Diya main jalaa dun, nahi ji nahi
Mujhe apna qaatil hai ab bhi azeez
Usey bad-duaa dun, nahi ji nahi
Ye dil kisne toda, hai naam uska kya
Main sabko bata dun, nahi ji nahi
Usey dil se chaaha, to phir uska naam
Main dil se mita dun, nahi ji nahi


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«Reply #1 on: April 10, 2010, 01:26:19 PM »
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Bahaut khoob likha hai Riyaz jee...Bahaut ache...
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«Reply #2 on: April 10, 2010, 02:39:35 PM »
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Bohat khoob Riyaz Saheb khoobsurat peshkash...........aur aapke Monitor banne par dhero mubarakbaad.
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«Reply #3 on: April 10, 2010, 04:08:23 PM »
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bahut hi khoobsurat ghazal likhi hai aapne Riyaz ji... bahut pyaari ghazal hai...!!! Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #4 on: April 10, 2010, 04:40:30 PM »
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Bahut hi umda Ghazal likhi hai aap ne Riyaz Ji
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«Reply #5 on: April 10, 2010, 05:44:02 PM »
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Bhai Abdul Rahim aapka dher sara shukriya.
Bahaut khoob likha hai Riyaz jee...Bahaut ache...

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«Reply #6 on: April 10, 2010, 06:34:43 PM »
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RIYAZ SB BAHUT KHOOB JANAAB Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #7 on: April 10, 2010, 06:53:18 PM »
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Wah wah achha kalaam hai aapka Riyaz-bhai....

Main tali bajaun haan ji haan.... Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

              ..GHAZAL..
Main usko bhula dun, nahi ji nahi
Main khud ko mita dun, nahi ji nahi
Andheron mein hi raaz rahta hai raaz
Diya main jalaa dun, nahi ji nahi
Mujhe apna qaatil hai ab bhi azeez
Usey bad-duaa dun, nahi ji nahi
Ye dil kisne toda, hai naam uska kya
Main sabko bata dun, nahi ji nahi
Usey dil se chaaha, to phir uska naam
Main dil se mita dun, nahi ji nahi


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«Reply #8 on: April 10, 2010, 08:09:58 PM »
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kaia  khoob  likha  hay  nahee  ji  nahee


bulkay bhut hee khoob likha hay ap nay
great work Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #9 on: April 10, 2010, 08:27:59 PM »
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bahut khoob likha hai riyaz ji...

Mujhe apna qaatil hai ab bhi azeez
Usey bad-duaa dun, nahi ji nahi..

Ye do lines bahut hi badhiya lagi..
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«Reply #10 on: April 10, 2010, 08:50:45 PM »
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              ..GHAZAL..
Main usko bhula dun, nahi ji nahi
Main khud ko mita dun, nahi ji nahi
Andheron mein hi raaz rahta hai raaz
Diya main jalaa dun, nahi ji nahi
Mujhe apna qaatil hai ab bhi azeez
Usey bad-duaa dun, nahi ji nahi
Ye dil kisne toda, hai naam uska kya
Main sabko bata dun, nahi ji nahi
Usey dil se chaaha, to phir uska naam
Main dil se mita dun, nahi ji nahi


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Wah wah kya baat hai!!!! bahot hi umda likha hai apne Riyaz ji hamesha ki tarah....
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«Reply #11 on: April 10, 2010, 09:11:27 PM »
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Wah kya baat hai         Riyaz106 ji.....(pyar ho toh aesa ho)


bahut hi yaar khaas hai aapka
kya aap ussey door jaa payonge---nahi ji nahi
bahut hi meeta ehsaas hai aapka
kya aaap usey bhool payonge----nahi ji nahi..
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«Reply #12 on: April 10, 2010, 10:39:51 PM »
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Dear Nafseeyati_Mareez ji, aapka bahot  sara shukriya pasand farmane aur hausla afazaai ke liye. Monitor banne ki mumarakbaad ke liye bhi bahot shukriya.
Bohat khoob Riyaz Saheb khoobsurat peshkash...........aur aapke Monitor banne par dhero mubarakbaad.
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«Reply #13 on: April 10, 2010, 11:31:47 PM »
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Kapil ji, ghazal pasand karne aur hausla afazzai ke liye behad shukriya.
bahut hi khoobsurat ghazal likhi hai aapne Riyaz ji... bahut pyaari ghazal hai...!!! Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #14 on: April 11, 2010, 12:18:33 AM »
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              ..GHAZAL..
Main usko bhula dun, nahi ji nahi
Main khud ko mita dun, nahi ji nahi
Andheron mein hi raaz rahta hai raaz
Diya main jalaa dun, nahi ji nahi
Mujhe apna qaatil hai ab bhi azeez
Usey bad-duaa dun, nahi ji nahi
Ye dil kisne toda, hai naam uska kya
Main sabko bata dun, nahi ji nahi
Usey dil se chaaha, to phir uska naam
Main dil se mita dun, nahi ji nahi


Riyaz Ashna
Behad khubsoorat, umda andaz, purkaif rawani aur behtareen alfaaz!!! Sukhan ke hunar ka nayaab tohfa ghazal mein ayaan hua hai.. Lakhoon daad qubool farnayen Riyaz Sahab..... 
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