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by adil bechain on August 03, 2011, 08:42:23 AM
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              wafa ki moorat nahin,hoon insaan main...,
              choari gar sharaafat,hoon shaitaan main...,

              raha khamosh jab tak kar lo sitam tum,
              kiyaa jo bagaawat phir hoon toofaan main,

              zakhmi kiyaa mujhe khaaro.n ne kai baar,
              chaman ki kaliyo.n ka per hoon armaan main,

              uthayaa shahar ne janaaza hasrato.n ka mere,
              huaa dard bahut nahin hoon bejaan main,

              ho jataa hai 'bechain' mahfil-e-husn abb toh...!!
              hunar-e-aashiqi ki aaj  hoon pehchaan main....!!

             
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«Reply #1 on: August 03, 2011, 08:50:29 AM »
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waah waah baalak--
kamaal ka post laaye ho
dil gadgad ho gaya aate hi Sanyasi ka Usual Smile
umda soch ko anjaam dia tumne --
bahuttt khub
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«Reply #2 on: August 03, 2011, 09:32:59 AM »
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good!
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«Reply #3 on: August 03, 2011, 09:53:35 AM »
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Bechain Sahaab Aadaab!

Kia kahne janab behad khoob kalaam kahi hai..
Ahsaas O khayaal kafi gehre rahe... Usual Smile

Humari daad O mubarakbad kabul kijiye...Usual Smile
Waise to puri kalaam achchi hai par khususan
Yeh sher hume behad achcha aur umdaa laga Usual Smile          


             uthayaa shahar ne janaaza hasrato.n ka mere,
              huaa dard bahut nahin hoon bejaan main,


       

Likhate rahiye... Aate rahiye...
Khush O aabaad rahiye...
Khuda Hafez Usual Smile         

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«Reply #4 on: August 03, 2011, 11:46:29 AM »
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              wafa ki moorat nahin,hoon insaan main...,
              choari gar sharaafat,hoon shaitaan main...,

              raha khamosh jab tak kar lo sitam tum,
              kiyaa jo bagaawat phir hoon toofaan main,

              zakhmi kiyaa mujhe khaaro.n ne kai baar,
              chaman ki kaliyo.n ka per hoon armaan main,

              uthayaa shahar ne janaaza hasrato.n ka mere,
              huaa dard bahut nahin hoon bejaan main,

              ho jataa hai 'bechain' mahfil-e-husn abb toh...!!
              hunar-e-aashiqi ki aaj  hoon pehchaan main....!!

             

Bahut Bahut khoooob Adilji..

laajwaab!!!! Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #5 on: August 03, 2011, 01:44:01 PM »
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Adil ji bahut khoob likha hai,
likhte rahiye.
bahut sahi kaha hai aapne,
 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #6 on: August 04, 2011, 08:25:25 AM »
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waah waah baalak--
kamaal ka post laaye ho
dil gadgad ho gaya aate hi Sanyasi ka Usual Smile
umda soch ko anjaam dia tumne --
bahuttt khub

shukria swami ji mahraaj. kab padhaare ekaant se... bangluru kaisa hain icon_thumleft icon_thumleft
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«Reply #7 on: August 04, 2011, 08:55:36 AM »
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shukria swami ji mahraaj. kab padhaare ekaant se... bangluru kaisa hain icon_thumleft icon_thumleft

bas 2 din hue ekantwaa tyage hue Usual Smile
kuch din me fir *Saadhna* me leen ho jaunga Usual Smile

aur ye bengluru se kya matlab hai??
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«Reply #8 on: August 04, 2011, 09:01:59 AM »
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bas 2 din hue ekantwaa tyage hue Usual Smile
kuch din me fir *Saadhna* me leen ho jaunga Usual Smile

aur ye bengluru se kya matlab hai??


aapne sawami ji likha tha kahin aap ekantwaas ke liye bangalore mein hain
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«Reply #9 on: August 06, 2011, 07:42:01 AM »
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good!


shukria siddiqui sahab
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«Reply #10 on: August 08, 2011, 10:01:03 AM »
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good!

thanks hasan sahab
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«Reply #11 on: August 14, 2011, 10:23:21 AM »
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Bahut khoob AB Ji
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«Reply #12 on: August 22, 2011, 07:29:02 PM »
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Bahut khoob AB Ji

thank you rajesh ji
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«Reply #13 on: September 12, 2011, 11:13:31 AM »
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Bahut hi accha likha hai. mujhe bahut pasand aya.
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«Reply #14 on: September 12, 2011, 11:21:01 AM »
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bahut khoob,,,,,
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