maine tumko paaya...

by shraddha the poetess on August 09, 2013, 10:10:25 PM
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jb bhi khud ko museebat me paaya,,,tb tb tujhe sang mei apne paaaya..
jb jb duniya ne thukraaya,,tune aakr gale lagaaya...

jb sbne mujhse haath chhudaya,,tb bhi tune saath nibhaaya...
jb bhi kadakti dhoop padi mujhprr,,tune mujhpr krdii chhaaya...

jahan jahan mai gayi sang aise tha tu.,,jaise ho koi saaya..
tere hote hue koi bhi gam ,,mujhko naa sataa paaya..

tere hi kaaran pahoch na saka, mujh tak koi bhi bura saaya
pahochta bhi to kaise bhala,mujhpr thi tere pyaar ki chhaaya...

darr s mera man jb jb ghabraaya..
tune us drrr ko door bhagaaya...

chhodi jb jb umeed maine,,tb tb tune vishwaas mujhme jagaya..
shukrguzaar hoon mai khhuda ki..'teri been mujhe banaya'

meri besuri si zindgi ko...tune apne suron se sajaaya...
mere pyaar or vishvaaas ka man., tune hmesha hi badaya...
 
khushnazeeb hoon mai bhaiya...kyunki maine tumko paaya .....
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«Reply #1 on: August 09, 2013, 10:23:36 PM »
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bahut bahut khoob Shraddha ji, bade hi saral aur seedhe shabdon me bahut khoobsoorat rachnaa likh gaye aap, badaa pyaaraa lagaa humein yeh, bahut khoob, yunhi likhte rahiye....!!!
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«Reply #2 on: August 09, 2013, 10:27:59 PM »
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thank u so very much hriday ji ............
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«Reply #3 on: August 09, 2013, 10:33:29 PM »
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bahut sunder
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«Reply #4 on: August 09, 2013, 10:34:45 PM »
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thank u so much s.k.saini ...ji..........
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«Reply #5 on: August 10, 2013, 12:05:21 AM »
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waah waah shraddhi ji , aapne laast line me kya khub ghumaya Usual Smile  Applause Applause Applause Applause ... pehle laga ki aapne aashiq ko soch k likha but jab baad me bhaiya aaya to sach me bada dilchasp modh paaya
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«Reply #6 on: August 10, 2013, 12:18:41 AM »
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nai maine sachchi bhaiya prr likhi hai.......
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«Reply #7 on: August 10, 2013, 12:20:00 AM »
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bahut bahut shukriya gudia.....aapka saneh aur pyar is rachna mein saaf jhalak raha hai....hamesa khush raho aur aise hi muskrate muskrate yoindia mein chahkate raho......once again thank u so much dear..... happy3 happy3 happy3 happy3 happy3 happy3 happy3 happy3 happy3 happy3 happy3 happy3 happy3 happy3 happy3 happy3 happy3 happy3 happy3 happy3 happy3 happy3 happy3 happy3 happy3 happy3 happy3 happy3 happy3
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«Reply #8 on: August 10, 2013, 12:21:10 AM »
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 ur most welcome.......and tankuuuuuuuuu
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«Reply #9 on: August 10, 2013, 02:13:07 AM »
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bhut khub....
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«Reply #10 on: August 10, 2013, 02:20:28 AM »
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thank u rajan ji.....
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«Reply #11 on: August 10, 2013, 01:24:44 PM »
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bahut khoob
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«Reply #12 on: August 10, 2013, 03:29:27 PM »
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ooooo..to link ki shuruwat yaha se hui thi iss link ki..maafi chahunga chhoot gayi..

Bahut bahut khoob likha hai shraddha jee..N i want to just share ki kal hi meri behan ki rakhi ayi..uske sath ek card bhi tha..usme aisi aisi bate likhi thi na uss pagli ne ki ankh me ansu aa gaye..waise to ham hamesha jhagate rehte hain but pyar to beshumar hota hai yar iss rishte me..

Once again waah waah waah..happy9
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«Reply #13 on: August 10, 2013, 04:07:26 PM »
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thank u nand babu ji...........and thank u ashwani ji.....
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