!!!..Malaal..!!!

by nashwani on August 15, 2013, 03:36:49 AM
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Dil hi dil me kisi kee hasrat paal raha,,
     Aazad panchhi ghulami ki aadat daal raha..

Aaine me apna aks dekhne ko tarse,,
     Chehra anjaana, zehan me ban sawaal raha..

Rote rote muskurae, haste haste ro diye,,
     Ishq me kuch ajeeb-o-gareeb apna haal raha..

Kabhi to ban pa.unga kaabil unke,,
     Soch ke, har mod pe khud ko zara dhaal raha..

Yun to saal aaye kai, kai guzar gaye par,,
     Zindagi me zindagi bana bas ikk wo saal raha..      

Khwabo.N me pyaar beshumaar barsa,,
     Haqeeqat me sookhe reh jane ka malaal raha..

Khanzar dil me utara, yaad na raha,,
     Dard me bhi dard dene wale ka khayal raha..!!! Ñ
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«Reply #1 on: August 15, 2013, 03:57:46 AM »
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Dil hi dil me kisi kee hasrat paal raha,,
     Aazad panchhi ghulami ki aadat daal raha..

Aaine me apna aks dekhne ko tarse,,
     Chehra anjaana, zehan me ban sawaal raha..

Rote rote muskurae, haste haste ro diye,,
     Ishq me kuch ajeeb-o-gareeb apna haal raha..

Kabhi to ban pa.unga kaabil unke,,
     Soch ke, har mod pe khud ko zara dhaal raha..

Yun to saal aaye kai, kai guzar gaye par,,
     Zindagi me zindagi bana bas ikk wo saal raha..      

Khwabo.N me pyaar beshumaar barsa,,
     Haqeeqat me sookhe reh jane ka malaal raha..

Khanzar dil me utara, yaad na raha,,
     Dard me bhi dard dene wale ka khayal raha..!!! Ñ

Bahut Khoob Nashwaniji.Ek Rau Is Peshqash par Diya.
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«Reply #2 on: August 15, 2013, 04:54:35 AM »
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Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
waah waah waah waah kyaa kehne Ashwani ji, bahut khoob likha hai aapne....!!!
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«Reply #3 on: August 15, 2013, 08:11:21 AM »
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waah waah bahut khoob
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«Reply #4 on: August 15, 2013, 08:27:51 AM »
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wah wah
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«Reply #5 on: August 15, 2013, 08:38:57 AM »
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BAHUT KHOOB........... Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #6 on: August 15, 2013, 09:15:31 AM »
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wah wah Applause  Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #7 on: August 15, 2013, 11:51:59 AM »
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vry vry nice..........
aapka y kalam bemisaal raha...
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«Reply #8 on: August 16, 2013, 01:58:27 AM »
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wha wha bhut khub
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«Reply #9 on: August 16, 2013, 02:08:47 AM »
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Bahut Khoob Nashwaniji.Ek Rau Is Peshqash par Diya.

Bahut bahut shukriya ravi jee..happy9

Thankyou ! 4 da rau ravi jee..happy9
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«Reply #10 on: August 16, 2013, 02:09:31 AM »
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Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
waah waah waah waah kyaa kehne Ashwani ji, bahut khoob likha hai aapne....!!!


Bahut bahut shukriya hriday jee..happy9
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«Reply #11 on: August 16, 2013, 06:32:02 AM »
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kya baat hai, waah waah waah Applause Clapping Smiley Applause
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«Reply #12 on: August 16, 2013, 11:15:04 AM »
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Dil hi dil me kisi kee hasrat paal raha,,
     Aazad panchhi ghulami ki aadat daal raha..

Bahut khooooob....

Aaine me apna aks dekhne ko tarse,,
     Chehra anjaana, zehan me ban sawaal raha..

 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

Rote rote muskurae, haste haste ro diye,,
     Ishq me kuch ajeeb-o-gareeb apna haal raha..

Waah waah waah.....


Kabhi to ban pa.unga kaabil unke,,
     Soch ke, har mod pe khud ko zara dhaal raha..

kya baat hai.. bahut khoob..


Yun to saal aaye kai, kai guzar gaye par,,
     Zindagi me zindagi bana bas ikk wo saal raha..

is sher ke liye ek rau.. dil ko chhoo liya....    

Khwabo.N me pyaar beshumaar barsa,,
     Haqeeqat me sookhe reh jane ka malaal raha..

 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

Khanzar dil me utara, yaad na raha,,
     Dard me bhi dard dene wale ka khayal raha..!!! Ñ

Superbbbbbbbbbbbbbbb.......


Waaaaaaaaaaaah nashwani mujhe tumhari yeh kalaam bahut bahut bahut pasand aayi. sabhi ashaar dil ke qareeb rahe.. daad daad daad daaaaaaaaaaad...
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«Reply #13 on: August 16, 2013, 02:00:55 PM »
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Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

waah waah ashwani ji.. behad umda kalaam pe dhero dili mubarakbad.. Usual Smile

Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #14 on: September 13, 2013, 03:57:20 AM »
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aap sabhi ka tahe dil se shukriya..happy9

Thankyou !
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