Manzilen (NM)

by vb on July 22, 2010, 11:24:19 AM
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«Reply #1 on: July 22, 2010, 12:36:35 PM »
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wah bahut khoob vb ji Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley  Clapping Smiley:
teri hasrat mein bujh gaye jo diye
ab kisi taur jal nahin sakte.
very nice lines.
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«Reply #2 on: July 22, 2010, 01:24:21 PM »
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«Reply #3 on: July 23, 2010, 02:00:22 AM »
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Thak gay hain, sar-e-rah-e-manzil
Chote kha kar sambhal nahi saktay
Raastay sub hi band hain, maanaa
Manzilen, hum badal nahi saktay

Doshe rastay ko dain tu ku aakhir?
Manzilen bhe tu hain khafa hum say
Jub kabhi manzilen paa-yaab huveen
Kar gayay raastay jafaa hum say

Raah pur-khaar, umangen veeran
Is thakan say nikal nahi saktay
Manzilen, hum badal nahi saktay

Ik bayaabaan hay zindagi apni
Raah-e-manzil, koi saya he nahi
Sochtay hain kabhi tanhai main
Kho diya jo, kabhi paya he nahi

Teri hasrat main bujh gay jo diyay
Ab kisi taur jal nahi saktay
Manzilen, hum badal nahi saktay


Har qadam hum ne nishan chhora hay
Har zakham ka nishan hay rastay par
Hum hameshaa nazar aain gay yahaan
Hasraton ka dhuvan hay rastay par

Mazilen hum ko bhool saktee hain
hum ko rastay, nigal nahi saktay

Raastay sub hi band hain, maanaa
Manzilen, hum badal nahi saktay
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Bahut hee badhhiyaa nazm hai, vb ji!! Badhaayee!

              - abd bundeli
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«Reply #4 on: July 24, 2010, 03:24:43 AM »
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Thak gay hain, sar-e-rah-e-manzil
Chote kha kar sambhal nahi saktay
Raastay sub hi band hain, maanaa
Manzilen, hum badal nahi saktay

Doshe rastay ko dain tu ku aakhir?
Manzilen bhe tu hain khafa hum say
Jub kabhi manzilen paa-yaab huveen
Kar gayay raastay jafaa hum say

Raah pur-khaar, umangen veeran
Is thakan say nikal nahi saktay
Manzilen, hum badal nahi saktay

Ik bayaabaan hay zindagi apni
Raah-e-manzil, koi saya he nahi
Sochtay hain kabhi tanhai main
Kho diya jo, kabhi paya he nahi

Teri hasrat main bujh gay jo diyay
Ab kisi taur jal nahi saktay
Manzilen, hum badal nahi saktay

Har qadam hum ne nishan chhora hay
Har zakham ka nishan hay rastay par
Hum hameshaa nazar aain gay yahaan
Hasraton ka dhuvan hay rastay par

Mazilen hum ko bhool saktee hain
hum ko rastay, nigal nahi saktay
Raastay sub hi band hain, maanaa
Manzilen, hum badal nahi saktay
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Aapki nazm ke ehsaasoN ne dil ko chhua hai...bahut khoob ...Vb Ji !
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«Reply #5 on: July 26, 2010, 06:33:00 AM »
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abdbundeli jee.. buhat shukriya, aap ne waqt diya, parha...n nice comments chhoray...

You're welcome vb ji!

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