MASHWIRAA..........................................SAINI

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Kisee kaa mashwiraa gar maan letaa.
Teree neeyat ko maiN pahchaan letaa.

Meree kashtee ko detaa too saharaa.
MaiN kyooN phir ghair kaa ehsaan letaa.

Tabaahee kaa jo aalam chaar soo hai.
Sabaq isse naheeN insaan letaa.

Mujhe bhee hauslaa miltaa safar meN.
Agar dil men khudaa ko maan letaa.

Too dushman se n kuchh bhee maat khaataa.
Kabhee eyaar se jo jaan letaa.

Bataataa kaash koi eb mere.
Taraf apnee maiN khanjar taan letaa.

Manaa ‘saini’ to kar saktaa naheeN thaa.
Manaane kee agar too thaan letaa.

Dr.Surendra Saini

किसी का मशविरा गर मान लेता ।
तेरी नीयत को मैं पहचान लेता ॥

मेरी कश्ती को देता तू सहारा ।
मैं क्यूँ फिर ग़ैर का एहसान लेता ॥

तबाही का जो आलम चार सू है ।
सबक़ इससे नहीं इंसान लेता ॥

मुझे भी हौसला मिलता सफ़र में ।
अगर दिल में ख़ुदा को मान लेता ॥

तू दुश्मन से न कुछ भी मात खाता ।
कभी एयार से जो जान लेता ॥

बताता काश कोई एब मेरे ।
तरफ़ अपनी मैं ख़ंजर तान लेता ॥

मना 'सैनी ' तो कर सकता नहीं था ।
मनाने की अगर तू ठान लेता ॥

डॉ०  सुरेन्द्र सैनी                        
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«Reply #1 on: September 25, 2013, 04:50:23 PM »
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«Reply #2 on: September 25, 2013, 04:53:39 PM »
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Tabaahee kaa jo aalam chaar soo hai.
Sabaq isse naheen insaan letaa.

Bahut khoob , Saini saheb.
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«Reply #3 on: September 25, 2013, 04:58:47 PM »
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Lovely Mashwira Dr. Saab
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«Reply #4 on: September 25, 2013, 05:07:46 PM »
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«Reply #5 on: September 25, 2013, 05:25:13 PM »
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बताता काश कोई एब मेरे ।
तरफ़ अपनी मैं ख़ंजर तान लेता ॥

Mujhe ye sher khoob bhaya Sir
shandaar ghazal
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«Reply #6 on: September 25, 2013, 05:32:55 PM »
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Quote from: sksaini4 on September 25, 2013, 04:32:00 PM
Kisee kaa mashwiraa gar maan letaa.
Teree neeyat ko maiN pahchaan letaa.

Mere kashtee ko detaa too saharaa.
MaiN kyooN phir ghair kaa ehsaan letaa.

Tabaahee kaa jo aalam chaar soo hai.
Sabaq isse naheen insaan letaa.

Mujhe bhee hauslaa miltaa safar meN.
Agar dil men khudaa ko maan letaa.

Too dushman se n kuchh bhee maat khaataa.
Kabhee eyaar se jo jaan letaa.

Bataataa kaash koi eb mere.
Taraf apnee maiN khanjar taan letaa.

Manaa ‘saini’ to kar saktaa naheeN thaa.
Manaane kee agar too thaan letaa.

Dr.Surendra Saini

किसी का मशविरा गर मान लेता ।
तेरी नीयत को मैं पहचान लेता ॥

मेरी कश्ती को देता तू सहारा ।
मैं क्यूँ फिर ग़ैर का एहसान लेता ॥

तबाही का जो आलम चार सू है ।
सबक़ इससे नहीं इंसान लेता ॥

मुझे भी हौसला मिलता सफ़र में ।
अगर दिल में ख़ुदा को मान लेता ॥

तू दुश्मन से न कुछ भी मात खाता ।
कभी एयार से जो जान लेता ॥

बताता काश कोई एब मेरे ।
तरफ़ अपनी मैं ख़ंजर तान लेता ॥

मना 'सैनी ' तो कर सकता नहीं था ।
मनाने की अगर तू ठान लेता ॥

डॉ०  सुरेन्द्र सैनी                         

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«Reply #7 on: September 25, 2013, 05:46:56 PM »
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Mere kashtee ko detaa too saharaa.
MaiN kyooN phir ghair kaa ehsaan letaa.

Tabaahee kaa jo aalam chaar soo hai.
Sabaq isse naheen insaan letaa.

Mujhe bhee hauslaa miltaa safar meN.
Agar dil men khudaa ko maan letaa. (is sher pe main qhurbaan... Rau dene ki jurrat kar raha hoon).
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«Reply #8 on: September 25, 2013, 05:51:11 PM »
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«Reply #9 on: September 25, 2013, 06:00:11 PM »
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«Reply #10 on: September 25, 2013, 06:30:18 PM »
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Quote from: sksaini4 on September 25, 2013, 04:32:00 PM
Kisee kaa mashwiraa gar maan letaa.
Teree neeyat ko maiN pahchaan letaa.

Mere kashtee ko detaa too saharaa.
MaiN kyooN phir ghair kaa ehsaan letaa.

Tabaahee kaa jo aalam chaar soo hai.
Sabaq isse naheen insaan letaa.

Mujhe bhee hauslaa miltaa safar meN.
Agar dil men khudaa ko maan letaa.

Too dushman se n kuchh bhee maat khaataa.
Kabhee eyaar se jo jaan letaa.

Bataataa kaash koi eb mere.
Taraf apnee maiN khanjar taan letaa.

Manaa ‘saini’ to kar saktaa naheeN thaa.
Manaane kee agar too thaan letaa.

Dr.Surendra Saini

किसी का मशविरा गर मान लेता ।
तेरी नीयत को मैं पहचान लेता ॥

मेरी कश्ती को देता तू सहारा ।
मैं क्यूँ फिर ग़ैर का एहसान लेता ॥

तबाही का जो आलम चार सू है ।
सबक़ इससे नहीं इंसान लेता ॥

मुझे भी हौसला मिलता सफ़र में ।
अगर दिल में ख़ुदा को मान लेता ॥

तू दुश्मन से न कुछ भी मात खाता ।
कभी एयार से जो जान लेता ॥

बताता काश कोई एब मेरे ।
तरफ़ अपनी मैं ख़ंजर तान लेता ॥

मना 'सैनी ' तो कर सकता नहीं था ।
मनाने की अगर तू ठान लेता ॥

डॉ०  सुरेन्द्र सैनी                         
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«Reply #11 on: September 25, 2013, 06:43:43 PM »
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Mere kashtee ko detaa too saharaa.
MaiN kyooN phir ghair kaa ehsaan letaa.

Manaa ‘saini’ to kar saktaa naheeN thaa.
Manaane kee agar too thaan letaa.

waah waah Dr sahab bohut khoob ,,,

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Bahut achcha mashwirah aur behad khoooooooooob kalaam aapki..sabhi ashaar khoob hai.. khaas yeh ashaar pasand aaye.. aapko bahut bahut mubarak ho..

Tabaahee kaa jo aalam chaar soo hai.
Sabaq isse naheen insaan letaa.

Mujhe bhee hauslaa miltaa safar meN.
Agar dil men khudaa ko maan letaa.

Bataataa kaash koi eb mere.
Taraf apnee maiN khanjar taan letaa.
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«Reply #14 on: September 25, 2013, 08:56:27 PM »
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waah waah wah waah kyaa kehne , bahut khoob likhaa hai aapne Saini ji...!!!
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