mera bachpan.... (by vb)

by vb on January 04, 2014, 03:42:31 AM
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Najaanay kyuN achaanak say
Utha hay cheekh mera mann
Mera bachpan, mera bachpan

Main jub chhota sa bacha tha
Mera mann kitna sacha tha
Meray bachpan say vabista
HazaaroN khaab hen lekin
Meray maazi ki yaadeN bhe
Niraa azaab hen lekin
Bus itna yaad aata hay
Khushi ki baat ho koi
Main kitna khul kay hansta tha
Ye aankheN bheeg jaati theen
Agar dukh mujhko hota tha

Magar ab aisa aalam hay
Na hansta hoon na rota hoon
Dikhaavaa ban gaya sub kuch
K ab rona nahi aataa
Meray aansoo nahi aatay
Hansi mujhko nahi aati
Khushi mujhko nahi hoti
Bharam logon ka rakhna ho
Tu karta hoon adaa-kaari
Meray chehray pay ye chehra
Najaanay kis ka hay logo
Chhupa hay jo pas-e-chehra
Buhat bay-his sa hay logo

Mera dil tu ye karta hay
Buhat ro’ooN, buhat ro’ooN
Main apnay baap say khelooN
Aur maaN ki gode men so’ooN

Mera bachpan, mera bachpan
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«Reply #1 on: January 04, 2014, 03:46:38 AM »
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laajawaab peshkash dili daad qubool farmaayen aur naye saal kee mubarakbaad bhee qubool karen
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«Reply #2 on: January 04, 2014, 04:05:37 AM »
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Najaanay kyuN achaanak say
Utha hay cheekh mera mann
Mera bachpan, mera bachpan

Main jub chhota sa bacha tha
Mera mann kitna sacha tha
Meray bachpan say vabista
HazaaroN khaab hen lekin
Meray maazi ki yaadeN bhe
Niraa azaab hen lekin
Bus itna yaad aata hay
Khushi ki baat ho koi
Main kitna khul kay hansta tha
Ye aankheN bheeg jaati theen
Agar dukh mujhko hota tha

 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

wah wah wah wah bohut khub
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«Reply #3 on: January 04, 2014, 06:51:14 PM »
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वाह...वाह....और वाह.....

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«Reply #4 on: January 04, 2014, 07:55:16 PM »
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Shukriya aap sub ka....
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«Reply #5 on: January 04, 2014, 08:08:35 PM »
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Wah  wah   baddiya  peshkash  Vb  ji,apne  bachpan  ki  ehsaaso  ko  khoobsurti  se  bayaan  kiya. Thumbs UP Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #6 on: January 04, 2014, 08:14:17 PM »
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«Reply #7 on: January 05, 2014, 06:45:59 AM »
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Wah  wah   baddiya  peshkash  Vb  ji,apne  bachpan  ki  ehsaaso  ko  khoobsurti  se  bayaan  kiya. Thumbs UP Applause Applause Applause Applause

jee shukriya..
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«Reply #8 on: January 05, 2014, 06:47:18 AM »
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«Reply #9 on: April 02, 2014, 11:43:35 PM »
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Salam Alaikum Mahutram VB sahab

Apki nazm maine parhi mashallah jism saudi Arabia me hai magar ruh maazi ke un jungalon me naach khel rahi hai jahan humne apna bachpan guzara ….Kya pur lutf nazm kahi hai janab …hazaron dad apki is shahkaar nazm ke huzoor ..


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«Reply #10 on: April 03, 2014, 06:06:43 AM »
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Salam Alaikum Mahutram VB sahab

Apki nazm maine parhi mashallah jism saudi Arabia me hai magar ruh maazi ke un jungalon me naach khel rahi hai jahan humne apna bachpan guzara ….Kya pur lutf nazm kahi hai janab …hazaron dad apki is shahkaar nazm ke huzoor ..


Dua go

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mohtaram Qadeertoopchi Sahab! salam masnoon

aap ki tavaju par saraapaa sipaas hen... aap ki baat baja hay... k is misra "Aur maaN ki gode men so’ooN" men lafz "Aur" ko ghalat bandha gaya hay.. lafz aur ko Ghalib ne wazan "2" par bhe bandha hay aur wazan "2 1" par bhe. lekin isay wazan "1" par nahi bandha jaa sakta...

aik baar phir shukria k saath

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«Reply #11 on: April 03, 2014, 06:29:50 AM »
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mohtaram Qadeertoopchi Sahab! salam masnoon

aap ki tavaju par saraapaa sipaas hen... aap ki baat baja hay... k is misra "Aur maaN ki gode men so’ooN" men lafz "Aur" ko ghalat bandha gaya hay.. lafz aur ko Ghalib ne wazan "2" par bhe bandha hay aur wazan "2 1" par bhe. lekin isay wazan "1" par nahi bandha jaa sakta...

aik baar phir shukria k saath

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Mahutram Kyun sharmindah kar rahe hain ....Aap khoob jaante hain maine PM kar diya tha ke shayad kitabat ki ghalati ho ....Ghalib ne hi nahi subne lafz aur ko zarorate sheri ke tahat 2 aur 21 dono tarhan bandha hai ....han magar 1 ke wazn per kissi ne nahi .....Ik baar phir dad hazir hai aapki is shandaar nazm per ...

Dua go

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