~~~De Do Mera Bachpan~~~

by pankshivam on June 17, 2010, 10:14:06 PM
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«Reply #1 on: June 18, 2010, 06:09:22 AM »
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mindblowing pank ji.  Clapping Smiley   Applause  Applause
bahot dino bad aapki post padhne ko mili....
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«Reply #2 on: June 18, 2010, 06:32:07 AM »
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mindblowing pank ji.  Clapping Smiley   Applause  Applause
bahot dino bad aapki post padhne ko mili....

Thankyou !
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«Reply #3 on: June 18, 2010, 06:57:32 AM »
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Wah wah Pank ji bahot achha likha hai.Bachpan ki yaad taza ho gai. Nice creation.
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«Reply #4 on: June 18, 2010, 07:18:28 AM »
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 Applause Applause Applause superb creation
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«Reply #5 on: June 18, 2010, 07:41:49 AM »
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Thankyou !Riyaz bhai & Hashmi ji
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«Reply #6 on: June 18, 2010, 08:05:52 AM »
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Bahut Bahut Khoob Pank Ji..

Bahut Hi khoobsurat Aur jazbaaton Se Bharpoor.. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #7 on: June 18, 2010, 09:10:22 AM »
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Bahut Bahut Khoob Pank Ji..

Bahut Hi khoobsurat Aur jazbaaton Se Bharpoor.. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Thankyou !Khwaish ji
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«Reply #8 on: June 19, 2010, 01:55:14 AM »
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bahut bahut khoob likha hai aapne Pank ji... bahut khoob...!!!
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«Reply #9 on: June 19, 2010, 03:46:10 AM »
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bahut bahut khoob likha hai aapne Pank ji... bahut khoob...!!!

Thankyou !Klaskar ji
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«Reply #10 on: May 02, 2012, 04:16:23 PM »
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 :icon_salut:wah! pank ji kya aacha likhte ho.
aaj to aap hme hmare bachpan ki trf le gye....bhut aache
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«Reply #11 on: August 31, 2012, 06:39:44 PM »
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:icon_salut:wah! pank ji kya aacha likhte ho.
aaj to aap hme hmare bachpan ki trf le gye....bhut aache
Thankyou ! Hitender ji
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«Reply #12 on: March 14, 2016, 09:48:32 AM »
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मेरी मायूसी पे हर ख्वाहिश पूरी होती थी उस प्यारे बचपन में,
अब तो हर मज़बूरी में मुस्कुराना पड़ता है और दिल खोल के रोया भी नहीं जाता।।
~pank~
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«Reply #13 on: July 07, 2016, 08:18:01 AM »
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दे दो मेरा बचपन मुझे माँ के आंचल में खोने दो,,
सोया नहीं हूँ चैन की नींद कई दिनों से, आज मुझे माँ की गोद में सर रख के सोने दो।।

लिपट सा जाता था वो पतंग का मांझा मुझसे,
वो कागज़ की कश्ती आज फिर बारिश में भिगोने दो।।

वो पापा की डांट वो माँ का दुलार,
भूल सा गया हूँ सबकुछ, आज याद करके फिर से रोने दो।।

वो खेल वो खिलौने, वो मिट्टी के घरौंदे,
गुम हो गए हैं वो पल वक़्त की रेत में कहीं, आज उन पलों को फिर मुझे जीने दो।।

दे दो मेरा बचपन मुझे माँ के आंचल में खोने दो।।
~pank~

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