mera dil koi kagaj to nahin................

by parinde on January 09, 2011, 08:18:37 PM
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ye mera dil koi kaagaz to nahin.
koi aaya kuchh likh gayaa.
koi aur aaya,padhane lagaa,
jaise hi kuch likha hua dikh gayaa.
 
koi muskurakar khisak gayaa,
koi aahen bharkar sisak gayaa,
kisi ne giraye do aansoo,
aur bismil karke chala gayaa.

kisi ne samjha raddi isko,
mod tod kar kuchal gayaa,
kisi ne lagaai aag isme,
koi haath saik kar chala. Crying Crying Crying

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«Reply #1 on: January 09, 2011, 08:49:03 PM »
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wah Bahut khubb Parinde sahab.
ekdum mast.
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dil mera koi kagazi kasti na tha
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«Reply #2 on: January 09, 2011, 08:51:49 PM »
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BAHUT KHOOBSURAT
ye mera dil koi kaagaz to nahin.
koi aaya kuchh likh gayaa.
koi aur aaya,padhane lagaa,
jaise hi kuch likha hua dikh gayaa.
 
koi muskurakar khisak gayaa,
koi aahen bharkar sisak gayaa,
kisi ne giraye do aansoo,
aur bismil karke chala gayaa.

kisi ne samjha raddi isko,
mod tod kar kuchal gayaa,
kisi ne lagaai aag isme,
koi haath saik kar chala. Crying Crying Crying


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«Reply #3 on: January 09, 2011, 09:32:57 PM »
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Bohat achche, Parinde Ji,.

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«Reply #4 on: January 09, 2011, 10:29:54 PM »
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pehli peskash hi aisi hai k aur bht sare aapke likhi rachnao ko padhne ka dil kar gaya...
bht mast lkha hai aapne
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«Reply #5 on: January 09, 2011, 11:53:59 PM »
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Achha Prayaas hai ji aapka.....par dil ko kyu itna sasta kar diya...k koi bhi kuchh bhi kar le khel le iss-se.....

Yu sare aam na rakho khula apne dil ko
Jo jee chahe dillagi kar le uss-se...

Ye dil hai tera sambhaal k rakhna
Kaise koi rah mai kuchal de issk
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«Reply #6 on: January 10, 2011, 10:54:07 AM »
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bahut bahut khub.... parindeji...

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«Reply #7 on: January 11, 2011, 02:58:26 PM »
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Bahut Khub Parinde Ji Mashaallah Yu Hi Likhte Rahiye Nice Creation
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