Nahin hai mujhe hosh mera Lekin mein madhosh nahin

by Ricky on May 30, 2007, 10:46:43 PM
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In English Script:

   
    Bin maye beheke mere kadam,
        Lekin mein madhosh nahin hun !!

        Dikhe anjane saare jaane chehre,
        Lekin mein madhosh nahin hun !!

        Jab Tab tham jaye soch meri,
        Lekin mein madhosh nahin hun !!

        Har dooje pal beheke dhadkan meri,
        Lekin mein madhosh nahin hun !!

        Khali jaise sare jazb mere,
        Lekin mein madhosh nahin hun !!

        Nihare ek-tak uss chhor anhken meri,
        Lekin mein madhosh nahin hun !!

        Daure hai siharan yun jism mere,
        Lekin mein madhosh nahin hun !!

        Nahin hai mujhe hosh mera,
        Lekin phir bhi mein madhosh nahin hun !!


Now in Devnagri script

    बिन मय बहकें मेरे क़दम,
        लेकिन मैं मदहोश नहीं हूं |

        दिखे अनजाने सारे जाने चेहरे,
        लेकिन मैं मदहोश नहीं हूं |

        जब तब थम जाये सोच मेरी,
        लेकिन मैं मदहोश नहीं हूं |

        हर दूजे पल बहके धङकन मेरी,
        लेकिन मैं मदहोश नहीं हूं |

        ख़ाली जैसे सारे जज्ब़ मेरे,
        लेकिन मैं मदहोश नहीं हूं |

        निहारे एक-टक उस छोर आंखे मेरी,
        लेकिन मैं मदहोश नहीं हूं |

        दौङे है सिहरन यूं जिस्म मेरे,
        लेकिन मैं मदहोश नहीं हूं |

        नहीं है मुझे होश मेरा ,
        लेकिन फिर भी मैं मदहोश नहीं हूं |


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«Reply #1 on: May 31, 2007, 08:31:47 AM »
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Ricky

Marvellous ! Excellent ! Superb ! =D>

I enjoyed it reading more in devnagri script. :D
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«Reply #2 on: May 31, 2007, 10:49:49 AM »
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yap... Ricky sir its wonderfulll

I also love to read it in Devnagri.. I would lyk to say Yea akdum mast kalam tha...

I enjoyed while reading it..

Best wishes
Divya
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«Reply #3 on: May 31, 2007, 06:16:42 PM »
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Well, I must say that you both appreciated it real nice.

Thankyou for such a good appreciations. Usual Smile ..
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«Reply #4 on: June 04, 2007, 02:01:53 PM »
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Its Marvellous... =D>
Bahut hi achha likha hai Ricky... Very nice thinking...

I will try to reply it in Poetic way very soon... Usual Smile
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«Reply #5 on: June 05, 2007, 08:14:16 AM »
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Thankyou again !
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«Reply #6 on: June 07, 2007, 08:34:56 AM »
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Well, Just A try from my side....

"POETRY DELETED BY SHIKHA"
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«Reply #7 on: June 07, 2007, 10:39:25 AM »
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... ..

This is wonderful !!!
Nicely knitted !!

Kuch andaaz uska aisa tha,
De jaate thae woh chubhan jeene mein !
Jo hota tha gehra dard yahan,
Kehte thae chupa ke rakhna isko apne seene mein !!
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«Reply #8 on: June 07, 2007, 04:30:08 PM »
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good work Ricky and Shikha.....

bahoot hi acha likha hai app dono ne!!
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«Reply #9 on: June 07, 2007, 05:43:37 PM »
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Good work Ricky n SHikha.......

Ricky, bahut dino ke bad yoindia pe aaya, malum nahi tha ki aap bhi likhte ho........

Shikha ji, apko padha nahi maine pehle....but ye accha likha apne....Usual Smile

Wo bepanaah husn tera, wo adaaon se itraana,
Wo mehekti saasein teri, wo latoon ka bal khana,
Lab tere gulaab se komal, aankhen hai maikhana,
Jabse dooba mai ishq mein tere, jana dil ka jal jana,

Kab din dhala, kab raat hui itne bhi mujhko hosh nahi,
Behki behki batein karta hu lekin main madhosh nahi.....Winking
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«Reply #10 on: June 07, 2007, 06:14:54 PM »
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Thank you Pooja ji & Amit..
I am not surprised that you came to know about my writings now as time to time I read this comment.
But I do write sometimes.

Aur.. It seems that harr koi yahan bohot hi umda likh raha hai. You wrote real good. !
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«Reply #11 on: June 07, 2007, 06:27:29 PM »
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Thanks Ricky....Usual Smile

Wo mad bhari nigahen unki, mere dil mein utar gayi,
Aankhon ne ki khata aur maut chu kar guzar gayi,
Kaise sambhale khud pe ab kaboo hi na raha,
Unse mili nigaahen kya, madhosh kar gayi.......
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«Reply #12 on: June 07, 2007, 06:32:02 PM »
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Wah Wah Wah!! kaya baat hai.. bahoot hi acha likh rahe hai app Creator ji!!

Najar jhukao to najar hum bhi utha le
Pal bhar ko dekh kar unhe, khud ko behka de
Madmasat hai yah Fiza, hawa ko bhi surmai bana de
Ek pal jo mil jaaye najar, unke bhi hosh urda de!!
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«Reply #13 on: June 07, 2007, 06:42:05 PM »
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Kya bat hai pooja ji.........Winking

Nazar nazar ki bat hai, teri sahi meri sahi,
Kitni haseen ye rat hai, teri sahi meri sahi,
Tu samajh na paya paigam hum jo keh chuke,
Ye pyar ek saugat hai, teri sahi meri sahi....tongue3
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«Reply #14 on: June 07, 2007, 06:51:20 PM »
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ha ha ha bahoot khoob Creator ji!!!
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