ITNI MADHOSH NA BUN BAAD - E - SABA HOSH MEIN AA.....................HASAN

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Bikhri  jaati  hai  mere  yaar  ki  zulfoN  ki  ghata,
Itni  madhosh  na  bun , baad-e- saba , hosh  meiN  aa  

Zindagi  bhar  na  sunee , jis  ne  kabhie , arz  meri,
Aa  ke  turbatt  pe  meri , aaj  woh  detaa  hai  sadaa

Ab  jo  milta  hai  to  katraa  ke  nikal  jaata  hai ,
Humsafar  ban'ne  ka  jis  ne  kabhi  waada  thha  kiya

Waqt  ki  aandhi  bujhaatee  rahi  sapnoN  ke  chiraagh,
Raah-e-haq  per  raha  raushan  mera  chhota  sa  diyaa

Muflisee   per  meri   hanste  haiN   zamaane   waale ,
Rahmat - e - Maalik - e - Kau'nain  zaraa  josh  meiN  aa

Usski  duniya  se   bahut  duur   nikal   aaye  'Hasan' ,
Jaane  kis  baat  ki  phir  wo  hameiN  detaa  hai  sazaa
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«Reply #1 on: September 10, 2011, 04:42:05 AM »
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Hasan Sahab,

Waah..waah..waah..bahut khoob
matle se maqte tak sabhee sher
laajwaab hain..

Dili daad-o-mubarakbaad kubool farmaayen.

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«Reply #2 on: September 10, 2011, 08:30:53 AM »
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Satish Shukla saheb,adaab.Aap ne ghazal parhi aur pasand farmai.Bahut bahut shukriya.
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«Reply #3 on: September 10, 2011, 09:08:31 AM »
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Bikhri  jaati  hai  mere  yaar  ki  zulfoN  ki  ghata,
Itni  madhosh  na  bun , baad-e- saba , hosh  meiN  aa 

Zindagi  bhar  na  sunee , jis  ne  kabhie , arz  meri,
Aa  ke  turbatt  pe  meri , aaj  woh  detaa  hai  sadaa

Ab  jo  milta  hai  to  katraa  ke  nikal  jaata  hai ,
Humsafar  ban'ne  ka  jis  ne  kabhi  waada  thha  kiya

Waqt  ki  aandhi  bujhaatee  rahi  sapnoN  ke  chiraagh,
Raah-e-haq  per  raha  raushan  mera  chhota  sa  diyaa

Muflisee   per  meri   hanste  haiN   zamaane   waale ,
Rahmat - e - Maalik - e - Kau'nain  zaraa  josh  meiN  aa

Usski  duniya  se   bahut  duur   nikal   aaye  'Hasan' ,
Jaane  kis  baat  ki  phir  wo  hameiN  detaa  hai  sazaa

waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah

  ek besh qeemti ghazal pesh kiya hai...beshqeemti ashar se saja huaa.......hasan sahab
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«Reply #4 on: September 10, 2011, 10:05:59 AM »
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 Thankyou !
adil becain saheb,aap ke khoobsurat,hausla afza alfaazkeliye bahut bahut shukriya
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«Reply #5 on: September 10, 2011, 11:31:51 PM »
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Siddiqui Sahaab Aadaab!


Waah waah waah janab kia kahne aapki is umda gazal ke..
behad umdaa gazal kahi hai aapne... Waah

Sabhi ashaar aik se badhkar aik rahe...
         



Bikhri  jaati  hai  mere  yaar  ki  zulfoN  ki  ghata,
Itni  madhosh  na  bun , baad-e- saba , hosh  meiN  aa 

Waah janab behad gazab ka matla kaha hai aapne... daad daad daad           

Zindagi  bhar  na  sunee , jis  ne  kabhie , arz  meri,
Aa  ke  turbatt  pe  meri , aaj  woh  detaa  hai  sadaa

Bahut khoob janab achcha sher hai..           

Ab  jo  milta  hai  to  katraa  ke  nikal  jaata  hai ,
Humsafar  ban'ne  ka  jis  ne  kabhi  waada  thha  kiya

Kia kahne janab... bahut khoob..         

Waqt  ki  aandhi  bujhaatee  rahi  sapnoN  ke  chiraagh,
Raah-e-haq  per  raha  raushan  mera  chhota  sa  diyaa

Bahut sahiN janab daad daad daad..           

Muflisee   per  meri   hanste  haiN   zamaane   waale ,
Rahmat - e - Maalik - e - Kau'nain  zaraa  josh  meiN  aa

Aameen... Achchi duaa O iltejaa hai daad           

Usski  duniya  se   bahut  duur   nikal   aaye  'Hasan' ,
Jaane  kis  baat  ki  phir  wo  hameiN  detaa  hai  sazaa

Waah waah waah bahut khob umdaa janab daad           


Janab is khubsurat kalaam par humari dili daad O mubarakbad kabul kijiye....

Likhate rahiye.... Aate rahiye..
Khush O aabaad rahiye...
Khuda Hafez           

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«Reply #6 on: September 11, 2011, 04:37:56 AM »
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Parwaaz Sahib,Hamesha ki tarah ghazal ke tafseeli jaaize aur hausla afzaai ke liye bahut bahut shukriya.HASAN
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«Reply #7 on: September 11, 2011, 09:08:54 AM »
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Bikhri  jaati  hai  mere  yaar  ki  zulfoN  ki  ghata,
Itni  madhosh  na  bun , baad-e- saba , hosh  meiN  aa 

Zindagi  bhar  na  sunee , jis  ne  kabhie , arz  meri,
Aa  ke  turbatt  pe  meri , aaj  woh  detaa  hai  sadaa

Ab  jo  milta  hai  to  katraa  ke  nikal  jaata  hai ,
Humsafar  ban'ne  ka  jis  ne  kabhi  waada  thha  kiya

Waqt  ki  aandhi  bujhaatee  rahi  sapnoN  ke  chiraagh,
Raah-e-haq  per  raha  raushan  mera  chhota  sa  diyaa

Muflisee   per  meri   hanste  haiN   zamaane   waale ,
Rahmat - e - Maalik - e - Kau'nain  zaraa  josh  meiN  aa

Usski  duniya  se   bahut  duur   nikal   aaye  'Hasan' ,
Jaane  kis  baat  ki  phir  wo  hameiN  detaa  hai  sazaa


mohabbat ke khubsurat ehsaas se labrez.
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«Reply #8 on: September 11, 2011, 01:16:58 PM »
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mb saheb,khoobsurat tabsire ke liye tah e dil se shukriya.HASAN
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«Reply #9 on: September 19, 2011, 03:55:04 PM »
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bahut achhi ghazal hai.speially aapka sher "waqt ki aandhi...'bahut zyda pasand aaya. 
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«Reply #10 on: September 20, 2011, 04:34:42 AM »
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Qais saheb,ghazal parhne aur pasand karne ke liye bahut bahut shukriya.Hasan
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«Reply #11 on: September 20, 2011, 06:23:08 AM »
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Bahut umda Siddiqui sahab
Kya Gajal Hai..Bahut Khoob
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«Reply #12 on: September 20, 2011, 09:19:04 AM »
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mkv ji,hausla afzaai ke liye bahut mamnoon hoon.Khush rahiye.HASAN
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«Reply #13 on: September 20, 2011, 09:34:47 AM »
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ky baat hai hasan ji taarif ke liye alfaaz kanha se layen umda ,behtareen ,khoob  Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #14 on: September 20, 2011, 10:47:49 AM »
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Kamal aggarwal saheb,Zarranawaazi ke liye bahut shukriya.Aap jaise dostoN ki yeh mohabbat hi shaayed kabhi ash'aar mein ghulkar unheiN wiqar bakhsh deti hai.Khush rahiye.Hasan
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