ITNI OONCHI BHI ABB UDAAN NA BHAR ..................HASAN -Panna 2:Shayri-E-Dard

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«Reply #15 on: December 14, 2011, 05:30:38 PM »

Quote from: khwaish on December 13, 2011, 04:05:20 PM

Waah Waah Waah!!!!!!

Kya kehne hasan Saheb!!!!

Huemsha Ki Tarah Lajawaab

khwaish ji,Hausla afzai ke liye shukriya.
khush rahiye.Hasan


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Re: ITNI OONCHI BHI ABB UDAAN NA BHAR ..................HASAN

«Reply #16 on: December 15, 2011, 05:14:51 AM »

Quote from: arunmishra on December 13, 2011, 05:32:36 PM

"मुफलिसों के चिराग़ जलने दे ,
ऐ हवा, आँधियों के कान न भर "

बहुत अच्छा शे'र, अच्छी ग़ज़ल | बधाई एवं शुभकामनायें |
-अरुण मिश्र.

Arun Misra saheb,Adaab.Ghazal parhne
aur hausla fza tabsire ke liye tah e dil
se aap ka mamnoon hoon.Duago,Hasan


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Re: ITNI OONCHI BHI ABB UDAAN NA BHAR ..................HASAN

«Reply #17 on: December 15, 2011, 05:29:18 AM »

Quote from: F.H.SIDDIQUI on December 13, 2011, 12:08:25 PM

Itni oonchi bhi abb udaan na bhar ,
Rakh zameeni haqeeqatoN pe nazar

Yuunhi kab tak take ga Raahguzar ,
Duur Manzil hai , kar le Azm - safar

Timtimaata hai Zindagi ka Chiragh ,
Jalta - bujhta rahe hai shaam - o -sahar

Khatm hone lagi hai Beenaai ,
Duur hone lage haiN Noor - e - nazar

MuflisoN ke Chiragh jalne de ,
Aye Hawaa , AandhiyoN ke kaan na bhar

Jaane kis dam bulaawa aa jaaye
Abb 'Hasan' , baandh bhi lo Rakht - e - safar

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zameeni haqeeqat = ground realities ; raahguzar = raasta ; Azm e safar = safar ka iraada ; Beenaai = Eyesight ; noor e nazar = aankhon ki roshni ( aulaad ) ;Rakht e safar = safar ka saaman

waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah Clapping Smiley

hain sabhi ashar ghazal ke ek se badh kar,
aur taareef ke liye paas hain lafz mokhtasar.


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Re: ITNI OONCHI BHI ABB UDAAN NA BHAR ..................HASAN

«Reply #18 on: December 15, 2011, 07:33:22 AM »

Hasan Bhai,

Aap ko Allah lambi aur sehat mand umr ata kare
Bahut hi ache ashar ki peshkash thi ye.
Behad dilpasand aur yaqeeni har dil azeez hogi

aapka aik alfaaz udhar le raha hoon."Tim timana"
Bahut hi muhabbat se aapko mere kalaam me lautane.

Aap ki nazr, aur islah ka muhtaj;

Aik tifl-e-maktab ki tim-timati aqal ki raushni thi
Muqabla usse to andhiyon se karna pada

Zarra tha khaak ka voh magar
Jawaan seenon men aag laga kar chala

Zarkhareed ghulam hi tha voh magar
lakeeron ne uski likha aik sultanat ka taqht


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Re: ITNI OONCHI BHI ABB UDAAN NA BHAR ..................HASAN

«Reply #19 on: December 15, 2011, 08:56:56 AM »

Quote from: mkv on December 13, 2011, 05:42:21 PM

Bahut khoob Hasan Sahab
Ek ek lafj..subhan allah...DAAD...D.........................D
Mahfile sajti hai, log vaah vaah karte hai, ek doosre ki hausla afjaai karte hai, aage badh kar hath milaane se dilo.n ki dooriyan kam ho rahi hai..yahi to mai chhata hu..

Yahi to mahfil ka maja hai..choti si jindgi hai..jee lo jee bhar ke..

Mkv saheb Hausla afzai ke liye bahut bahut shukriya . Sahi kaha aapne , yeh sabhi ahbaab ka aapsi pyaar aur ta'aawun hi hai jis se YOINDIA ka ye karwaan e sukhan aage barh raha hai . Mujhe bahut achha lagta hai jub log apne tabsiron se - chaahe wo tanqeed mein ho ya taareef mein - nawaazte hain aur baat cheet karne aur kuchh seekhne ka mouqa milta hai . Pichle eik saal mein kuchh dostonn ki gumshudgi to khal rahi hai lekin mujhe khushi mahsoos hoti hai ki kuchh bahut achha likhne walon ne YO join kar ke is web ke wiqaar mein izaafa kiya hai . Aur sab se bari baat - hum aapsi guftugu mein YO ke founders aur monitors ko shukriya ada karna bhool jaate hain jinki badaulat hamein yeh khubsurat platform mila hai . Khuda unki koshishon ko kaamyaab kare aur iss website ko maqbooliyat ki nai manzilon tak pahunchaaye . Aap ne aisi baat chedi ki main bhi khud ko apne jazbaat ke izhaar se nahin rok saka . Ummeed hai hum yuunhi taawun aur pyaar qaaim rakhenge . Duago ,Hasan


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Re: ITNI OONCHI BHI ABB UDAAN NA BHAR ..................HASAN

«Reply #20 on: December 15, 2011, 09:54:47 AM »

Quote from: Abul Asad on December 15, 2011, 07:33:22 AM

Abul Asad saheb , Aap ki purkhuloos aur munkasir ul mizaji ka paikar iss tahreer ka fouri jawaab laazmi ho gaya hai . Aap ne kaha ki aap ne eik lafz udhaar liya hai . Parh ke bahut maza aaya . Dar asl kuchh alfaaz hamaare zahnon mein dabe hote hain lekin issi tarah se kahin parhne per achhe lagte hain aur unhein istemaal karne ko ji chaahta hai .Kuchh din pahle eik web per eik ghazal padhi thhi jis mein " meri baahon mein tilmila " jaisa kuchh istemaal hua thha . Yeh lafz istemaal karne ko dil machal raha hai lekin abhi mauqa nahin mila hai . Aap bhi agar pasand aaye to koshish kijye.
Aap ke ashaar bahut khoobsurat aur qaabil e daad hain . Jahaan tak aap ne 'Islaah' ki baat ki hai to ye aapka inkisaar hai . Aur main to iss muaamle mein khud taalib e ilm hoon aur kuchh basic baaton ke alaawa bilkul laailm hoon . Jo kuchh seekha hai woh learning by observation hai . Kisi funni pahloo par wasooq ke saath tabsira nahiin kar sakta . Insha allah hum log issi tarah tabadla i khayaal kar ke aur kuch doston ke tabsiron mein shaamil hokar kuchh seekhte raheinge . Aap ki pahli hi poem bahut mutassir karnewaali aur eik munfarad qism ki thhi jiske baad aap ki har kaavish ko fouran parhne ki khwahish hoti hai . Likhte rahiye aur iss karawaan mein humsafari ka mouqa deta rahiye . Duago , Hasan


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Re: ITNI OONCHI BHI ABB UDAAN NA BHAR ..................HASAN

«Reply #21 on: December 15, 2011, 12:37:15 PM »

Quote from: Shihab on December 13, 2011, 06:27:37 PM

Aadaab kya kehne jawaab nahi aapka
Har baar kuch aisa likh jaate hain aap ki
Bas kabhi kabhi to samajh hi nahi aata
Ki taareef karen bhi to aakhir kaise karen
Is khoobsurat peshkash pe dili mubarakbad
Aur hazaaron daad janaab...

Shad o aabad rahiye...

Shihab

Shihab mian , Bahut mashkoor hoon
ki aap ne apne makhsoos pyare andaz
mein hausla afzai ki . Khush rahiye .
Duago , Hasan


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Re: ITNI OONCHI BHI ABB UDAAN NA BHAR ..................HASAN

«Reply #22 on: December 15, 2011, 05:45:28 PM »

Quote from: Imdad on December 13, 2011, 06:55:41 PM

Wah. bahut khoob. Kitni asani se aapne kitni sanjida bate kar di.

Andaz e bayaan bhi bahut achha hai. Bahot khoob.

Imdad saheb , Adab . Aap ne ghazal padhi
aur apne hausla afza tabsire se nawaza .
Bahut mashkoor hoon . Karam banaaye rahiyega .
Duago , Hasan


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«Reply #23 on: December 15, 2011, 09:38:55 PM »

Wah wah F.H.SIDDIQUI ji kya khoob likha hai aapne......


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Re: ITNI OONCHI BHI ABB UDAAN NA BHAR ..................HASAN

«Reply #24 on: December 16, 2011, 05:02:35 AM »

Quote from: ParwaaZ on December 13, 2011, 07:15:50 PM

Siddiqui Sahaab Aadaab!

Waah jee kia kahne aapke.. behad umdaa aur khub khayaloN ko
ashaaroN meiN dhalaa hai janab..

Sabhi ashaar kafi gehre aur pur asar rahe..
Humari dili daad O mubarakabd kabul kijiye..

Aur in ashaaroN ke kia kahne jee waah bahut khoob ..
Likhate rahiye.. Aate rahiye..
Khush O aabaad rahiye..
khuda Hafez..

Timtimaata hai Zindagi ka Chiragh ,
Jalta - bujhta rahe hai shaam - o -sahar

Khatm hone lagi hai Beenaai ,
Duur hone lage haiN Noor - e - nazar

MuflisoN ke Chiragh jalne de ,
Aye Hawaa , AandhiyoN ke kaan na bhar

Parwaaz saheb , Ghazal parhne aur
hausla afzai ke liye bahut bahut
shukriya . Hasan


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Re: ITNI OONCHI BHI ABB UDAAN NA BHAR ..................HASAN

«Reply #25 on: December 16, 2011, 12:28:30 PM »

Quote from: mamta bajpai on December 14, 2011, 12:30:54 AM

Aaaaaaaah kyaa kahne saheb!
muflisoN ke chiragh jalne de........bahut khoob!!!!!!sabhee ashaar behad asardaar.......is khoobsoorat kalaam ke liye dilii daad qubool farmaayeN..

Mamtaji , Hausla afzai ke liye tah e dil
se mamnoon hoon . Hasan


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«Reply #26 on: December 16, 2011, 05:58:44 PM »

Quote from: mann.mann on December 14, 2011, 03:32:20 AM

bahut hi khub siddiquiji

Mann.mann ji , hausla afzai ke
liye bahut shukriya . Khush rahiye .Duago ,Hasan


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«Reply #27 on: December 17, 2011, 03:39:25 AM »

Quote from: sksaini4 on December 14, 2011, 04:10:53 AM

"khatm hone lagee hai beenaaee.
door hone lage hain nooe-e-nazar." waah waah kamaal kar diyaa Hasan shaib

Saini saheb , Hausla afzai ke liye
bahut mashkoor hoon . Hasan


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«Reply #28 on: December 17, 2011, 12:56:29 PM »

Quote from: sunildehgawani on December 14, 2011, 02:59:54 PM

:clapping:hasan ji ,,,,superb

Sunildehgawani saheb,thanx a lot.


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Re: ITNI OONCHI BHI ABB UDAAN NA BHAR ..................HASAN

«Reply #29 on: December 17, 2011, 05:27:05 PM »

Quote from: adil bechain on December 15, 2011, 05:29:18 AM

waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah Clapping Smiley

hain sabhi ashar ghazal ke ek se badh kar,
aur taareef ke liye paas hain lafz mokhtasar.

Adil Bechain saheb ,Khubsurat sher se
khubsurat hausla afzai ke liye kya kahoon . Bahut
bahut bahut mashkoor hoon.Duago , Hasan


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