ITNI OONCHI BHI ABB UDAAN NA BHAR ..................HASAN:Shayri-E-Dard

F.H.SIDDIQUI

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Itni oonchi bhi abb udaan na bhar ,
Rakh zameeni haqeeqatoN pe nazar

Yuunhi kab tak take ga Raahguzar ,
Duur Manzil hai , kar le Azm - safar

Timtimaata hai Zindagi ka Chiragh ,
Jalta - bujhta rahe hai shaam - o -sahar

Khatm hone lagi hai Beenaai ,
Duur hone lage haiN Noor - e - nazar

MuflisoN ke Chiragh jalne de ,
Aye Hawaa , AandhiyoN ke kaan na bhar

Jaane kis dam bulaawa aa jaaye
Abb 'Hasan' , baandh bhi lo Rakht - e - safar

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zameeni haqeeqat = ground realities ; raahguzar = raasta ; Azm e safar = safar ka iraada ; Beenaai = Eyesight ; noor e nazar = aankhon ki roshni ( aulaad ) ;Rakht e safar = safar ka saaman


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Re: ITNI OONCHI BHI ABB UDAAN NA BHAR ..................HASAN

«Reply #1 on: December 13, 2011, 12:30:30 PM »

Quote from: F.H.SIDDIQUI on December 13, 2011, 12:08:25 PM

BAHUT KHOOB HASAN SAHAB


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Re: ITNI OONCHI BHI ABB UDAAN NA BHAR ..................HASAN

«Reply #2 on: December 13, 2011, 12:57:03 PM »

Hasan Sahib,

Bahut hi umdah bahut hi wazni alfaaz
Aaj Faiz ki yaad aagayi,

Bahut hi alaa, alfazon ki umda tareen pesh kash

Tifl-e maktab
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Re: ITNI OONCHI BHI ABB UDAAN NA BHAR ..................HASAN

«Reply #3 on: December 13, 2011, 04:05:20 PM »

Quote from: F.H.SIDDIQUI on December 13, 2011, 12:08:25 PM

Waah Waah Waah!!!!!!

Kya kehne hasan Saheb!!!!

Huemsha Ki Tarah Lajawaab


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Re: ITNI OONCHI BHI ABB UDAAN NA BHAR ..................HASAN

«Reply #4 on: December 13, 2011, 05:32:36 PM »

"मुफलिसों के चिराग़ जलने दे ,
ऐ हवा, आँधियों के कान न भर "

बहुत अच्छा शे'र, अच्छी ग़ज़ल | बधाई एवं शुभकामनायें |
-अरुण मिश्र.


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Re: ITNI OONCHI BHI ABB UDAAN NA BHAR ..................HASAN

«Reply #5 on: December 13, 2011, 05:42:21 PM »

Bahut khoob Hasan Sahab
Ek ek lafj..subhan allah...DAAD...D.........................D
Mahfile sajti hai, log vaah vaah karte hai, ek doosre ki hausla afjaai karte hai, aage badh kar hath milaane se dilo.n ki dooriyan kam ho rahi hai..yahi to mai chhata hu..

Yahi to mahfil ka maja hai..choti si jindgi hai..jee lo jee bhar ke..


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Re: ITNI OONCHI BHI ABB UDAAN NA BHAR ..................HASAN

«Reply #6 on: December 13, 2011, 06:55:41 PM »

Wah. bahut khoob. Kitni asani se aapne kitni sanjida bate kar di.

Andaz e bayaan bhi bahut achha hai. Bahot khoob.


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Re: ITNI OONCHI BHI ABB UDAAN NA BHAR ..................HASAN

«Reply #7 on: December 13, 2011, 07:15:50 PM »

Siddiqui Sahaab Aadaab!

Waah jee kia kahne aapke.. behad umdaa aur khub khayaloN ko
ashaaroN meiN dhalaa hai janab..

Sabhi ashaar kafi gehre aur pur asar rahe..
Humari dili daad O mubarakabd kabul kijiye..

Aur in ashaaroN ke kia kahne jee waah bahut khoob ..
Likhate rahiye.. Aate rahiye..
Khush O aabaad rahiye..
khuda Hafez..

Timtimaata hai Zindagi ka Chiragh ,
Jalta - bujhta rahe hai shaam - o -sahar

Khatm hone lagi hai Beenaai ,
Duur hone lage haiN Noor - e - nazar

MuflisoN ke Chiragh jalne de ,
Aye Hawaa , AandhiyoN ke kaan na bhar


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Re: ITNI OONCHI BHI ABB UDAAN NA BHAR ..................HASAN

«Reply #8 on: December 14, 2011, 12:30:54 AM »

Aaaaaaaah kyaa kahne saheb!
muflisoN ke chiragh jalne de........bahut khoob!!!!!!sabhee ashaar behad asardaar.......is khoobsoorat kalaam ke liye dilii daad qubool farmaayeN..


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Re: ITNI OONCHI BHI ABB UDAAN NA BHAR ..................HASAN

«Reply #9 on: December 14, 2011, 01:43:47 AM »

Quote from: Abul Asad on December 13, 2011, 12:57:03 PM

Hasan Sahib,

Bahut hi umdah bahut hi wazni alfaaz
Aaj Faiz ki yaad aagayi,

Bahut hi alaa, alfazon ki umda tareen pesh kash

Tifl-e maktab
Abul Asad

Bahut bahut hi pyaara khayaal aur bahut hi umdhah bayani
Dobara padhne ko ji chaha, aur dobara dad dene ko


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Re: ITNI OONCHI BHI ABB UDAAN NA BHAR ..................HASAN

«Reply #10 on: December 14, 2011, 03:32:20 AM »

bahut hi khub siddiquiji


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Re: ITNI OONCHI BHI ABB UDAAN NA BHAR ..................HASAN

«Reply #11 on: December 14, 2011, 04:10:53 AM »

"khatm hone lagee hai beenaaee.
door hone lage hain nooe-e-nazar." waah waah kamaal kar diyaa Hasan shaib


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Re: ITNI OONCHI BHI ABB UDAAN NA BHAR ..................HASAN

«Reply #12 on: December 14, 2011, 07:49:42 AM »

Quote from: Sheba on December 13, 2011, 12:30:30 PM

BAHUT KHOOB HASAN SAHAB

Bahut bahut shukriya , Sheba ji.


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Re: ITNI OONCHI BHI ABB UDAAN NA BHAR ..................HASAN

«Reply #13 on: December 14, 2011, 02:54:59 PM »

Quote from: Abul Asad on December 14, 2011, 01:43:47 AM

Bahut bahut hi pyaara khayaal aur bahut hi umdhah bayani
Dobara padhne ko ji chaha, aur dobara dad dene ko

Abul Asad saheb , Bahut nawazish hai
ki aap ne ghazal phir se padhi
aur farakhdili se nacheez ki hausla
afzaai bhi ki . Bahut shukriya . Apni
inayat banaye rakhiye ga . Hasan


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Re: ITNI OONCHI BHI ABB UDAAN NA BHAR ..................HASAN

«Reply #14 on: December 14, 2011, 02:59:54 PM »

:clapping:hasan ji ,,,,superb


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