Mohabbat ka aane waala kal

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kal is jahaan me mohabbat ka wo hashra hoga,
tutenge sainkdo dil aur aansuon ka sama hoga,

kuch dino ki baat hai mohabbat ka bazaar hoga,
jab bhare bazaar me mohabbat nilaam hoga,

aaj har rishte ki buniyaad hoti hai wafaa,
kal har vishwaas ka naam bewafaa hoga,

kal is duniya me mohabbat ka wo hashra hoga ,
na chalne ko zameen hogi na upar aasmaan hoga,

kehte hain hum ki jajbaat kabhi marte nahi hai,
par kal in jajbaaton ka na naam na nishaan hoga...
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«Reply #1 on: April 08, 2010, 05:02:44 AM »
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Wah Kapil ji bahut sachai aur ek alag andaaz mein pesh kiya aapne ye kavita.great work. Hats off to you! Applause Applause Applause Applause icon_thumleft
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«Reply #2 on: April 08, 2010, 09:14:31 AM »
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Achha likha hai Kapil ji, Parivartan prakriti ka niyam hai..time aur space ke according ye sab hame swikaar karna padega...
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«Reply #3 on: April 08, 2010, 11:04:35 AM »
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Wah wah achhi poem hai Kapil ji.
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«Reply #4 on: April 08, 2010, 02:52:28 PM »
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Bahut khoob Kapil Ji
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«Reply #5 on: April 08, 2010, 05:40:10 PM »
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Bahaut khoob Kapil dost...Kal har vishwas ka naam bewaffa hoga..kya baat hai dost..bahaut ache...wakei wafa ahiste ahiste jaa rahi hai duniya se..
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«Reply #6 on: April 08, 2010, 05:58:26 PM »
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Bahut Bahut Khoob Kapilji.. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Duniya Mein Har Insaan Apni Soch,Apni Samaj Rakhta Hai..Aapne Apne Khayalo Ka Bakhoobi Darshaya Hai, Par Kya Sach mein Jazbaaton Ka Kal Koi Naam-o-Nishaan Bhi Naa Hoga??
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«Reply #7 on: April 08, 2010, 09:34:21 PM »
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Bahut bahut shukriya Madhu ji...koshish ki is baar kuch alag likhne ki maine... achcha laga jaanke ki aapko pasand aaya...bahut bahut shukriya Madhu ji...!!!

Wah Kapil ji bahut sachai aur ek alag andaaz mein pesh kiya aapne ye kavita.great work. Hats off to you! Applause Applause Applause Applause icon_thumleft
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«Reply #8 on: April 08, 2010, 09:37:57 PM »
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Bahut bahut shukriya Pandey ji... par is tarah ka parivartan kya chahte hai aap? Parivartan prakriti ka niyam hai par kabhi bhi hum aisa nahi chahenge ki hamari saari bhawnaayen khatam ho jaayen.. hum insaan hai... machine nahi... maafi chahunga agar hamari baat aapko buri lagi to... par sach me aajkal logo k dilon me mohabbat bhara ehsas nahi raha ...

Achha likha hai Kapil ji, Parivartan prakriti ka niyam hai..time aur space ke according ye sab hame swikaar karna padega...
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«Reply #9 on: April 08, 2010, 09:38:43 PM »
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Bahut bahut shukriya Riyaz ji...!!!

Wah wah achhi poem hai Kapil ji.
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«Reply #10 on: April 08, 2010, 09:39:43 PM »
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Bahut bahut shukriya Rajesh ji...!!!

Bahut khoob Kapil Ji
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«Reply #11 on: April 08, 2010, 09:41:43 PM »
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Bahut bahut shukriya Rahim bhai hamari kavita ko pasand karne k liye aur samajhne k liye...!!!

Bahaut khoob Kapil dost...Kal har vishwas ka naam bewaffa hoga..kya baat hai dost..bahaut ache...wakei wafa ahiste ahiste jaa rahi hai duniya se..
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«Reply #12 on: April 08, 2010, 09:48:17 PM »
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Bahut bahut shukriya Khwaish ji hamari kavita pasand karne k liye...!!!

Sach kaha aapne hum sab ki soch alag alag hoti hai. Tabhi hum sab alag alag dhang se sochte hain. Aaj insaan zindagi ki daud me is tarah bhaag raha hai ki usko ehsaason ki kadar nahi hai. Usko pata hi nahi hai ki jajbaat kya hote hain. Aur agar is tarah hi chalta raha to jajbaton ka naam-o-nishaan nahi rahega. Han main aisa nahi keh raha ki kisi ko bhi jajbaaton ki kadar nahi hai. Sau me 1-2 bande honge jo jajbaaton ki kadar karte honge. Par paththaron ki dher me chhipa heera dikhayi nahi dega. Maafi cahunga agar aapko hamari baat buri lagi to. Bahaw me jaane kya kya likh diya.

Bahut Bahut Khoob Kapilji.. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Duniya Mein Har Insaan Apni Soch,Apni Samaj Rakhta Hai..Aapne Apne Khayalo Ka Bakhoobi Darshaya Hai, Par Kya Sach mein Jazbaaton Ka Kal Koi Naam-o-Nishaan Bhi Naa Hoga??

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«Reply #13 on: April 09, 2010, 04:27:48 AM »
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OMG Kapil ... it seems tht u vr in bad mood means Gussa vn u wrote dis...
Ur words r relly gud & its vry nyc creation as well but...

I dont agree wid u .. Pls aisa maat bolo ki aisa hoga wafa nahi hogi & etc...
Wat i belive
IF U THINK GUD IT HAPPENS GUD"
so v all r responsible for our 2morw ... hum acha sochnge to acha hoga may b im wrong ...
Im sorry .. 'coz every1 has his/her own views..
U knoe im very positive person So i also vana u 2 c vry +ive ...

Hope u dont mynd dis ...
But very well written .... but jst d diff btw ur & myn views...

Im sorry if i said anythng wrong.........
kal is jahaan me mohabbat ka wo hashra hoga,
tutenge sainkdo dil aur aansuon ka sama hoga,

kuch dino ki baat hai mohabbat ka bazaar hoga,
jab bhare bazaar me mohabbat nilaam hoga,

aaj har rishte ki buniyaad hoti hai wafaa,
kal har vishwaas ka naam bewafaa hoga,

kal is duniya me mohabbat ka wo hashra hoga ,
na chalne ko zameen hogi na upar aasmaan hoga,

kehte hain hum ki jajbaat kabhi marte nahi hai,
par kal in jajbaaton ka na naam na nishaan hoga...
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«Reply #14 on: April 10, 2010, 03:33:20 AM »
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Nahi Neel aisa nahi hai... main gusse me nahi tha.. darasal dimaag me kuch kuch aata raha aur main likhta raha... ye kavita maine dil se nahi dimag se likha hai... thanx a lot for the compliments...

aap sorry q bol rahe ho? aapne kuch bhi galat nahi kaha. bas sabki soch alag alag hoti hai. main ye nahi keh raha ki ehsaas bilkul khatam ho jayenge par haan dheere dheere kam ho jayega. hum to achcha achcha soch le par agla agar hamare jaisa soche tab baat banegi na...

I know u r optimistic. main bhi hoon. par hamesha nahi ho paata.aur aapne jo bhi likha usmekuch galat nahi hai.

N once again bahut bahut shukriya hamari kavita pasand karne k liye...

Thanx a lot Neel

OMG Kapil ... it seems tht u vr in bad mood means Gussa vn u wrote dis...
Ur words r relly gud & its vry nyc creation as well but...

I dont agree wid u .. Pls aisa maat bolo ki aisa hoga wafa nahi hogi & etc...
Wat i belive
IF U THINK GUD IT HAPPENS GUD"
so v all r responsible for our 2morw ... hum acha sochnge to acha hoga may b im wrong ...
Im sorry .. 'coz every1 has his/her own views..
U knoe im very positive person So i also vana u 2 c vry +ive ...

Hope u dont mynd dis ...
But very well written .... but jst d diff btw ur & myn views...

Im sorry if i said anythng wrong.........

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