Mousam e ghul jo khilaa.....Mamta Bajpai

by mamta bajpai on January 31, 2011, 02:27:38 PM
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Lamhe lamhe me udaasee kee namee chhaayee hai
Chandnee me bhee kaheeN kuchh to kamee aayee hai

Mai to tanhaa hee bhalaa thaa tere kaashaane me
Jaane kyoN aaj teree yaad badee aayee hai

Sharm se surkh huaa shokh gulaabee chehraa
Baat bhoole se kaheeN meree chalee aayee hai

Mousam e ghul jo khilaa rang bahaaroN ko milaa
Lout kar baad e sabaa phir  se abhee aayee hai

Bheed me aap ne is or uthayee nazreN
Baat bantee see nazaar bigadee huyee  aayee hai

Doob kar ubhare haiN dard ke dariyaa se abhee
Or hoNthoN pe abhee halkee see haNsee aayee hai

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«Reply #1 on: January 31, 2011, 02:35:51 PM »
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Doob kar ubhare haiN dard ke dariyaa se abhee
Or hoNthoN pe abhee halkee see haNsee aayee hai


Bahut khoob khayaal likha hai aapne ... Mamta Ji !

saari ghazal ke ashaar acche bane hai ... dil se daad ! Applause Applause Applause

aise hi likhte rahen ... khush rahen ...

duaaon ke saath ... !
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«Reply #2 on: January 31, 2011, 02:43:59 PM »
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Lamhe lamhe me udaasee kee namee chhaayee hai
Chandnee me bhee kaheeN kuchh to kamee aayee hai

Mai to tanhaa hee bhalaa thaa tere kaashaane me
Jaane kyoN aaj teree yaad badee aayee hai

Sharm se surkh huaa shokh gulaabee chehraa
Baat bhoole se kaheeN meree chalee aayee hai

Mousam e ghul jo khilaa rang bahaaroN ko milaa
Lout kar baad e sabaa phir  se yaheeN aayee hai

Bheed me aap ne is or uthayee nazreN
Baat bantee hui bigadee see nazar aayee hai

Doob kar ubhare haiN dard ke dariyaa se abhee
Or hoNthoN pe abhee halkee see haNsee aayee hai

Mamta Bajpai

Bahut Bahut Khoob Mamtaji.. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #3 on: January 31, 2011, 05:05:22 PM »
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Mamtaa Jee aadaab O tasleemaat!

Kia khoob kalaam se nawaaza hai Mamtaa Sahibaa aapne..
Sabhi ashaar behad khoob rahe.....

Hume aakhari dono ashaar sabse umdaa lage dil se daad O mubarakbaad kabool farmaiye.... Usual Smile

Aise hi umdaa kalaamoN se bazm ko roshan kariye..
Hum to parwaane hai roshni se khiNche chale aayeNge.. Usual Smile

Bus aik baat kaheNge aap jaisi sukhanwar se hume aise galati hone ka andaaza na tha....
Jo aapne 5th ashaar meiN kafiyaa hi change kar diyaa..icon_scratch

Khair humse kayiN baar hua hai Winking
Likhati rahiye...
Khush O aabaad rahiye..
khuda Hafez..... Usual Smile           

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«Reply #4 on: February 01, 2011, 05:34:50 AM »
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Jee Parwaaz jee aap ne bilkul theek hee likhaa hai...
ghaltee to hum se hui or use sudhaar bhee liyaa ....
jaldbaazee me hee aisaa huaa...
shukriyaa aap kee painee nazroN kaa ....
jinhoNne humaaree bhool ko dekh kar hume aagaah kiyaa...
iske alaawah bhee ek or ghalatee hui thi jo sudharee jaa chukee hai...
bahut bahut shukriyaa Parwaaz jee!
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«Reply #5 on: February 01, 2011, 05:36:47 AM »
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Bahut bahut dhanyawaad Khwaish jee!
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«Reply #6 on: February 01, 2011, 05:38:00 AM »
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Shukriyaa Naresh jee!
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«Reply #7 on: February 01, 2011, 11:09:58 AM »
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bht khoob mamta ji....
sply lasst one...
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«Reply #8 on: February 01, 2011, 01:18:29 PM »
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Shukriyaa Manzil e ishq jee!
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«Reply #9 on: February 01, 2011, 08:35:00 PM »
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Bohat Hi Khoob Mamta Ji
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«Reply #10 on: February 01, 2011, 11:24:46 PM »
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Lajawab peshkash Mamta ji hamesha ki tarah bahut khoob.hats off icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #11 on: February 02, 2011, 05:33:24 AM »
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bahut khub mamtaji... umda hai bahut

daad.....

 Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #12 on: February 02, 2011, 06:40:50 AM »
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Shukriyaa Madhu jee! yuN hee aap kaa preranaa bharaa saat miltaa rahe.....
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«Reply #13 on: February 02, 2011, 06:46:10 AM »
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kya bat kahi mamta dii

bahut khoob...

dher saarii daaad..



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«Reply #14 on: February 03, 2011, 04:25:22 PM »
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Bahut Khub Mamta Ji
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