~*~ Mujhe bhi yeh dawa diya karo ~*~ by Rahim

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Hui badi zalim yeh mohobat,
Ab thorri thorri kiya karo..

Gehre zakhm mere bahaut dard dete hai,
Zara ahiste ahiste siya karo..

Badan ko lahu chahiye zinda rehne kay liye,
Kay thorra thorra piya karo..

Ab sahe nahin jate mujse yeh sitam tumhare,
Kay ab thorre kam kam diya karo..

Labon se choo kar ajnabion ko apna bana leti ho,
Yeh dawa thorri thorri ‘Khamosh’ ko bhi diya karo..

~..Rahim..~..A Silent Heart..~
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«Reply #1 on: January 31, 2011, 05:56:56 AM »
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achha hai--
isko padhne ke baad wo gaana yaad aa gay .
shayd aap bhi jante hai uss gaane ko.
jhakash hai ji ye sing aapka
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«Reply #2 on: January 31, 2011, 10:22:02 AM »
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wah re bhai Usual Smile
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«Reply #3 on: January 31, 2011, 12:14:54 PM »
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achha hai--
isko padhne ke baad wo gaana yaad aa gay .
shayd aap bhi jante hai uss gaane ko.
jhakash hai ji ye sing aapka
Yeh nazm ek ghazal sunkar likhi thi maine..
'sharab mehengi hogayi hai, thorri kam kam piya karo..'
teh teh dil se shukriya Nirala jee..
Khush rahiye..!
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«Reply #4 on: January 31, 2011, 12:16:06 PM »
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wah re bhai Usual Smile
Shukriya bhai..
Khush rahiye..!
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«Reply #5 on: January 31, 2011, 12:48:51 PM »
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haan mene ussi ghazal ki baat kahi hai Usual Smile
aapka bhi na bas jawaab nahi
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«Reply #6 on: January 31, 2011, 03:20:04 PM »
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haan mene ussi ghazal ki baat kahi hai Usual Smile
aapka bhi na bas jawaab nahi
I will take that as a compliment..!
Khush rahiye..!
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«Reply #7 on: January 31, 2011, 04:02:19 PM »
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Bahut khoob rahim...
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«Reply #8 on: January 31, 2011, 05:26:20 PM »
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badhiya hai ji badhiya......Rahim-bhai..... Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

Yu naa behka karo tum ay dost bhari mehfil mai
Yaar mere tum sharaab thodi-thodi peeyaa karo..

Dukho-gam se bhare nagme tum naa gun-gunaayaa karo 
Laboun par muskaan bhi tum thodi-thodi laayaa karo




Hui badi zalim yeh mohobat,
Ab thorri thorri kiya karo..

Gehre zakhm mere bahaut dard dete hai,
Zara ahiste ahiste siya karo..

Badan ko lahu chahiye zinda rehne kay liye,
Kay thorra thorra piya karo..

Ab sahe nahin jate mujse yeh sitam tumhare,
Kay ab thorre kam kam diya karo..

Labon se choo kar ajnabion ko apna bana leti ho,
Yeh dawa thorri thorri ‘Khamosh’ ko bhi diya karo..

~..Rahim..~..A Silent Heart..~
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«Reply #9 on: January 31, 2011, 07:10:33 PM »
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Bahut khoob rahim...
Shukriya shukriya Geet di..
Khush rahiye..!
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«Reply #10 on: January 31, 2011, 07:17:03 PM »
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badhiya hai ji badhiya......Rahim-bhai..... Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

Yu naa behka karo tum ay dost bhari mehfil mai
Yaar mere tum sharaab thodi-thodi peeyaa karo..

Dukho-gam se bhare nagme tum naa gun-gunaayaa karo 
Laboun par muskaan bhi tum thodi-thodi laayaa karo




Shukriya shukriya Anaam di..
Kya khoob lines hai..
Apki akhri do lines se ek shaer yaad agaya..

Kuch tu hee mere dard mafhoom samaj le Faraz,
Hansta hua chehra toh zamane kay liye hai..!

Khush rahiye..!
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«Reply #11 on: January 31, 2011, 07:29:23 PM »
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Hui badi zalim yeh mohobat,
Ab thorri thorri kiya karo..

Gehre zakhm mere bahaut dard dete hai,
Zara ahiste ahiste siya karo..

Badan ko lahu chahiye zinda rehne kay liye,
Kay thorra thorra piya karo..

Ab sahe nahin jate mujse yeh sitam tumhare,
Kay ab thorre kam kam diya karo..

Labon se choo kar ajnabion ko apna bana leti ho,
Yeh dawa thorri thorri ‘Khamosh’ ko bhi diya karo..

~..Rahim..~..A Silent Heart..~

Good One .......... !!!!!!!!!!!
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«Reply #12 on: January 31, 2011, 07:49:15 PM »
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Good One .......... !!!!!!!!!!!
Shukriya jee..
Khush rahiye..!
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«Reply #13 on: January 31, 2011, 11:36:50 PM »
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Kya Baat Hai Rahim Bhai
Kafi Nikhar Aaya Aapki Likhawat Men
Bahut Khub Mere Bhai...

ALLAH Pak Aapko Shad o Aabad Rakhe Aameen...

Khush Rqahiye...

~Shihab~
Teh teh dil se shukriya Shihab bhai..
Sunkar acha laga apki likhayi kay bare main..
koshish jari hai aur acha likhne ki..
Khush rahiye..!
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«Reply #14 on: February 03, 2011, 12:09:16 PM »
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Bahut Khub Rahim JI
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