Musaafir (NM)

by vb on November 26, 2010, 03:24:51 PM
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«Reply #1 on: November 26, 2010, 03:57:41 PM »
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Excellent short poem from ur side VB ji.
 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

Ek raat k mere shaher me musafir ho tum
Kal chhod k tanha tum akele chale jaoge

Dard dekar apne pyaar ka mere dil me
Mujhe fir  ruswa zamane me kar jaoge

Kya kahun tumhe apne gum o dard ki kahani
Tumse mile dard kya kabhi tum sun paoge

Rehne do na chhedo mere dard me dubi daastaan
Kuch keh diya maine to mere sath tum bhi ashk bahaoge...!!!
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«Reply #2 on: November 26, 2010, 04:02:52 PM »
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ufffff Kasak----ek aur kharanaak or karara or bhot khubsurat jawabi hamla..
jis chij ki kami mene feel kari thi wo aapne Kya khoob puri kar di....
hats off to u KASAK wo bhi dil ki Usual Smile
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«Reply #3 on: November 26, 2010, 04:15:19 PM »
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vb ji aapki peshkas umda h issliye to uska jawab khasamkhas aya:)
likhte rahiye Boss...hume padhne ka anand lene dijiye
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«Reply #4 on: November 26, 2010, 04:29:41 PM »
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sahi kaha KB ji VB ji ka likha aisa hota hai k hum cntrl me nahin rehte....bas likhna hi padta hai.....

shukriya VB ji pasand karne aur sher  me jawab dene k liye...hume ye ahcha laga

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main ujaale ki roshan hoti pehli kiran hun, sun mere humdum
na aana mere kareeb k kahin na tere dil k andheron ko durr kar dun...
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«Reply #5 on: November 26, 2010, 05:38:47 PM »
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uss hawa ke jhoke se kaise bache koi,
jo shama ko bujhane pr hi amaada ho....
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«Reply #6 on: November 27, 2010, 08:24:47 AM »
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wah, kya khayaal hai vb ji.
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«Reply #7 on: November 27, 2010, 08:43:23 AM »
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chhote pack me dhamaka...khoob he vb ji~
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«Reply #8 on: November 27, 2010, 10:00:30 AM »
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shama jo bujh jaye fir
      kya hoga parwane ka!!
roshan-e-shama per hi to
      parwane marte hain !!!!
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«Reply #9 on: November 27, 2010, 10:25:55 AM »
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wahhhhhhhhh kya baat hai........

shama aur parwane ka ,kahan ik duje bin gujara hai
jahan jalti hai shama,wahin parwane ko luut jana hai...
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«Reply #10 on: November 27, 2010, 10:39:15 AM »
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aisa nahin hai....

shama tokisi mehfil ko roshan karne khudko jalati hai
usse jalta dekh parwane ki jaan khud b khud nikal jati hai
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«Reply #11 on: November 27, 2010, 10:48:13 AM »
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waahhhhhh

andheron ko dur karne ka shauk rakhri hai wo
khudko jalakar har taraf ujala karti hai wo
uski isi adaa pe mar mitte hain parwane uss par
unki tadap mitane ko unhe apni aagosh me sulati hai wo
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«Reply #12 on: November 27, 2010, 10:50:02 AM »
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Quote from: vb on November 26, 2010, 03:24:51 PM

Ik jhalak ho sakay tu mujh ko dikha
Mujh say ashkon ki haqiqat na chhupa
Apnay seenay ka har ik raaz bataa
Main teray sheher ka musaafir hoon
Raat thehroon ga,
Chalaa jaaoon ga...



Bahut Khoob vb Ji

Musafiron ka kya thikaana
Inse kabhi dil na lagaana
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«Reply #13 on: November 27, 2010, 10:51:51 AM »
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ahaaa

maut to hai aasaan si shai aani hai kabhi na kabhi
kya achcha hota teri agosh me ye zindagi guzar jati...
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«Reply #14 on: November 27, 2010, 11:27:14 AM »
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zabardast likha hai VB ji.....

Janti hun tum musafir ho ek din to chale jaoge
Muh ferkar ye dil todkar fir laut k bhi na aaoge
Geeton k anmol tohfe tum is mehfil me bikher jaoge

Ankahe adhure afsaane hamare kabhi to gungunaoge
Chhupaye jo raaz tumne kabhi to khudko sunaoge
Akele jab baithoge kuch soch k dheere se muskuraoge

Fir jhatak k dimag me hulchal machata khyaal
Tum  anayaas hi uthke kahin jane ko mud jaoge
Jao kahin bhi,dekh lena,laut k yahin fir tum aaoge…
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