Na Mil Payegi Manzil

by riyaz106 on March 10, 2010, 05:44:45 PM
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GHAZAL

Ghayal hue hum bhi wo kaha.n dekh raha hai
Bas apne hi zakhmon ke nisha.n dekh raha hai

Us shakhs ko ulfat mein na mil payegi manzil
Is raah mein jo sood-o-ziya.n dekh raha hai            Sood-o-ziyan = Profit & Loss

Khushiyon ne diye dokhe use itne ke wo ab
Har simt fazaaon mein khizaa.n dekh raha hai

Afsos hai too apne usoolon ko bhulaa kar
Ghairon ke tareeqon mein amaa.n dekh raha hai     Amaan = Safety

Ladte hue firqon mein sulah usne karaai                  Firqon  = Groups
Ab jaltaa hua apna makaa.n dekh raha hai

Riyaz “Ashna”

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«Reply #1 on: March 10, 2010, 05:48:13 PM »
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Bohot bohot khoob Riyaz Ji..behad khoobsurat ghazal..  Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #2 on: March 10, 2010, 05:49:44 PM »
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KAMAAL KA LIKHA  HAI            
KALAM TOD KE LIKHA HAI.

RIYAZ JI. Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #3 on: March 10, 2010, 05:53:20 PM »
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Bahut bahut shukriya Talat ji ke aapko meri ghazal pasand aai.
Bohot bohot khoob Riyaz Ji..behad khoobsurat ghazal..  Applause Applause Applause

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«Reply #4 on: March 10, 2010, 05:58:42 PM »
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Suresh ji aapka behad shukriya hausla afzai aur ghazal pasand karne ke liye.
KAMAAL KA LIKHA  HAI             
KALAM TOD KE LIKHA HAI.

RIYAZ JI. Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #5 on: March 11, 2010, 02:30:24 PM »
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«Reply #6 on: March 11, 2010, 03:48:54 PM »
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Subhaan Allah

achcha likha hai,,, Applause Applause Applause Applause

Mere dil ko choliya hai Is kalam ne,
Aapko Kushnodi mile har maqaam me,,
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«Reply #7 on: March 11, 2010, 04:15:49 PM »
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GHAZAL

Ghayal hue hum bhi wo kaha.n dekh raha hai
Bas apne hi zakhmon ke nisha.n dekh raha hai

Us shakhs ko ulfat mein na mil payegi manzil
Is raah mein jo sood-o-ziya.n dekh raha hai            Sood-o-ziyan = Profit & Loss

Khushiyon ne diye dokhe use itne ke wo ab
Har simt fazaaon mein khizaa.n dekh raha hai

Afsos hai too apne usoolon ko bhulaa kar
Ghairon ke tareeqon mein amaa.n dekh raha hai     Amaan = Safety

Ladte hue firqon mein sulah usne karaai                  Firqon  = Groups
Ab jaltaa hua apna makaa.n dekh raha hai

Riyaz “Ashna”


Riyaz sahab aapki ghazal itni khubshurat hai ki kuchh kahne ko man ho raha hai. Aap ke is kalam ke naam ek sher arz karrta hun jo aap ki ghazal dekhne ke baad jehan mein aaya hai..

Sabnam hai pankhudi ka ye kaale gulab ke,
Maathe se jo tapka hai shab-e-mahtaab ke.

 
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«Reply #8 on: March 11, 2010, 05:50:14 PM »
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Bahut Bahut Khoob Riyaz Bhai Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Aakhri Sher To bahut Hi khoobsurat Hai Thumbs UP!!!
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«Reply #9 on: March 11, 2010, 08:15:16 PM »
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Dear guest Khushi ji aur mere humnaam Riyaz ji, aapka bahut bahut shukriya ghazal pasand farmane ke liye.
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«Reply #10 on: March 12, 2010, 08:59:49 AM »
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Pandey sahab aapka dher sara shukria. Karam nawazish. Aapne bada hi khoobsurat sher ataa kiya hai.
Riyaz sahab aapki ghazal itni khubshurat hai ki kuchh kahne ko man ho raha hai. Aap ke is kalam ke naam ek sher arz karrta hun jo aap ki ghazal dekhne ke baad jehan mein aaya hai..

Sabnam hai pankhudi ka ye kaale gulab ke,
Maathe se jo tapka hai shab-e-mahtaab ke.

 
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«Reply #11 on: March 12, 2010, 10:45:02 AM »
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Shihab Bhai aapka bahut bahut shukriya ke aapne ye ghazal pasand farmai aur muhabbat se nawaza. Aage bhi aapki nazre inayat ki ummeed ragegi.
Bahut Umda Ghazal Hai Riyaz Bhai
Par Yeh Sher Bahut Achhey Lage Mujhey
Bahut Khub.....


Khush Rahiye....


~Shihab~

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«Reply #12 on: March 12, 2010, 12:26:04 PM »
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Khwaish ji aapka dil se behad shukriya ke aapko meri ye ghazal pasand aai.
Bahut Bahut Khoob Riyaz Bhai Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Aakhri Sher To bahut Hi khoobsurat Hai Thumbs UP!!!

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«Reply #13 on: March 12, 2010, 12:36:50 PM »
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Bahut Sundar Ghazal hai Riyaz Ji
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«Reply #14 on: March 12, 2010, 12:49:26 PM »
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Rajesh ji ye aapki zarranawazi. Aapka behad shukriya ke ye ghazal aapko pasand aai
Bahut Sundar Ghazal hai Riyaz Ji
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