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by Talat on September 17, 2004, 12:18:49 AM
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Hi! Iam a new member:)  Main khud to shairi bahot kam karti hoon par parhne ka behad shauq hai. Kaafi dino se yahan ki shairi parh rahi hoon. Sab bahut achcha likhte hain. Kuch naam to apne se lagne lage hain...Pooja, Nisheta, Tosha, Mateen, Waheed, Sanju, Samnoj...... Ricky thore kam nazar aate hain..

Ek sher hai jo bahut pasand hai mujhe..

Parindon ko manzil milegi yaqinan,
Yeh phaile hue unke par bolte hain,
Wahi log rehte hain khamosh aksar,
zamane main jinke hunar bolte hain. (NM)
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«Reply #1 on: September 17, 2004, 01:48:35 AM »
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its a pleasure to have u here Talat...!

aap ko yaha sab ki shayari aur andaz pasand aaya aap ka bahut bahut shukarya...!
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«Reply #2 on: September 17, 2004, 01:50:17 AM »
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Thanks Tosha..
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«Reply #3 on: September 17, 2004, 09:04:19 AM »
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wah!!! bahoot khoob Talat and Thanks Talat:).

"""Wahi log rehte hain khamosh aksar,
zamane main jinke hunar bolte hain"""
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«Reply #4 on: September 17, 2004, 01:27:08 PM »
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nice wording talat.....................bahot khoob.....
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«Reply #5 on: September 17, 2004, 01:28:37 PM »
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Nazar Nazar Mai Bhi Bahot Farq Hota Hai,
Jo Apne Aap Mai Gum Hain Woh Kia Talash Kerain ?
Chalo Ke Sabr Ki Sari Hadon Ko Choo Ayain,
Chalo Ke Dukh Ki Koi Inteha Talash Kerain !
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«Reply #6 on: September 17, 2004, 01:40:41 PM »
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wah!!!! nice Waheed_rose
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«Reply #7 on: September 17, 2004, 01:44:34 PM »
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Wah! Waheed bahut khoob!!!

Khushhaal se tum lagte ho
Yoon afsurda to hum bhi nahin
Par janne wale jante hain
Khush tum bhi nahin
Khush hum bhi nahin!! (NM)
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«Reply #8 on: September 17, 2004, 01:52:54 PM »
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thanx pooja....talat........

ek akhari sher aap sabhi logon ke liye................uske baad good day pooja ke liye and good night talat ke liye......

Tumhare shehr ka mausam bara sohana lage
Main aik shaam chura loon agar bura na lage
Na jane kiya hai kisi ki udaas aankhoon mein
Woh moon chhupa ke bhi jaye to bewafa na lage
Tumhare bas mein agar ho to bhool jao hamein
Tumhein bhulane mein shayad hamein zamana lage.......
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«Reply #9 on: September 17, 2004, 03:13:12 PM »
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Wah bahut achchhe! talat!
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«Reply #10 on: September 18, 2004, 08:25:41 AM »
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Bahut shukriya Arunji..

Wah! Waheed..bahut khoobsurat likha hai...

Meri zindagi ke nisaab main,
Wo jo raqm tha ek baab main,
Chalo aaj usko bhula hi dain,
Yeh harf-e-ghalat bhi mita hi den,
Jab mita diya wahi ek sabaq,
No khabar hui dil-e-na khalaf,
Ki bemaane hue hain sabhi haraf,
Umr-e-rafta ki sunhari kitaab main,
Alfaaz ke be ant hisaab main,
Wahi ek lafz intesaab tha,
Wo ek naam..
Laazmi baab tha!!!  (NM)

>>>Nisaab=Kitaab
       Raqm=likha hua
       Baab=Chapter
       Haraf=Letters
       Intesaab=Maujood
       Laazmi=Zaroori
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«Reply #11 on: September 19, 2004, 03:11:00 AM »
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Thanx Pooja......Talat....and good one Talat....

thakan paaun main naghmon mein ghutan jab bhi zara aayi
liya kaanon mein chupke se kisi ne tera naam akser......
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«Reply #12 on: September 23, 2004, 12:11:16 AM »
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NIce one....

Na jaane kyon bacha rakhen hain ansoo
Abhi shayad mujhe rona bohot hai!!
Ye ankain aur kya dekhen kisi ko
In ankhon ne tujhe dekha bohot hai!!
Na milne ki kasam kha ke bhi maine
Tujhe har raah main dhoonda bohot hai!!
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«Reply #13 on: September 23, 2004, 04:24:10 AM »
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Nice All!!
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«Reply #14 on: September 24, 2004, 07:38:17 AM »
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nice talat..............

Kuch Bhi Kar Lo, Zamanay Say Chupla Lo
Ayena Hoon Main Tumhara, Bacha Lo Mujh Ko.........
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