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by priyanka.jasmine on April 08, 2010, 12:04:48 PM
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Purani manzil adhuri reh gayi

Nayi manzil ki talash kya kare

Savera hokar bhi zindagi me andhera cha gayi

Ansu mitane ki koshish kya kare
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«Reply #1 on: April 08, 2010, 12:15:45 PM »
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Bahot achhi koshish ki hai Priyanka ji. Keep writing.
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«Reply #2 on: April 08, 2010, 05:51:22 PM »
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Bahut khoob likha hai Priyanka ji aapne...

har kashti ko saahil nahi milti,
suraj ko kabhi chandni nahi milti,
raat k baad subah aa to jaata hai magar,
har subah yun roshan nahi milti...
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«Reply #3 on: April 08, 2010, 06:04:58 PM »
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Purani manzil adhuri reh gayi

Nayi manzil ki talash kya kare

Savera hokar bhi zindagi me andhera cha gayi

Ansu mitane ki koshish kya kare


arey bahut hi khoob priyanka ji... bahut hi khoob...

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«Reply #4 on: April 08, 2010, 06:05:33 PM »
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Bahut khoob likha hai Priyanka ji aapne...

har kashti ko saahil nahi milti,
suraj ko kabhi chandni nahi milti,
raat k baad subah aa to jaata hai magar,
har subah yun roshan nahi milti...


wah wah wah klaskar ji.. wah

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«Reply #5 on: April 08, 2010, 06:10:08 PM »
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HAR SUBAH KOH ROSHNI JARUR MILTI HAI
BAGOH MEH BAHAR JARUR MILTI HAI
DUKH KEY BAAD TOH SUKH HI HAI
SUKH MEH HI DOSTI JARUR KHILTI HAI....



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«Reply #7 on: April 09, 2010, 02:10:58 AM »
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manjile mukam
lalsa ne kar diya inka haal behaal

ek ke baad ek manjil pane gujar di jindagi jamane ne
per koi manjil thikana ban na saki
hokar wah apni rah na saki
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«Reply #8 on: April 09, 2010, 06:35:46 AM »
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Purani manzil adhuri reh gayi

Nayi manzil ki talash kya kare

Savera hokar bhi zindagi me andhera cha gayi

Ansu mitane ki koshish kya kare

Good one Priyanka JI
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«Reply #9 on: April 09, 2010, 06:36:25 AM »
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Bahut khoob likha hai Priyanka ji aapne...

har kashti ko saahil nahi milti,
suraj ko kabhi chandni nahi milti,
raat k baad subah aa to jaata hai magar,
har subah yun roshan nahi milti...

Nice response Kapil Ji
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«Reply #10 on: April 09, 2010, 12:33:26 PM »
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Bahut bahut shukriya Rajesh ji...!!!

Nice response Kapil Ji
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Bahut bahut shukriya Jasbir ji...!!!


wah wah wah klaskar ji.. wah

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«Reply #12 on: April 09, 2010, 12:38:41 PM »
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Bahut khoob Jasbir ji...!!!



HAR SUBAH KOH ROSHNI JARUR MILTI HAI
BAGOH MEH BAHAR JARUR MILTI HAI
DUKH KEY BAAD TOH SUKH HI HAI
SUKH MEH HI DOSTI JARUR KHILTI HAI....



JASBIR SINGH


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