-----/// Naa rahe hum ///----- Hriday

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rukh hawaaon kaa aisaa thaa, apne hi safar ke naa rahe hum
rishtaa  apno  ne aisaa todaa , apne hi ghar ke naa rahe hum

naa  milaa  saahil ,  naa mili kashti , majdhaar me hi rahe hum
kiyaa  logo  ne  begaanaa , apne  hi shahar  ke naa rahe hum

apni  parchhaayi  ko  bhi  kabhi sukuun  naa mil sakaa humse
koi manzil hi nahi apni, kahin  bhi   thahar   ke  naa rahe hum

kaun apnaa hai yahaan  hamaaraa ,  kiske   hum   paas  rahen
kaun  soche   apne  baare   me , kisi  ke fikar ke naa rahe hum

chaahat  me  khud  ko  neelaam kar ke bhi  dekh  liyaa humne
naa rahe kabhi  idhar  ke , aur  kabhi udhar  ke naa  rahe hum


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«Reply #1 on: October 31, 2012, 01:18:48 PM »
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rukh hawaaon kaa aisaa thaa, apne hi safar ke naa rahe hum
rishtaa  apno  ne aisaa todaa, apne hi ghar ke naa rahe hum

naa  milaa  saahil ,  naa mili kashti, majdhaar me hi rahe hum
kiyaa  logo  ne  begaanaa , apne hi shahar ke naa rahe hum

apni parchhaayi ko bhi kabhi sukuun naa mil sakaa humse
koi manzil hi nahi apni, kahin bhi thahar ke naa rahe hum

kaun apnaa hai yahaan hamaaraa, kiske hum paas rahen
kaun soche apne baare me, kisi ke fikar ke naa rahe hum

chaahat me khud ko neelaam kar ke bhi dekh liyaa humne
naa rahe kabhi idhar ke, aur kabhi udhar ke naa rahe hum


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«Reply #2 on: October 31, 2012, 01:59:24 PM »
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Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
 bahut achchaa likhaa hai Kapil bhaai
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«Reply #3 on: October 31, 2012, 02:37:10 PM »
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 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

bahut khoob likha hai hridayji apko dheron daad
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«Reply #4 on: October 31, 2012, 02:38:35 PM »
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waah waah waah bahut khoob
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«Reply #5 on: October 31, 2012, 05:23:17 PM »
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beautiful lines Hriday ji.. Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #6 on: October 31, 2012, 06:42:25 PM »
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Behatreen lazwab creation Hirday ji ........
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«Reply #7 on: October 31, 2012, 10:04:28 PM »
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bahut khubb ahut hi umda creation kp bhai hamesha ki tarah umda....

 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #8 on: October 31, 2012, 11:39:55 PM »
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haaledil keh diya aapne kp...... mastam mast dil ko chhukar nikle shabd hain..... heart touching post
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«Reply #9 on: November 01, 2012, 06:19:08 AM »
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bahut khoob Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #10 on: November 28, 2012, 08:47:18 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriyaaa Adil ji....!!!

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«Reply #11 on: November 30, 2012, 07:05:40 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriyaaa bhai...!!!

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«Reply #12 on: November 30, 2012, 09:38:30 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriyaaa Aqsh ji....!!!

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«Reply #13 on: December 04, 2012, 05:46:39 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriyaa Saini ji....!!!

waah waah waah bahut khoob
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«Reply #14 on: December 05, 2012, 07:55:19 PM »
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Thanks a lot Nishi ji....!!!

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