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Nazm se din gazal see raateN hain
pyaar kee ye haseeN sougaateN hain
chaaNd taare kyaa tod paayaa koi
ye jo duniyaa hai sirf baateN haiN
tirchhee nazareN haiN or adaa saadaa
dekhiye gaharee inkee ghaateN haiN
apnee hee bandishoN ma qaid haiN sab
jitanee bhee aadamee kee zaateN haiN
meraa maasoom dil hai tanhaa sanam
har taraf zulm kee bisaateN haiN
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«Reply #1 on: July 13, 2011, 06:18:55 PM » |
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bahut khub mamataji..
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«Reply #3 on: July 14, 2011, 04:30:08 AM » |
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mamta ji
gazab ki shayri hai aapke
bahut bahut mubarakbaad
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«Reply #4 on: July 14, 2011, 05:56:37 AM » |
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«Reply #5 on: July 14, 2011, 11:14:49 AM » |
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Mamta ji
mai to apko mureed hu. kisi din apki kalam na chura lu.
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«Reply #6 on: July 14, 2011, 01:35:29 PM » |
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Shukriyaa mkv jee!!!aap ke jazbaatoN kee mai dil se qadra kartee hooN.....par mujhe zameen par hee rahne deN.......aise comment paRh kar koun hai jo magroor naa hogaa.....itanaa maan or pyaar dene kaa behad shukriyaa.....
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«Reply #7 on: July 14, 2011, 02:11:12 PM » |
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acha likha h mamta ji..
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«Reply #8 on: July 14, 2011, 05:06:10 PM » |
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bahut bahut shukriyaa Geet jee!
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«Reply #9 on: July 15, 2011, 05:23:55 PM » |
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Shukriyaa Dr saheb! aap jaise sukhanvar or adabshanash jab kisee ko bhee saraahate hai to uskaa likhnaa saarthak ho jaataa hai........
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«Reply #10 on: July 15, 2011, 05:24:40 PM » |
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shukriyaa khujali jee!
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«Reply #11 on: July 15, 2011, 05:25:38 PM » |
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bahut bahut shukriyaa GUMboy !
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«Reply #14 on: December 24, 2011, 05:36:41 AM » |
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deri ke liye kshmaa chaahate hue aap kaa bahut bahut shukriyaa Khwaish jee ! aap ne hameshaa hee meraa housla baRhaayaa hai...
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